A nNews about Cameroon

Elections are starting soon, and the population wishses for more security and freedom but there are many people are fighting because iof it.

InThe state of many schools and streets, it's very dangerous, and people are afraid.

There are many deads, and the peopulationle are crying.

you can also say and the Nation is crying

The police and the fightersarmy both do bad things.

I don't know what you mean by fighters

DWhat do you think about this situation ?

May be it's will be more fun for you to give your opinion with your correction 😁

A nNews about Cameroon

Elections are starting soon, and the population wishes more security and freedom, but there are many people are fighting because iof it.

In many schools and on the streets, it's very dangerous, and people are afraid.

There are many deadths, and the population areis crying.

TBoth the police and the fighters both doare doing bad things.

DWhat do you think about this situation ?

May be it'’s more fun for you to give your opinion with your corrections. 😁

A nNews about Cameroon

English does not put an indefinite article before the word "News". But, you would use the article if you are referring to "a news item" or "a news update".

The situation is currently very dangerous.

This is gramatically fine as written but I agree with another commenter who suggested that "The current situation is very dangerous" sounds a little better.

Elections are starting soon, and the population wishses for more security and freedom b. But there are tensions around the elections are also causing many people areto fighting cause if it.

You could keep this as one sentence, but it flows better for the reader when it is split into two sentences. I added some additional detail to the second sentence as a suggestion to make it clearer.

There are many deads, and the populationpeople are crying.

"The population" is a bit more formal and doesn't quite match with describing strong emotions.

The police and the fighters both do bad things.

This sentence is grammatically correct, but since you have already described the bad thing about the fighting, you could add some extra detail by saying something like: "The fighters have done bad things, but the police response is also bad."

DWhat do you think about this situation ?

May be it's more fun for you to give your opinion with your correction. 😁

The current situation is currently very dangerous.

More natural sounding.

Elections are startking place soon, and the population wishes more security and freedom. but there are many people are fighting cause if itfighting in the country is ongoing.

Elections take place rather than start, e for wishes, and the last bit sounds more natural like this.

There are many deads, and the population are cryingtraumatised.

dead is a plural too. There is no deads. trausmatised is a more approriate word.

The police and the fighters both do bad things.

Elections are starting soon, and the population wishses to have more security and freedom but there are many people who are fighting because iof it.

There are many deadths, and the population areis crying.

The police and the fighters are both doing bad things.

DWhat do you think about this situation ?

May be it's more fun for you to give your opinion with your correction 😁