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Tammy

May 14, 2025

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A Video of Last Hike

I made a video of my hike on Saturday because I want to show you the views along the trail.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NttzIm10Fe8

It's a little bit too long. But I just don't want to cut it short.

I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.

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A Video of Last Hike

or:
A Video of My Last Hike

I made a video of my hike on Saturday because I want to show you the views along the trail.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NttzIm10Fe8 It's a little bit too long.

BIt's a little bit long, but I just don't want to cut it short.

It’s more natural to combine these sentences.

I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.

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I like it. The green leaves quaking in the breeze really evoke a feeling of summer for me.

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Tammy

May 15, 2025

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Thank you!

Yes, the summer is coming to Eastern China.

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JoeTofu

May 15, 2025

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Update: I rephrased my comment to make it more clear. :-)

A Video of My Last Hike

I made a video of my hike on Saturday because I wanted to show you the views along the trail.

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Keep it up!

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Tammy

May 14, 2025

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Thank you!

Have a nice day!

A Video of Last Hike


A Video of My Last Hike

A Video of Last Hike

or: A Video of My Last Hike

I made a video of my hike on Saturday because I want to show you the views along the trail.


I made a video of my hike on Saturday because I wanted to show you the views along the trail.

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You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NttzIm10Fe8 It's a little bit too long.


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But I just don't want to cut it short.


BIt's a little bit long, but I just don't want to cut it short.

It’s more natural to combine these sentences.

I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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