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toranomonta

April 22, 2021

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A lemon tree

I bought a lemon tree a years and half month ago by Rakuten.

I want to make Lemon sirup with pesticide-free and organic lemon but it is relatively expensive.
I thought I can make lemon sirup for free every year if I have lemon tree.
That's why I decided to grow it by myself, but it looks so long way.

Usually Lemons is in blossom in the Spring and it bears fruits in the Summer.
But so sadly all of my lemon blossoms were completely eaten by green caterpillars.
As soon as I found them in my lemon tree, I moved them to somewhere like Park of my neighbords.
In spite of my effort, my lemon trees has not borne fruits last year.

This spring has come and my lemon tree has a lot of buds.
I bought a net and surrounded my lemon tree with it. it seems like successful.
But it become bigger and bigger day by day and outgrow the net.

Now I am planning to make a plastic green house for my lemon tree in my balcony.


一年半前にレモンの木を楽天で買った。

オーガニックのレモンでレモンシロップを作りたかったのだが、オーガニックのレモンは高かったので、
もし、レモンの木があれば毎年タダでレモンシロップを作ることができるんじゃないかと考えたのだった。
そんなわけで、レモンの木を自分で育てることにしたものの、レモンシロップまでは長い道のりのようだ。

通常、レモンの木は春に花をつけて、夏に実がなる。
しかし、悲しいことに、私のレモンの木は、花がすべて青虫に食べられてしまったのだ。
レモンの木に青虫たちがいるのを見つけたらすぐに、近所の公園まで青虫たちを移動させに行っていたのだが、
そんな努力の甲斐なく、去年は結局一つも実がならなかった。

今年の春が来て、レモンの木にいっぱい蕾が付いたので、
私はネットを買ってきて、レモンの木をネットを覆うことにした。これはうまくいったように見えたのだが…。
なんどレモンの木が育ちすぎて、ネットからはみ出すようになってしまったのだ。

今は、レモン木のためにビニールハウスを作ろうか検討中。

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A lemon tree

I bought a lemon tree a years and half monthtwo weeks ago byat Rakuten.

Unless it is important to be specific, just "a year ago" is enough. I'm guessing Rakuten is a shop and if so, it's "at" the shop.

I want to make Llemon siyrup with pesticide-free and organic lemons, but it is relatively expensive.

I thought, I can make lemon siyrup for free every year if I have lemon tree.

Alternative: "I figured I could make lemon syrup..."

That's why I decided to grow it by myself, but it looks so long like getting fruit will be a long time away.

Usually Llemons is in trees blossom in the Sspring and it bears fruits in the Ssummer.

But so sadly all of my lemon blossoms were completely eaten by green caterpillars.

As soon as I found them in my lemon tree, I moved them to somewhere else, like Ppark ofin my neighbordsurhood.

In spite of my effort, my lemon trees has not borne fruit this last year. / did not bear fruit last year.

This spring has come and my lemon tree has a lot of buds.

I bought a net and surrounded my lemon tree with it.

iIt seems (like it will be) successful.

But it become bigger and bigger day by day and outgroew the net.

Now I am planning to make a plastic green house for my lemon tree ion my balcony.

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A lovely text! Good luck with your lemon tree!

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toranomonta

April 23, 2021

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Thank you your comments! It's very useful for me.

But it become bigger and bigger day by day and outgrow the net.


But it become bigger and bigger day by day and outgroew the net.

A lemon tree


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I bought a lemon tree a years and half month ago by Rakuten.


I bought a lemon tree a years and half monthtwo weeks ago byat Rakuten.

Unless it is important to be specific, just "a year ago" is enough. I'm guessing Rakuten is a shop and if so, it's "at" the shop.

I want to make Lemon sirup with pesticide-free and organic lemon but it is relatively expensive.


I want to make Llemon siyrup with pesticide-free and organic lemons, but it is relatively expensive.

I thought I can make lemon sirup for free every year if I have lemon tree.


I thought, I can make lemon siyrup for free every year if I have lemon tree.

Alternative: "I figured I could make lemon syrup..."

That's why I decided to grow it by myself, but it looks so long way.


That's why I decided to grow it by myself, but it looks so long like getting fruit will be a long time away.

Usually Lemons is in blossom in the Spring and it bears fruits in the Summer.


Usually Llemons is in trees blossom in the Sspring and it bears fruits in the Ssummer.

But so sadly all of my lemon blossoms were completely eaten by green caterpillars.


But so sadly all of my lemon blossoms were completely eaten by green caterpillars.

As soon as I found them in my lemon tree, I moved them to somewhere like Park of my neighbords.


As soon as I found them in my lemon tree, I moved them to somewhere else, like Ppark ofin my neighbordsurhood.

In spite of my effort, my lemon trees has not borne fruits last year.


In spite of my effort, my lemon trees has not borne fruit this last year. / did not bear fruit last year.

This spring has come and my lemon tree has a lot of buds.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I bought a net and surrounded my lemon tree with it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

it seems like successful.


iIt seems (like it will be) successful.

Now I am planning to make a plastic green house for my lemon tree in my balcony.


Now I am planning to make a plastic green house for my lemon tree ion my balcony.

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