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Nov. 17, 2023
Nov. 17, 2023
유행어나 신조어 사용
유행어나 신조어 모두 그 시대상을 반영하는 언어로 사용되어진다는 같은 의미를 가지기 때문일 것이다. 신조어란 새로운 단어나 새로운 의미를 만들어 내는 것이다. 유행어란 어느 한 시기에 사람들 사이에서 많이 쓰이는 말이다.
사람들이 표준어 이외의 언어들을 사용하게 된 이유 중 하나로 통신 매체와 기술의 발달을 들 수 있다. 인터넷 등 통신 매체 발달에 따라 새로운 표현이 많이 생기는 것이 유행어나 신조어의 형성으로 이어진다. 또한 과거와 다른 사회-문화적 변화를 겪게 되는 것도 유행어와 신조어 사용의 원인이 된다. 과거와 다르게 사람들이 나눌 수 있는 사화도 세분되고 사회 현상도 달라서 그에 따라 유행어와 신조어를 사용하는 사람이 많아졌다. 이러한 유행어나 신조어의 사용은 여러 가지 문제를 낳고 있다.
먼저, 유행어나 신조어의 사용은 국어 형태에 악영향을 줄 수 있다. 유행어나 신조어를 자주 사용하다 보니 국어 문법이나 철자법을 틀리는 경우도 많아지고 있다. 또한 유행어나 신조어 사용은 세대 간의 원활한 의사소통에도 방해가 된다. 연령이 높아질수록 인터넷 사용률이 떨어져서 신조어를 잘 모를 때가 많기 때문이다. 이는 세대의 갈등을 발생시킬 수 있다. 그리고 사회적으로 신조어 사용이 흔한 일이 된면서 때와 장소에 맞지 않게 신조어를 사용하는 사람들이 늘고 있는 것도 문제이다.
따라서 우리는 무분별하게 신조어를 사용하지 않도록 환경과 상대방을 고려할 필요가 있다. 예의를 갖추어야 하는 자리에서는 신조어 사용을 피해야 한다. 그리고 국어를 그대로 보존하는 일에 더 많은 관심을 가지고 노력을 기울여야 한다.
Nov. 17, 2023
Travel to Mt. Fuji
I went on a Mt. Fuji bus tour with my friend.
I’m glad I was able to go see Mt. Fuji with her on the three days off it was really crowded though.
She always takes really good pictures! I enjoy being her photos model! Lol
I really enjoy spending time with my foreign friends and guiding them around Japan. I want to do only things that I like and fill up my life with happiness.
Nov. 16, 2023
Es kommt darauf an.
Bei mir kommt es auf die Person an. Normalerweise spreche ich mit Verwandten am Telefon, weil wir weit voneinander entfernt wohnen. Mit Freunden schreibe ich ihnen normalerweise eine SMS, und normalerweise sind diese Nachrichten kurz. Wenn ich mich mit ihnen unterhalten möchte, treffe ich sie normalerweise irgendwann in der Woche oder lade sie ein, etwas mit mir zu unternehmen, und wir unterhalten uns viel bei jeder Aktivität, die wir unternehmen.
Nov. 16, 2023
El aumento del poder de La ultraderecha. ¿Fascismo aparece?
El aumento del poder de La ultraderecha. ¿Fascismo aparece otra vez?
En los últimos años, la situación de la comunidad internacional sigue cada vez más caos. Tantas guerras como manifestaciones siguen ocurriendo en el mundo.
Desde la guerra entre Rusia y Ucrania, Israel y Hamás, hasta consensos distintos en campus estadounidenses entre Israel y Palestino, manifestaciones de antisemitismo y contra ellos. Estos eventos han provocado que la mental de la gente inclina a extrema, en la que aumenta el poder de los partidos de ultraderecha en el mundo.
Si no paramos estos eventos, la situación sería más grave para la gente. Fascismo también aparecería otra vez.
En mi opinión, con cualquier especie, necesitamos dejar los odios y colaborar conjunto para desarrollar un futuro para nuestros hijos y nietos. Deje conflictos entre la gente, y abramos un futuro hermoso para seres humanos.
