April 3, 2021
A little bit about my family
I am the little brother in a family of five, although I am not so little anymore, haha. I have two sisters older than me, but we get along with each other. They are my sisters but also my friends. My mother is great because she made me love books, which are one of my greatest pleasures in life and I always will own her for that. My father is funny and I can always count on him.
I am also happily married. We are about to adopt a couple of cats and they are going to be my first pets ever! So I am thrilled to have them at home, even though I am worried about the safety of my precious books.
I am the little brother in a family of five, although I am not so little anymore, haha.
I have two sisters older than me, but we get along with each other.
They are my sisters but also my friends.
My mother is great because she made me love books, which are one of my greatest pleasures in life, and I will always will ownbe grateful to her for that.
You could say "thankful" instead of "grateful".
My father is funny, and I can always count on him.
very minor error :)
I am also happily married.
We are about to adopt a couple of cats, and they are going to be my first pets ever!
minor again
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This is excellent work! You write in English very well. Congratulations on the cats :)
April 4, 2021
Thank you very much!
A little bit about my family
I am the little brother in a family of five, although I am not so little anymore, haha.
I have two older sisters older than me, but we get along with each other.
What you wrote was grammatically correct, but it sounded a bit unnatural.
They are my sisters but also my friends.
My mother is great because she made me love books, which are one of my greatest pleasures in life, and I will always will owne her for that.
My father is funny and I can always count on him.
I am also happily married.
We are about to adopt a couple of cats and they are going to be my first pets ever!
So I am thrilled to have them at home, even though I am worried about the safety of my precious books.
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Your English is really good, great work!
You could also use "I'm" instead of "I am", but "I am" is correct too.
I hope you have fun with your new cats!
April 4, 2021
Thank you! Can't wait for the cats:)
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I am the little brother in a family of five, although I am not so little anymore, haha. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have two sisters older than me, but we get along with each other. I have two older sisters What you wrote was grammatically correct, but it sounded a bit unnatural. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are my sisters but also my friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My mother is great because she made me love books, which are one of my greatest pleasures in life and I always will own her for that. My mother is great because she made me love books, which are one of my greatest pleasures in life, and I will always My mother is great because she made me love books, which are one of my greatest pleasures in life, and I will always You could say "thankful" instead of "grateful". |
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My father is funny and I can always count on him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My father is funny, and I can always count on him. very minor error :) |
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I am also happily married. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We are about to adopt a couple of cats and they are going to be my first pets ever! This sentence has been marked as perfect! We are about to adopt a couple of cats, and they are going to be my first pets ever! minor again |
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So I am thrilled to have them at home, even though I am worried about the safety of my precious books. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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