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May 13, 2025

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A person who changed my life

a man who came to this world exactly 2000 years ago, has transformed my life and his teachings still transforming many lifes and he is still alive and alive forever. he is jesus christ. i am an indian and i'm 21 years old, till my sixteens and seventeens, i am quite rebel and stubborn. i never obeyed my parents.morever i was like an arrogant. but when i met jesus , he changed my life. i have attended a youth camp , i have no interest in that youth camp, i was forced by my university church members to attend that five day youth camp, and that is the place where i have met jesus , the lord talked with me through a message that is delivered by a god servant(pastor). and i obeyed to the word of god and the lord jesus christ changed me , my family and my relatives are shocked by seeing my behaviour which is totally opposite to my previous once, and they started questioning me like what happened to you? and i told my testimony how god changed my behaviour when i obeyed to him. he transformed my life , in my past i use to create trouble in my home and now they are seeing me like a peacemaker in my home, a life that he transformed me from troublemaker to peacemaker, thanks to the lord for everything ,he has done in my life.

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A person who changed my life

Titles in English are capitalized. A Person Who Changed My Life.

a man who came to this world exactly 2000 years ago, has transformed my life and his teachings still transforming many lifes and he is still alive and alive forever.

A man who came (capitalize A). Still transforming.

he is jesus christ.

Jesus is capitalized because it is a name.

i am an indian and i'm 21 years old, till my sixteens and seventeens, i am quite rebel and stubborn.

A person who changed my life

aA man who came to this world exactly 2000 years ago, has transformed my life and his teachings are still transforming many lifves and h. He is still alive and alive forever.

hHe is jJesus cChrist.

Names need to be in capital letters.

iI am an iIndian and i'm 21 years old, tillduring my sixteens and seventeens, i am quite rebel and stubborn.

i never obeyed my parents.m Moreover, i was like anvery arrogant.

bBut when iI met jJesus , he changed my life.

i haveI attended a youth camp , but i have no interest in that youth camp, i was forced by my university church members to attend that five day youth camp, and t. That is the place where i have met jJesus , the lord that talked with me through a message that is delivered by a god servant(pastor).

and iI obeyed to the word of god and the lord jJesus cChrist changed me , my family and my relatives are shocked by seeingwhen they saw my behaviour which is totally opposite to my previous oncein the past, and they started questioning me like w:“What happened to you?

and iI told my testimonythem how god changed my behaviour when i obeyed to him.

heHe had transformed my life , in my. In the past i, I used to create trouble in my home and now the. However, now my family are seeing me like a peacemaker in my home, a life that he transformed me from a troublemaker to a peacemaker, t. Thanks to the lord for everything ,that he has done in my life.

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A person who changed my life

Titles in English are capitalized. A Person Who Changed My Life.

a man who came to this world exactly 2000 years ago, has transformed my life and his teachings still transforming many lifes and he is still alive and alive forever.


aA man who came to this world exactly 2000 years ago, has transformed my life and his teachings are still transforming many lifves and h. He is still alive and alive forever.

a man who came to this world exactly 2000 years ago, has transformed my life and his teachings still transforming many lifes and he is still alive and alive forever.

A man who came (capitalize A). Still transforming.

he is jesus christ.


hHe is jJesus cChrist.

Names need to be in capital letters.

he is jesus christ.

Jesus is capitalized because it is a name.

i am an indian and i'm 21 years old, till my sixteens and seventeens, i am quite rebel and stubborn.


iI am an iIndian and i'm 21 years old, tillduring my sixteens and seventeens, i am quite rebel and stubborn.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

i never obeyed my parents.morever i was like an arrogant.


i never obeyed my parents.m Moreover, i was like anvery arrogant.

but when i met jesus , he changed my life.


bBut when iI met jJesus , he changed my life.

i have attended a youth camp , i have no interest in that youth camp, i was forced by my university church members to attend that five day youth camp, and that is the place where i have met jesus , the lord talked with me through a message that is delivered by a god servant(pastor).


i haveI attended a youth camp , but i have no interest in that youth camp, i was forced by my university church members to attend that five day youth camp, and t. That is the place where i have met jJesus , the lord that talked with me through a message that is delivered by a god servant(pastor).

and i obeyed to the word of god and the lord jesus christ changed me , my family and my relatives are shocked by seeing my behaviour which is totally opposite to my previous once, and they started questioning me like what happened to you?


and iI obeyed to the word of god and the lord jJesus cChrist changed me , my family and my relatives are shocked by seeingwhen they saw my behaviour which is totally opposite to my previous oncein the past, and they started questioning me like w:“What happened to you?

and i told my testimony how god changed my behaviour when i obeyed to him.


and iI told my testimonythem how god changed my behaviour when i obeyed to him.

he transformed my life , in my past i use to create trouble in my home and now they are seeing me like a peacemaker in my home, a life that he transformed me from troublemaker to peacemaker, thanks to the lord for everything ,he has done in my life.


heHe had transformed my life , in my. In the past i, I used to create trouble in my home and now the. However, now my family are seeing me like a peacemaker in my home, a life that he transformed me from a troublemaker to a peacemaker, t. Thanks to the lord for everything ,that he has done in my life.

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