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Tammy

Jan. 3, 2025

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had last Saturday. You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds

The image part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.

I wrote a text for the video three days ago but was not satisfied with it. Then I rewrote it yesterday.

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijacking people's attention from the images.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

我终于完成了一个关于上周六整个徒步旅行的视频。你可以在这里观看：https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds

画面部分并不难，但配音部分对我来说并不容易。

三天前我为视频写了一篇字幕，但并不满意。然后我昨天重写了一遍。

然而，当我给视频配音时，感觉文字太长了，最后只用了三分之一，因为我觉得如果我在视频中不停地说话，感觉就像从画面那里抢走了观看者的注意力。

像往常一样，如果你有任何问题或建议，请告诉我噢。

感谢先。

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had (or: did) last Saturday.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds The image part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.

I wrote a text for the video three days ago but was not satisfied with it.

Then I rewrote it yesterday.

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I could just used 1/3 of it, because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it fwould feelt like I was hijacking people's attention from the images.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

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The video is beautiful 😻

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Tammy

Jan. 5, 2025

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Thank you!

Have a nice weekend!

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JoeTofu

Jan. 5, 2025

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For the fourth sentence, I thought of a way of correcting it that’s closer to your original, so I revised my correction.

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Tammy

Jan. 5, 2025

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太感谢您了！

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I have finally finished aediting the video about the whole hike I had last Saturday.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds


The imagevideo part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.

I wrote a text for the video three days ago but I was not satisfied with it.

Then I rewrote it yesterday.

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long thatso I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijactaking people's attention from the imagesvideo.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had last Saturday.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds

T

Editing the image parts was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for mworking on the dubbing was a challenge.

I wrote a text for the video three days ago but/and was not satisfied with it.

Then I rewrote it yesterday.

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijackingtoo much verbiage would draw people's attention away from the images.

verbiage → 不必要的词

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

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那真是太美了。谢谢。我注意到了一些小错误，但总体含义很清楚。 It was a beautiful. Thank you. I noticed a few minor mistakes, but the overall meaning was clear.

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Tammy

Jan. 4, 2025

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谢谢您！

周末愉快！

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A Video about My Hike Last Saturday

I finally finished athe video about the whole hike I hadwent on last Saturday.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds


The imagevideo part was not difficult, but the dubbing part/voiceover was not easy for me.

I wrote a texscript for the video three days ago but was not satisfied with it.

Then I rewrote it yesterday.

However, when I dubbrecorded the videaudio, I noticed the texscript was stoo long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt likeand I ended up using only about a third of it. I felt that if I talked too much, it would hijacking people's attention from the imagesview.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

Thanks in advance.

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Tammy

Jan. 3, 2025

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Thanks again!

Have a nice day!

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I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had last Saturday.

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I have finally finished aediting the video about the whole hike I had last Saturday.

I finally finished a video about the whole hike I had (or: did) last Saturday.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds The image part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds


The imagevideo part was not difficult, but the dubbing part/voiceover was not easy for me.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds

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Editing the image parts was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for mworking on the dubbing was a challenge.

You can watch it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nx7Rwubds


The imagevideo part was not difficult, but the dubbing part was not easy for me.

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I wrote a text for the video three days ago but was not satisfied with it.

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However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijacking people's attention from the images.

However, when I dubbrecorded the videaudio, I noticed the texscript was stoo long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt likeand I ended up using only about a third of it. I felt that if I talked too much, it would hijacking people's attention from the imagesview.

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijackingtoo much verbiage would draw people's attention away from the images.

verbiage → 不必要的词

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long thatso I just used 1/3 of it because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it felt like hijactaking people's attention from the imagesvideo.

However, when I dubbed the video, I noticed the text was so long that I could just used 1/3 of it, because I thought if I was continuously talking in the video, it fwould feelt like I was hijacking people's attention from the images.

As usual, please let me know if you have any questions or suggestions.

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