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maymarie

Jan. 3, 2025

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A building in my city

The building I'd like to talk about today was built in 1858 and was originally used as a locomotive shed.

The building is a semi-circular construction made of red briks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.
Due to the rapide expansion of the train network, the city decieded to move the trainstation to the current place and bought the original station two years later.

Since the old trainstation is build on the opposite side of the town hall, the city used it as a giant storage room and archiv for several years.

In 1998 the building was used for a exhibiton about "bajuwaren" (an old form of the word "bavarian" which applies to people from old bavaria, austria and south tirol).
Since then the property functions as a museum and has so far hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.

As the building is under monument protection, I do believe and hope that it will still remain in 50+ years regardless of the use.
I do hope it will stay a public facility.

If it really doesn't exist anymore, I am certain people will remember it.

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The building is a semi-circular construction made of red bricks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.

Due to the rapide expansion of the train network, the city decieded to move the train station to the current place and bought the original station two years later.

Since the old train station is buildt on the opposite side of the town hall, the city used it as a giant storage room and archive for several years.

In 1998, the building was used for a exhibition about "bajuwaren" (an old form of the word "bavarian" which applies to people from old bavaria, austria and south tirol).

Since then, the property functions as a museum and has so far hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.

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maymarie

Jan. 3, 2025

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Thanks for your correction !

The building is a semi-circular construction made of red bricks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.

Due to the rapide expansion of the train network, the city decieded to move the train station to the current place and bought the original station two years later.

Since the old train station is buildt on the opposite side of the town hall, the city used it as a giant storage room and archive for several years.

In 1998 the building was used for a exhibiton about "bajuwaren" (an old form of the word "bavarian" which applies to people from old bBavaria, aAustria and sSouth tTirol).

Since then the property has been functionsing as a museum and has so far hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.

The tense should match which is why I changed this, in other circumstances you can say "functions as a museum"

As the building is under monument protection, I do believe and hope that it will still remain in 50+ years regardless of the use.

"I do believe and hope" is used in some variations of English, but it's more standard and natural to omit the "do" here

I do hope it will stay a public facility.

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maymarie

Jan. 3, 2025

1

Thank you for the corrections and advices !

A building in my city


The building I'd like to talk about today was built in 1858 and was originally used as a locomotive shed.


Due to the rapide expansion of the train network, the city decieded to move the trainstation to the current place and bought the original station two years later.


Due to the rapide expansion of the train network, the city decieded to move the train station to the current place and bought the original station two years later.

Due to the rapide expansion of the train network, the city decieded to move the train station to the current place and bought the original station two years later.

Since the old trainstation is build on the opposite side of the town hall, the city used it as a giant storage room and archiv for several years.


Since the old train station is buildt on the opposite side of the town hall, the city used it as a giant storage room and archive for several years.

Since the old train station is buildt on the opposite side of the town hall, the city used it as a giant storage room and archive for several years.

In 1998 the building was used for a exhibiton about "bajuwaren" (an old form of the word "bavarian" which applies to people from old bavaria, austria and south tirol).


In 1998 the building was used for a exhibiton about "bajuwaren" (an old form of the word "bavarian" which applies to people from old bBavaria, aAustria and sSouth tTirol).

In 1998, the building was used for a exhibition about "bajuwaren" (an old form of the word "bavarian" which applies to people from old bavaria, austria and south tirol).

As the building is under monument protection, I do believe and hope that it will still remain in 50+ years regardless of the use.


As the building is under monument protection, I do believe and hope that it will still remain in 50+ years regardless of the use.

"I do believe and hope" is used in some variations of English, but it's more standard and natural to omit the "do" here

I do hope it will stay a public facility.


I do hope it will stay a public facility.

The building is a semi-circular construction made of red briks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.


The building is a semi-circular construction made of red bricks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.

The building is a semi-circular construction made of red bricks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.

Since then the property functions as a museum and has so far hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.


Since then the property has been functionsing as a museum and has so far hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.

The tense should match which is why I changed this, in other circumstances you can say "functions as a museum"

Since then, the property functions as a museum and has so far hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.

If it really doesn't exist anymore, I am certain people will remember it.


The building is semi-circular construction made of red briks with nineteen sheds, in which the trains used to be stored.


Since then the building functions as a museum and has hosted 36 different exhibitions on various topics including culture, history, nature and some specials.


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