A meaningful experience that changed the way I think i, was going abroad to live.

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It wasn't mya place thatwhere I belonged to.

It would be more natural to say "I didn't feel like I belonged there"

Therefore, I decided to go far away from there and figured out where my place was.

I made thetook my first trip to go abroad in my lifeabroad and it totally changed my life forever.

I've had the chance to meet and work with different people.

Every person I met giave me a specific lesson and experience that wereas valuable forto me.

One thing I've learned to, is that patience is important.

I might not the best person to doat everything, but I'mve become more patient to do it again andtry things again and again until I get used to ithem and master in itthem.

What surprised me in this progrcess iwas how difficult it was, but after that I knew that how much I enjoyed it.

This is awkwardly phrased...you could say something like, "I was surprised how difficult the process was, but in the end, I enjoyed it"

The result wasn't the most important thing, but the progress was beautiful.

I used to be shy and be scared to do everything, but now I'm more confident.

One sentence I really love is, "If you're too scared, do it scared!".

I'm proud of myself because I was so brave enough to get out of my comfort zone and becominge the type of person I admired.

Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset and; I know that I've grown a lot.

AOne meaningful experience that changed the way I think is go abroading to live abroad.

When you're introducing a *specific* case, often we say "one", instead of "a".
e.g:

"One fine morning, I woke up to find my car gone."
"One book which has helped me mentally was The Lord of the Rings"

When I was in my twenties, I thought that I had lived in my hometown for my whole life, which there areere I had my family, my friends, my everything.

It wasn't mythe place that I belonged to.

"It wasn't a place where I belonged" also works
In this expression which means "fitting in", "to" isn't needed.

I made the first trip to go abroad in my life and it totally changed my life forever.

Every person I met giave me a specific lesson and experience that were valuable for me.

"Every person I meet gives me... that is valuable to me." might also work, but they have to both be the same: both present, or both past.

One thing I've learned is thato patience is important.

I might not the best person ato doing everything, but I'm more patient toly do it again and again and again until I get used to it and master in it.

What surprised me in this progress is how difficult it was, but after that, I knew that how much I enjoyed it.

The result wasn't the most important thing, but the progress was beautiful.

I used to be shy and be scared to do everything but now I'm more confident.

No need to use "be" twice.

I'm proud of myself because I was so brave to get out of my comfort zone and becoming thee a person I admired.

"A person I admire" is usually how we say this - after all, there isn't *one* specific person you admire who you are becoming, you don't know what you're going to become!

Overall, I feel that it was a valuable experience and it helped me change my mindset, and I know that I've grown a lot.