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nganmhh

Dec. 23, 2023

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A holiday

Today is holiday,my school one month have two holiday,so I'm very cherish it.But I think I waste this,because I play games for a day,homework is not written,my friend asked me to help I didn't finish.I'm ashamed of my laziness.So I decided study Englishi in night,so have this essay.

今天是假期，我的学校一个月放两天假，所以我非常珍惜。但是我认为我浪费了这个，因为我玩了一天游戏，作业没写，我朋友交给我的任务也没完成。我为我的懒惰感到羞耻。所以我决定在晚上学习英语，于是有了这篇文章。

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Today is holiday,m. My school one month have two holiday,has two holidays in one month, so I'm very cherish it.ing it a lot. But I think I'm waste this,ing it, because I play games for a day,spent all day playing games, my homework is not written,done, and my friend asked me to help him/her but I didn't finish. it. I'm ashamed of my laziness.S, so I decided study Englishi in for night,so. So, have this essay.

"so I'm cherishing it a lot," or you can say "so I'm very thankful."

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I am on a holiday from school right now too! And I have also spent almost all of it playing video games. I felt ashamed of my own laziness, so I logged onto langcorrect. You are not alone, LOL

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nganmhh

Dec. 24, 2023

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Thank you so much for your "Language Match"(I don't know this is correct) and feedback.Are you student too?I want to make friend with you,would you like to?And...thank you for your accompany!‍ヽ(°▽°)ノ

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Today is a holiday,m. My school one month have two holiday,has two holidays this month, so I'm very much cherish it.ing them. But I think I'm waste this,ing it, because I play games for a day,homework is not written,mall day and have not done my homework. My friend asked me to help with [his/hers], but I didn't finish. it. I'm ashamed of my laziness.S, so I decided to study Englishi in at night,so h. Have this essay.

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nganmhh

Dec. 24, 2023

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Thank you for your "Language Match"(I don't know this is correct).‍（￣▽￣）

A holiday

Today is holiday,my school one month have two holiday,so I'm very cherish it.But I think I waste this,because I play games for a day,homework is not written,my friend asked me to help I didn't finish.I'm ashamed of my laziness.So I decided study Englishi in night,so have this essay.

Today is a holiday,m. My school one month have two holiday,has two holidays this month, so I'm very much cherish it.ing them. But I think I'm waste this,ing it, because I play games for a day,homework is not written,mall day and have not done my homework. My friend asked me to help with [his/hers], but I didn't finish. it. I'm ashamed of my laziness.S, so I decided to study Englishi in at night,so h. Have this essay.

Today is holiday,m. My school one month have two holiday,has two holidays in one month, so I'm very cherish it.ing it a lot. But I think I'm waste this,ing it, because I play games for a day,spent all day playing games, my homework is not written,done, and my friend asked me to help him/her but I didn't finish. it. I'm ashamed of my laziness.S, so I decided study Englishi in for night,so. So, have this essay.

"so I'm cherishing it a lot," or you can say "so I'm very thankful."

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