May 5, 2024
It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run. After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again. Your help was very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
雨天
今早一直下雨,到11点左右才停。
我穿上跑鞋去跑步。40分钟之后有下起了雨,我不得不立马回家了。
据说,下雨天是读书天,所以我又回顾了这周的笔记和大家的修正。非常感谢大家的帮助。
谢谢!
A Rainy Day
A rainy day- no need to capitalise every word
It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again.
Your help wais very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
A Rainy Day
It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock/11 AM/11:00.
There are many ways to write 11:00. Depending on where you are, you can write the time differently. In the United States, you can write it as 11 o'clock or 11:00 AM. I'm unsure for other English-speaking countries that use the 24 hour system instead of the 12 hour system.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again.
I made your corrections to use a more inclusive pronoun.
Your help was very muchI would appreciate your help./Your help is appreciated.
I changed your sentence to use an active voice. You can use a passive voice for your sentence, but use it sparingly.
Thank you so much!
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Hope you had fun in your run despite the rain.
A Rainy Day
It started raineding this morning and stopped at around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately.
I think 40 minutes doesn't count as "immediately"; immediately makes me think that it started raining once you left your house, lol
It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again.
Your help wais very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
Feedback
I'm glad you're so dedicated to your hobbies!
A Rainy Day
It started raineding this morning and then it stopped at around 11 o'clock.
I put on my running shoes and went for a run.
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go backreturn home immediately.
Your help wais very much appreciated.
Thank you so much!
A Rainy Day A Rainy Day A rainy day- no need to capitalise every word
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It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock. It started rain It started rain It rained this morning and stopped around 11 o'clock/11 AM/11:00. There are many ways to write 11:00. Depending on where you are, you can write the time differently. In the United States, you can write it as 11 o'clock or 11:00 AM. I'm unsure for other English-speaking countries that use the 24 hour system instead of the 12 hour system.
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I put on my running shoes and went for a run. |
After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home immediately. After 40 minutes, it started raining again, so I had to go back home I think 40 minutes doesn't count as "immediately"; immediately makes me think that it started raining once you left your house, lol
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It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your guys' corrections this week again. It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your It's said that a rainy day is a good day to learn something, so I reviewed my entries and your I made your corrections to use a more inclusive pronoun.
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Your help was very much appreciated. Your help Your help Your help
I changed your sentence to use an active voice. You can use a passive voice for your sentence, but use it sparingly.
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Thank you so much! |
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