Sept. 20, 2025
A Restricted Diet
My kidney function has significantly declined, and I’m currently refrain from certan foods.
For the past 14 years, I’ve hardly been able to exercise due to the aftereffects of a rear-end collision. I believe my severe muscle loss is also related to the decline of kidny function.
腎機能が著しく低下してしまい、今食事制限をしている。ここ１４年間、追突事故の後遺症のため運動はほとんどしていない。かなり筋肉が衰えていることも関係していると思う。
A Restricted Diet
My kidney function has significantly declined, and I’m currently refraining from certain foods.
"Currently" implies the continuous tense, so you should use "refraining".
For the past 14 years, I’ve hardly been able to exercise due to the aftereffects of a rear-end collision.
"Aftereffects" is okay, but I might suggest using a hyphen: "after-effects". I think it's easier to read this way, but it's ultimately up to preference.
I believe my severe muscle lossloss in muscle function is also related to the decline of kidney function.
"Severe muscle loss" would refer to the NUMBER of muscles in your body decreasing. However, you were probably referring to the strength of your muscles.
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It seems to have happened a long time ago, but I'm still sorry to hear about your rear-end collision!
Sept. 21, 2025
Thank you for your corrections and warm comment.
OPTION A: My kidney function has significantly declined, and I’m currently recently, and am refraining from certain foods.¶
OPTION B: My kidney function has significantly declined in recent years, and refrain from certain foods.
SUGGESTION: Add a time marker such as "in recent years" or "recently" to make this more concrete and vivid.
提案: 「Recently」または「in recent years」などのタイムマーカーを追加して、これをより具体的で生き生きとしたものにします。
For the past 14 years, I’ve hardly been able to exercise due to the aftereffects of a rear-end collision.
I believe my severe muscle loss is also related to thea decline of kidney function.
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Many people over sixty face the same problems. Indeed, we are aging!
Sept. 21, 2025
Thank you！I’ve reached the age when I might soon have grandchildren.
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My kidney function has significantly declined, and I’m currently refrain from certan foods. OPTION A: My kidney function has significantly declined SUGGESTION: Add a time marker such as "in recent years" or "recently" to make this more concrete and vivid. 提案: 「Recently」または「in recent years」などのタイムマーカーを追加して、これをより具体的で生き生きとしたものにします。 My kidney function has significantly declined, and I’m currently refraining from certain foods. "Currently" implies the continuous tense, so you should use "refraining". |
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For the past 14 years, I’ve hardly been able to exercise due to the aftereffects of a rear-end collision. This sentence has been marked as perfect! For the past 14 years, I’ve hardly been able to exercise due to the aftereffects of a rear-end collision. "Aftereffects" is okay, but I might suggest using a hyphen: "after-effects". I think it's easier to read this way, but it's ultimately up to preference. |
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