April 28, 2025
A Journal Entry
Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child
Fishing rods
Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks. These materials are easy to find in the countryside.
Fishing lines
Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.
Fishing hooks
Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family. When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.
Fishing baits
Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on. These “baits” are very easy to find in rural areas.
Fishing floats
Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, chicken feathers. All of these are common in the countryside.
A Journal Entry
Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child
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Fishing rods
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Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks.
These materials are easy to find in the countryside.
Fishing lines
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Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.
Fishing hooks
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Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family.
When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, and then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.
Fishing baits
.¶
Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on.
These “baits” are very easy to find in rural areas.
Fishing floats
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Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, and chicken feathers.
All of these are common in the countryside.
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Almost no mistakes. Just punctuations, I guess. Good job!
April 28, 2025
Thank you very much.
A Journal Entry
Components of a set of fishing gear from when I was a child
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Fishing rods
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Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks.
Generally, "bamboo" is uncountable. Typically, we might use "bamboos" when talking about different types/species of bamboo, e.g. "Bamboos are some of the fastest-growing plants in the world."
These materials are easy to find in the countryside.
Fishing lines Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.
Fishing hooks Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family.
When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.
Fishing baits
¶
Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on.
"bait" is uncountable and hence a singular noun. If we want it to be countable, we'd say "a piece of bait" or "pieces of bait".
TheseSuch “baits” areis very easy to find in rural areas.
Since "bait" is singular, "these" and "are" should also be changed to reflect this.
Fishing floats Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, chicken feathers.
All of these are common in the countryside.
April 28, 2025
Thank you very much.
A Journal Entry
Components of a set of fishing gear when I was a child Fishing rods Hemp stalks, bamboos and sorghum stalks.
These materials are easy to find in the countryside.
Fishing lines Every family has sewing threads which are used to mend clothes.
Fishing hooks Sewing needles that are used to mend clothes are popular in every family.
When we make a hook, we heat a needle with an oil lamp first, then bend it into a hook with a hand plier.
Fishing baits
¶
Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on.
It's much more common for "bait" to be in singular form. "Bait" carries more the idea of a clump or collection of "bait". Think of it almost like a material, like dirt or water.
Theseis “baits” areis very easy to find in rural areas.
Fishing floats Sorghum peduncles, garlic stalks, chicken feathers.
All of these are common in the countryside.
Feedback
Very nicely written!
April 28, 2025
Thank you very much.
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Fishing baits Flour dough, flies, earthworms, niblets and so on. Fishing bait It's much more common for "bait" to be in singular form. "Bait" carries more the idea of a clump or collection of "bait". Think of it almost like a material, like dirt or water. Fishing bait "bait" is uncountable and hence a singular noun. If we want it to be countable, we'd say "a piece of bait" or "pieces of bait". Fishing baits |
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