Yesterday , was Monday , and howsince we a're in Holy Week Iin Spain , everybody gowent out with both friends and family forto watching the procession in the street.

It was such a beautiful procession that i was cryingI cried for a long time , even my friends were crying too.

A minor point, but "I cried" sounds more natural than "I was crying" here. It's about the tense being used.

Simple past ("cried"): Focuses on the fact that something happened — complete and whole.

Past continuous ("was crying"): emphasises the ongoing nature of an action at a specific time.

I can´t to't understand the people that come away to abroad forgo abroad on holiday during Holy Week Holiday , since , in Spain , we have an amazing week for standing here .

"come away" sounds contradictory. "Come" means "to arrive", "away" suggests distance, like "far away", "go away".

I think the phrase you need is "go abroad on holiday" in this sentence.

In Despite ofthat, I can understand that if you don´'t like the procession of your town , fyour town's procession. For this reason , I can apologizsympathise with you .

"your town's procession" sounds more natural than "the procession of your town" as it's a short phrase. What you wrote sounds more abstract.

On the other hand , I can´'t wait for it to be this noon , because , today there are processions too , and it´'s going to continue the rest of the week .

"On the other hand" usually is how a speaker introduces a contradictory or contrasting idea, not a second point. For instance: "I work very hard at learning English, on the other hand I'm sometimes too strict with myself".

I don't know if that's what you mean here.

It´'s a pity that this week will go so fast , iI don´'t want to finish with this o end.

Yesterday , was Monday , and how we are in Holy Week In Spain , everybody got out with both friends and family for watching the procession in the street.

"Yesterday was Monday, and since we are in Holy Week in Spain, everybody went out with both friends and family to watch the procession in the streets."

It was such a beutiful procession that i was crying for a long time , even my friends were crying too.

It was such a beautiful procession that I was crying for a long time, even my friends were crying too.

I can´t to understand the people that come away to abroad for Holy Week Holiday , since , in Spain , we have a amazing week for standing here .

I can't understand people who go abroad for the Holy Week holiday, since in Spain, we have an amazing week staying here.

In spite of I can understand that you don´t like the procession of your town , for this reason , I can apologize with you .

In spite of this I can understand that you don't like the procession of your own town, for this reason I am sorry for you.

On the other hand , I can´t wait to be this noon , because , today there are procession too , and it´s going to continue the rest of the week .

On the other hand, I can't wait for this afternoon, because today there is a procession as well, and it will continue for the rest of the week."

It´s a pity that this week will go so fast , i don´t want to finish with this .

It's a pity that this week will go so fast, I don't want to finish with this.