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April 22, 2025

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A man wants to eat every animal on Earth

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth. A wish unusual isn't? but I have to according with your plan. Many peoples, have the wrong thinking about a lot of animals and your meat. Personally Im have a little disgusting about eat some few animals, for example: rabbit, I'm just not can eat this poor animal. Cat the same thing, I know that eat this animals is very ordinay in many country, but I can't do that. Guys, and about you? what dou you thinking about this? you see no problem in that, maybe preconceit unjustifiable?

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William Buckland, is the guysomeone who wants to eat every animal on eEarth.

A wishIt's unusual isn', right?

but I have to according with your plan.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinkingidea about a lot of animals and youtheir meat.

Personally, Im have a little disgust when thinking about eat someing a few animals, f. For example:, a rabbit, I'm just not can eat this poor animal.

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Laian

April 29, 2025

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Thanks!

A man who wants to eat every animal on Earth

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.

A wish which is unusual isn't?

but I have to according with yourBit this is his plan.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinkingidea about a lot of animals and your meat.

Personally Im have a little disgustinged about eat some few animals, for example: rabbit,. I'm just not cannot eat this poor animal.

Cat the same thing, I know that eat this animals is very ordinay in many country,Another example is the cat. I know that in many countries they eat the cat but I can't do that.

Guys, andwhat about you?

wWhat dou you thinking about this?

Do you see no problem in that, maybe preconceit unit is justifiabled?

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Laian

April 29, 2025

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Thanks!

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Laian

April 29, 2025

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thanks

ALSO POSSIBLE: A voracious man wantsing to eat every animal on Earth

William Buckland, is thea guy/person who wants to eat every animal on earth.

LOGIC: Will he become a cannibal who eats humans? Since humans are also animals, his desire seems misguided. Also, there are many microscopic animals - some which are parasites.

A wishThat is a unusual wish, isn't it?

but I have to according with yourHowever, I have reservations/doubts about his plan.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinking about a lot of animals and your meat.[MEANING KNOWN]

SUGGESTION: Write in your native language. The English is too garbled to decipher.

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.

A wishn unusual goal isn't it?

or you can say "weird, isn't it?"

Personally, Im have a little feel it's disgusting abouto eat some fewof these animals, f. For example:, rabbit,. I'm just not cancan't think of eating this poor animal.

Cat the same thing, I know that eat this animals is very ordinayis another example. I know that it's quite normal to consume this animal in many country, but I can't dosee myself doing that.

Guys, andwhat about you?

what dou you thinking about this?

Do you see no problem in that, maybe preconceit unjustifiablethink it's normal? Maybe you have a good reason?

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Laian

April 29, 2025

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Thanks!

A man wants to eat every animal on Earth

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.

If you want to, you could also say: “William Buckland wants to eat every animal on earth.”

AThis wish is unusual, isn'’t it?

isn’t = is not. (statement)
isn’t it = is not it?/is it not? (question)
—I hope this breakdown of the contraction explains why I changed your original sentence! I tried my best to explain! 😁

but I have to, according with your plan.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinking about a lot of animals and your meat.

“People” is already the plural form of “person,” so you don’t have to add an -s ending to “people” to make it plural. It already is! That’s why I changed “peoples” to “people”

Personally, Im have a little disgusting about eated by the thought of eating some few animals, for example: rabbit,. I'm just not can’t eat this poor animal.

CatIt is the same thing,with cats. I know that eating this animals is very ordinary in many countryies, but I can't do that.

Guys, andWhat about you guys?

wWhat dou you thinking about this?

Maybe you see no problem in that, meating all animals. Maybe my preconceitption is unjustifiable?

I changed “preconceit” to “preconception”

Although “conceit” is a word, “preconceit” is not.

To explain why I wrote “preconception”:
Concept = an idea
Conception = the process of forming an idea
Pre = before
Preconception = the process of forming an idea before you have all the correct knowledge

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I hope my feedback helped!! You did a great job getting your story across. I could understand it perfectly!!

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Laian

April 29, 2025

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Thank you so much for dedicate your time to explain me bro, I'am really happy with my confused text can someone understand haha, I learning with this corrections, many thanks!

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.

A wishn unusual wish, isn't it?

but I have to according with your plan.

I don't really know what is meant by this. Within the sentence context it doesn't fit.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinkingidea about a lot of animals and youtheir meat.

Personally, Im have a little disgusting about eating some few animals, f. For example:, when it comes to rabbit,s I'm just not cancan not eat this poor animal.

Cat tThe same thingwith cats, I know that eating this animals is very ordinary in many countryies, but I can't do that.

Guys, andWhat about you guys?

wWhat dou you thinking about this?

Do you see no problem in that, maybe preconceitor do you view it as unjustifiable?

