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Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

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A Lesson I Learnt

I went on hike yesterday, as usual.

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose. We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and it's a small village with a history over one thousand years.

I had thought about cancelling this hike plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am and was too late comparing to my usual night routine.

The views along the hike trail were beautiful. You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw

However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up. My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt:

1. Don't have massive exercise when your body is not in a good condition.
2. Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

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I went on a hike yesterday, as usual.

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild gooeese.

We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and i. It's a small village with a history over one thousand years history.

More idiomatic

I had thought about cancelling this hike plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am and it was too late comparinged to my usual night routine.

The views along the hike trail were beautiful.

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw


However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt:


1.

Don't have massive exercise when your body is not in a good condition.

2.

Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Jan. 20, 2025

1

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

A Lesson I Learnt

I went on a hike yesterday, as usual.

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose.

We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and i. It's a small village with a history over one thousand years.

I wanted to break up the sentences for readability purposes.

I had thought about cancelling this hike plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am andAM. It was too late comparinged to my usual night routinewhen I usually go to bed.

The views along the hike trail were beautiful.

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning, and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt:

1.

1. Don't have massive exerciseexercise too much when your body is not in a good condition.

2.

2. Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

1

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

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marblemenow

Jan. 19, 2025

6

You're welcome and have a nice day.

A Lesson I Learnt

I went on a hike (or "I went hiking") yesterday, as usual.

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means "the lake of the wild goose (or the lake of wild geese)".

We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means "the golden cockscomb", and it's a small village with a history of over one thousand years.

I had thought about cancelling this hike plan(or cancelling my plans to hike) when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am andlready, and it was too late comparinged to my usual nightly routine.

The views along the hike's trail (or hiking trail) were beautiful.

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt: 1.

Don't have massive exerciseoverdo exercise (or "physical activity") when your body is not in a good condition.

2.

Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

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Well done! You used "learnt" correctly in all your sentences, and they're perfectly understandable, though I must point out that "learned" is more commonly used than "learnt".

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Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

1

Thank you!

I'll remember to use "learned" next time.

A Lesson I Learnt

I went on hike yesterday, as usual.

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild geese. (or lake of the wild goose).

We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and i. It's a small village with a history of over one thousand years.

I had thought about cancelling this hikeing plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am and was too late comparinged to my usual night routine.

The views along the hikeing trail were beautiful.

You can see it throughon these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw


However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt: 1.

Don't havedo massive exercise when your body is not in a good condition (we would normally say good shape rather than condition).

2.

Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

1

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

A Lesson I Learnt

I went on a hike yesterday, as usual.

The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose.

We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and it's a small village with a history over one thousand years.

I had thought about cancelling this hike plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday, because it was around 1 am and it was too late comparing to my usual night routine.

The views along the hike trail were beautiful.

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.

So that's what I've learnt: 1.

Don't have massive overexercise when your body is not in a good condition.

2.

Don't do something you don't want to do, just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Jan. 19, 2025

1

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

A Lesson I Learnt


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The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild goose.


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The destination was a beautiful village called Yanhu, which means the lake of wild gooeese.

We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and it's a small village with a history over one thousand years.


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We also passed a village called Jinguan, which means the golden cockscomb, and i. It's a small village with a history of over one thousand years.

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I had thought about cancelling this hike plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am and was too late comparing to my usual night routine.


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I had thought about cancelling this hikeing plan when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am and was too late comparinged to my usual night routine.

I had thought about cancelling this hike plan(or cancelling my plans to hike) when I went to bed the day before yesterday because it was around 1 am andlready, and it was too late comparinged to my usual nightly routine.

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The views along the hike trail were beautiful.


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The views along the hike trail were beautiful.

You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.


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You can see it throughon these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw


However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

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You can see it through these two videos: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/s--2rGVZglI & https://www.youtube.com/shorts/4wTYk8yy5gw


However, I've learnt a lesson today since getting up.

My nose has been running since this morning and I've been drowsy all day.


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So that's what I've learnt:

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So that's what I've learnt:


1.

Don't have massive exercise when your body is not in a good condition.


Don't have massive overexercise when your body is not in a good condition.

Don't havedo massive exercise when your body is not in a good condition (we would normally say good shape rather than condition).

Don't have massive exerciseoverdo exercise (or "physical activity") when your body is not in a good condition.

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Don't have massive exercise when your body is not in a good condition.

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Don't do something you don't want to do just because you're afraid of letting your friends down.


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