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June 7, 2025

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A perfect day for me

Hi! I would like to share what´ s a perfect day for me. First, wake up at 8 a.m and go out with my dog to the park, then go home, take breakfast and prepare lunch. After work, I like to watch a good series or play videogames with friends, then go out with my family on a country restaurant and end the day having some drinks with them. I like to say I´m a home guy but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do something diferent.

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I would like to share what´ s a perfect day for me looks like.

First, I wake up at 8 a.m. and go out with my dog to the park,. I then go home, takeeat breakfast, and prepare lunch.

After work, I like to watch a good t.v. series or play video games with friends,. I then go out with my family ton a country restaurant and end the day having some drinks with them.

I like to say I´m a home guybody, but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do, I enjoy doing something different.

A perfect day for me

Hi!

I would like to share what´ s a perfect day for me is.

"What is X" is generally used for questions. In statements such as this one, I think it sounds more natural to use the construction "what X is" instead.

First, I wake up at 8 a.m. and go out withtake my dog to the park, then go home, takhave breakfast and prepare lunch.

(1) You're missing a period in "a.m.". If you don't want to use periods, you can also write "8 am".
(2) "Go out with my dog to the park" is not wrong, but "take my dog to the park" is more natural.
(3) The phrase is "have (a meal)".

After work, I like to watch a good series or play video games with friends, then go out with my family ton a countrylocal restaurant and end the day (by) having some drinks with them.

(1) "Video game" is far more common than "videogame", though both uses have been seen.
(2) The phrase is "go out to (a place)", not "go out on (a place)".
(3) I'm not sure what a "country restaurant" is. Perhaps you meant "local restaurant"?

I like to say I´'m a home gubody but when I´'m with my family and my dog iI like to do something different.

homebody: a person who likes to stay at home.

I would like to share what´ is a perfect day for me.

Sounds more natural.

First, of all I wake up at 8 a.m, and go out withtake my dog to the park,. I then gohead home, takeeat breakfast and prepare lunch.

After work, I like to watch a good series or play videogames with friends,. I then go out with my family ton a country restaurant and end the day having some drinks with them.

You need to make the sentences shorter rather than 1 long sentence.

I like to say I´m a home gubody but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do something diferent.

Home guy isn't an expression but home body is.

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Well done.

I would like to share what´ s a my perfect day for me.would be!

'me' goes to my :)

First, I will wake up at 8 a.m and go out withtake my dog to the park, then go home, takeeat breakfast and prepare lunch.

After work, I like to watch a good seriesshow I like or play video games with friends, then go out with my family ton a country restaurant in the country, and end the day by having some drinks with them.

I like to say I´'m a home guybody, but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do something diferent.

more or less correct, just 'homebody' works better than homeguy!

A perfect day for me


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I would like to share what´ s a perfect day for me.


I would like to share what´ is a perfect day for me.

Sounds more natural.

I would like to share what´ s a my perfect day for me.would be!

'me' goes to my :)

I would like to share what´ s a perfect day for me is.

"What is X" is generally used for questions. In statements such as this one, I think it sounds more natural to use the construction "what X is" instead.

I would like to share what´ s a perfect day for me looks like.

First, wake up at 8 a.m and go out with my dog to the park, then go home, take breakfast and prepare lunch.


First, of all I wake up at 8 a.m, and go out withtake my dog to the park,. I then gohead home, takeeat breakfast and prepare lunch.

First, I will wake up at 8 a.m and go out withtake my dog to the park, then go home, takeeat breakfast and prepare lunch.

First, I wake up at 8 a.m. and go out withtake my dog to the park, then go home, takhave breakfast and prepare lunch.

(1) You're missing a period in "a.m.". If you don't want to use periods, you can also write "8 am". (2) "Go out with my dog to the park" is not wrong, but "take my dog to the park" is more natural. (3) The phrase is "have (a meal)".

First, I wake up at 8 a.m. and go out with my dog to the park,. I then go home, takeeat breakfast, and prepare lunch.

After work, I like to watch a good series or play videogames with friends, then go out with my family on a country restaurant and end the day having some drinks with them.


After work, I like to watch a good series or play videogames with friends,. I then go out with my family ton a country restaurant and end the day having some drinks with them.

You need to make the sentences shorter rather than 1 long sentence.

After work, I like to watch a good seriesshow I like or play video games with friends, then go out with my family ton a country restaurant in the country, and end the day by having some drinks with them.

After work, I like to watch a good series or play video games with friends, then go out with my family ton a countrylocal restaurant and end the day (by) having some drinks with them.

(1) "Video game" is far more common than "videogame", though both uses have been seen. (2) The phrase is "go out to (a place)", not "go out on (a place)". (3) I'm not sure what a "country restaurant" is. Perhaps you meant "local restaurant"?

After work, I like to watch a good t.v. series or play video games with friends,. I then go out with my family ton a country restaurant and end the day having some drinks with them.

I like to say I´m a home guy but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do something diferent.


I like to say I´m a home gubody but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do something diferent.

Home guy isn't an expression but home body is.

I like to say I´'m a home guybody, but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do something diferent.

more or less correct, just 'homebody' works better than homeguy!

I like to say I´'m a home gubody but when I´'m with my family and my dog iI like to do something different.

homebody: a person who likes to stay at home.

I like to say I´m a home guybody, but when I´m with my family and my dog i like to do, I enjoy doing something different.

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