June 7, 2025
A part of my speech
Hey, you know what! When I was making stirred eggs with tomatoes, I smelled something burning! l looked around doubtfully. "Everything is normal, what's the matter?" l thought. Still, l kept cooking. All of a sudden, a red light flashed in my sight. The handle of the pressure cooker was being burned by the fire on the stove. I quickly moved it out of the way, but it didn't work. The handle was broken.
Can you help me make it more spoken?
Hey, you know what!?
When I was making stirr-fried eggs with tomatoes, I smelled something burning!
All of a sudden, a red light flashed in my sighteyes.
The handlfire ofn the pressure cooker was being burned by the firstove was burning the handle onf the stovepressure cooker.
Active voice (fire burning handle) has a more urgent feeling than passive voice (handle was being burned)
I quickly moved it out of the way, but it didn't work.
Meaning is a little confusing because I am not sure what 'it' is. Did moving the handle not work? Did the handle of the pressure cooker not work? Did the pressure cooker not work?
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Spoken language often has a more casual feel, but the casual feeling is subjective, so it varies a lot... This already sounds pretty good to me.
A part of my speech
Hey, you know what!
When I was making stirrctrambled eggs with tomatoes, I smelledt something burning!
l looked around doubtfullyconfused.
"Everything i's normal, what's the matter?"
Stillo, l kept cooking.
All of a sudden, a red light flashed in my sI saw a flash of red light.
The handle of the pressure cooker was being burned by the fire on the stove.
I quickly moved it out of the way, but it didn't workwas too late.
The handle was broken.
Can you help me make it more spoken?
When I was making stirrcrambled eggs with tomatoes, I smelled something burning!
l looked around doubtfullyconfused.
doubtfully doesn't make a lot of sense here
All of a sudden, a red light flashed in my line of sight.
this sounds more natural
I quickly moved it out of the way, but it didn't workwas of no use.
This sounds more natural and is more specific, "it didn't work" is unclear and a bit awkward
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Hey, you know what! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Hey, you know what |
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When I was making stirred eggs with tomatoes, I smelled something burning! When I was making s When I was making s When I was making stir |
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l looked around doubtfully. l looked around doubtfully doesn't make a lot of sense here l looked around |
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Still, l kept cooking. S |
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All of a sudden, a red light flashed in my sight. All of a sudden, a red light flashed in my line of sight. this sounds more natural All of a sudden, All of a sudden, a red light flashed in my |
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The handle of the pressure cooker was being burned by the fire on the stove. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The Active voice (fire burning handle) has a more urgent feeling than passive voice (handle was being burned) |
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I quickly moved it out of the way, but it didn't work. I quickly moved it out of the way, but it This sounds more natural and is more specific, "it didn't work" is unclear and a bit awkward I quickly moved it out of the way, but it I quickly moved it out of the way, but it didn't work. Meaning is a little confusing because I am not sure what 'it' is. Did moving the handle not work? Did the handle of the pressure cooker not work? Did the pressure cooker not work? |
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The handle was broken. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Can you help me make it more spoken? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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