Dec. 17, 2025
A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men
This line is spoken by Willy Wonka in the 1971 film.
And I think he is absolutely right.
So I continue writing here my silly stories to improve my computer skills and procrastinating.
What if Hermione Granger had been sorted into Slytherin?
I seems unbelievable but I have several reasons to share and may be you will change your opinion.
The first is that Hermione is highly ambitious and driven to succeed, which is no doubt a Slytherin's value.
Second, she often thinks strategically , even it could be said cunningly. She is not an open book , this girl..
Then, Hermione consistently finds creative ways to solve her andd her friends problems. She can do more then a regular student, much much more ..
And finally Hermione’s natural leadership and confidence align well with Slytherin’s traditions. She is a strong leader indeed. It is clear who is managing a shopping budget and decide which ice cream to buy their children in the Ron-Germiona family.
And may be , if she would follow her inner Slytherin part, she could make a friendship or even a relations with Draco Malfoy , who is a much better pair for her then Ron .
Hm, I guess I can propose this idea to a Broadway . And they will make a new show.
Why not ? Wait Hermiona ! We will make you a new, much better , future! Don't give this old dusty hat to deceive you!
A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men
This line is spoken by Willy Wonka in the 1971 film.
And I think he is absolutely right.
So I continue writing here my silly stories here to improve my computer skills and procrastinatinge.
I won't correct it but... how does writing silly stories improve your computer skills? :thinking:
What if Hermione Granger had been sorted into Slytherin?
It may seems unbelievable but I have several reasons to share, and may be you will change your opinion.
"seems unbelievable" is used with something that could happen in the future, aka if you had said "What if Hermione Granger is sorted into Slytherin?", you would use "seems." But since we're talking about an event that could've happened in the past, "may seem" is better (grammatically idk why, but it is so)
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Secondly, she often thinks strategically , evenand it could even be said, cunningly.
She is not an open book , this girl..
ThenOn top of that, Hermione consistently finds creative ways to solve her andd her friends' problems.
She can do more thean a regular student, much, much more ...
And finally, Hermione’s natural leadership and confidence align well with Slytherin’s traditions.
She is a strong leader indeed.
It is clear who is managing athe shopping budget and decideing which ice cream to buy their children in the Ron-GHermionae family.
And may be , if she woulhad followed her inner Slytherin part, she could make a, she'd have made friendship with or even had a relationship with Draco Malfoy , who is a much better pair for her then Ron .
Since we're talking about a hypothetical event in the past...
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And they will make a new show.
Why not ?
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A phrase that fits here, but if you mean actually calling out to Hermione then "Wait, Hermione!" with a comma
We will make you a new, much better , future!
Don't givelet this old dusty hat to deceive you!
Ok idk what this is saying, whose old hat?
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Not sure why the other person removed a bunch of conjunctions that make the writing flow better... and axed so much other expressive stuff...
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“A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men.”
And I think he is absolutely right.
So I continue writing here my silly stories to improve my computer skills and procrastinatingskills.
It seems unbelievable but I have several reasons to share and mthis. May be youit will change your opinion.
The first is thatFirstly, Hermione is highly ambitious and driven to succeed, which is no doubt a value of Slytherin's value.
Secondly, she often thinks strategically , even it could be said cunningly.
She is not an open book , this girl..
Then, Hermione consistently finds creative ways to solve her andd her friends problems.
And fFinally, Hermione’s natural leadership and confidence align well with Slytherin’s traditions.
She is indeed a strong leader indeed.
It is clear who is managing athe shopping budget and decideing which ice cream to buy their children in the Ron-Germiona family.
And may be , iIf she would follow her inner Slytherin part, she could make a friendship or even aimprove relations with Draco Malfoy , who is a much better pairtner for her then Ron .
Hm, I guess I can propose this idea to a Broadway .
AndMaybe they will make a new show.
Wait Hermiona !
We will makwrite you a new, much better , future!
Don't givelet this old dusty hat to deceive you!
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And I think he is absolutely right.
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So I continue writing here my silly stories to improve my computer skills and procrastinating.
So I continue writing I won't correct it but... how does writing silly stories improve your computer skills? :thinking: |
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What if Hermione Granger had been sorted into Slytherin? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I seems unbelievable but I have several reasons to share and may be you will change your opinion. It seems unbelievable but I have several reasons to share It may seem "seems unbelievable" is used with something that could happen in the future, aka if you had said "What if Hermione Granger is sorted into Slytherin?", you would use "seems." But since we're talking about an event that could've happened in the past, "may seem" is better (grammatically idk why, but it is so) |
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The first is that Hermione is highly ambitious and driven to succeed, which is no doubt a Slytherin's value.
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And finally Hermione’s natural leadership and confidence align well with Slytherin’s traditions.
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And may be , if she would follow her inner Slytherin part, she could make a friendship or even a relations with Draco Malfoy , who is a much better pair for her then Ron .
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And they will make a new show.
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A phrase that fits here, but if you mean actually calling out to Hermione then "Wait, Hermione!" with a comma |
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We will make you a new, much better , future! We will We will make you a new, much better |
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