Preconceit isn't used anymore, and it also doesn't fit well here. I changed the sentence to best reflect what I think you meant.

Feedback

Good job, just make sure to work more on sentence structure and when to add -ing or not.

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April 29, 2025

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Thanks man, you can be sure that I will make good use of these teachings, and thanks again, I didn't know that the word prejudice was no longer used.

Guys, and about you?


Guys, andWhat about you guys?

Guys, andWhat about you guys?

Guys, andwhat about you?

Guys, andwhat about you?

what dou you thinking about this?


wWhat dou you thinking about this?

wWhat dou you thinking about this?

what dou you thinking about this?

wWhat dou you thinking about this?

you see no problem in that, maybe preconceit unjustifiable?


Do you see no problem in that, maybe preconceitor do you view it as unjustifiable?

Preconceit isn't used anymore, and it also doesn't fit well here. I changed the sentence to best reflect what I think you meant.

Maybe you see no problem in that, meating all animals. Maybe my preconceitption is unjustifiable?

I changed “preconceit” to “preconception” Although “conceit” is a word, “preconceit” is not. To explain why I wrote “preconception”: Concept = an idea Conception = the process of forming an idea Pre = before Preconception = the process of forming an idea before you have all the correct knowledge

Do you see no problem in that, maybe preconceit unjustifiablethink it's normal? Maybe you have a good reason?

Do you see no problem in that, maybe preconceit unit is justifiabled?

A man wants to eat every animal on Earth


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ALSO POSSIBLE: A voracious man wantsing to eat every animal on Earth

A man who wants to eat every animal on Earth

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.


William Buckland, is the guysomeone who wants to eat every animal on eEarth.

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.

If you want to, you could also say: “William Buckland wants to eat every animal on earth.”

William Buckland, is the guy who wants to eat every animal on earth.

William Buckland, is thea guy/person who wants to eat every animal on earth.

LOGIC: Will he become a cannibal who eats humans? Since humans are also animals, his desire seems misguided. Also, there are many microscopic animals - some which are parasites.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A wish unusual isn't?


A wishIt's unusual isn', right?

A wishn unusual wish, isn't it?

AThis wish is unusual, isn'’t it?

isn’t = is not. (statement) isn’t it = is not it?/is it not? (question) —I hope this breakdown of the contraction explains why I changed your original sentence! I tried my best to explain! 😁

A wishn unusual goal isn't it?

or you can say "weird, isn't it?"

A wishThat is a unusual wish, isn't it?

A wish which is unusual isn't?

but I have to according with your plan.


but I have to according with your plan.

but I have to according with your plan.

I don't really know what is meant by this. Within the sentence context it doesn't fit.

but I have to, according with your plan.

but I have to according with yourHowever, I have reservations/doubts about his plan.

but I have to according with yourBit this is his plan.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinking about a lot of animals and your meat.


Many peoples, have the wrong thinkingidea about a lot of animals and youtheir meat.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinkingidea about a lot of animals and youtheir meat.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinking about a lot of animals and your meat.

“People” is already the plural form of “person,” so you don’t have to add an -s ending to “people” to make it plural. It already is! That’s why I changed “peoples” to “people”

Many peoples, have the wrong thinking about a lot of animals and your meat.[MEANING KNOWN]

SUGGESTION: Write in your native language. The English is too garbled to decipher.

Many peoples, have the wrong thinkingidea about a lot of animals and your meat.

Personally Im have a little disgusting about eat some few animals, for example: rabbit, I'm just not can eat this poor animal.


Personally, Im have a little disgust when thinking about eat someing a few animals, f. For example:, a rabbit, I'm just not can eat this poor animal.

Personally, Im have a little disgusting about eating some few animals, f. For example:, when it comes to rabbit,s I'm just not cancan not eat this poor animal.

Personally, Im have a little disgusting about eated by the thought of eating some few animals, for example: rabbit,. I'm just not can’t eat this poor animal.

Personally, Im have a little feel it's disgusting abouto eat some fewof these animals, f. For example:, rabbit,. I'm just not cancan't think of eating this poor animal.

Personally Im have a little disgustinged about eat some few animals, for example: rabbit,. I'm just not cannot eat this poor animal.

Cat the same thing, I know that eat this animals is very ordinay in many country, but I can't do that.


Cat tThe same thingwith cats, I know that eating this animals is very ordinary in many countryies, but I can't do that.

CatIt is the same thing,with cats. I know that eating this animals is very ordinary in many countryies, but I can't do that.

Cat the same thing, I know that eat this animals is very ordinayis another example. I know that it's quite normal to consume this animal in many country, but I can't dosee myself doing that.

Cat the same thing, I know that eat this animals is very ordinay in many country,Another example is the cat. I know that in many countries they eat the cat but I can't do that.

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