Nov. 16, 2023
Nov. 16, 2023
Tax declaration
During the last days I’ve been utterly busy with the compilation of documents for the tax declaration of the last year. This is a task that I should have done step by step throughout the year, in order to do small tasks more frequently. The truth is that I normally procrastinate it to the end, although I only take care of the straightforward part, the compilation, since the tricky part is done by a tax advisor.
I find several differences between the procedure in Spain and in Germany, where I have been living for the last years. In a nutshell, the tax declaration in Germany offers more chances of tax relief but with the linked burden of the required paperwork, which allows the tax and revenue office to proof the correctness of that relief. In Germany you can get tax deductions for a lot of different concepts such as books, electronic devices, double household (including trips between the two households). The deadlines here are also different. In the case of Spain you should deliver your declaration before the end of June and it is mandatory to do it every year. In Germany you get more flexibility in that respect, since you have time until year’s end. Furthermore, it is not always mandatory to deliver a tax declaration each year. That depends upon several variables.
A clear advantage to Spain in that area is the more advanced state of the so called “digitalization”. That offers an infrastructure that can be used to prepare and deliver a declaration more quickly. The tax filer receives each year a digital draft of the tax declaration, based on the ones of the latter years. For straightforward cases, when the declarant just has to read and sign the document, the issue can be solved in a matter of minutes.
It is not to say that digitalization works like a charm in Spain. But the country usually occupies a position in the top ten within Europe. This is not the case of Germany, which is for sure, no role model in that regard. A lot has already been written related to the German underdevelopment in the digitalization, but no definitive solution has been found.
Nov. 16, 2023
Please review my essay
The diagram illustrates how to recycle plastic bottles.
Overall, the recycling of plastic bottles shows nine steps, starting with the collection of plastic bottles from trash the crushing them into small pieces and end with the the manufacture end products.
The process of recycling plastic bottles starts with gathering plastic borrlts from trashcan, the second step is transporting them to recycling centre to sorting. After that, these plastic bottles are compressed into square blocks. After milling these blockes into small pieces, these pieces are dropped to a big tank to remove the dirt immediately. The six step is producing plastic pellets with the support of an enormous machine. After heating pellets to form raw material with a suitable temperature, these raw materials were born. The last step is producing end products, such as boxes, bags or bottles and transporting to supermarkets and retailers.
The diagram illustrates how to produce sugar from sugar cane with the support of many high technologies.
Overall, the production of sugar shows seven steps, starting with the growth of sugar cane to the milling and end with the transporting the products.
The process of manufacturing sugar from sugar cane starts with growing sugar canes from 12 to 18 months until it satisfies the quality standards. After that, sugar canes are harvested by trucks or farmers. After crushing sugar canes into bagasse, the liquid continues to be purified by a limestone filter to become pure juice. Then, this liquid is evaporated with a suitable temperature until it becomes syrup. before the product is dryed and cooled to sugar, the syrup is separated sugar crystals from syrup. The last step is transporting to the supermarkets and retailers.
Nov. 16, 2023
writing task 2
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Children are the future of a nation, so their education and development are of great concern to society. Some people assert that parents should be responsible for educating their children to become good citizens, while others argue it is the role of schools, to which I agree.
Admittedly, school plays an important role in educating children to become responsible citizens. To facilitate a learning environment, schools have to establish a set of rules, and students are taught to strictly adhere to these rules. This promotes the characteristics necessary for good citizenship such as self-discipline and obedience. Furthermore, the school is a miniature society with people from various backgrounds. Through interacting with their peers and participating in teamwork activities, students can build up interpersonal skills that make them good members of society.
However, parents have a more profound influence. First, they lay the foundations for their children’s behavior by teaching them the differences between right and wrong and guiding the children to behave accordingly. For example, kids are taught at home to learn proper table manners and be polite to their grandparents. Second, young individuals by nature mimic people around them, and they typically spend most of their time with their mothers and fathers. Therefore, parents can model behaviour that embodies good character traits, and their kids are likely to learn from it.
In conclusion, while school can teach children to obey the rules and develop collaborative social skills, parents can instill in children the basics of good behaviour and be good role models for them. Hence, homes are the better place for nurturing children into good members of society.
Nov. 16, 2023
Nov. 16, 2023
writing task 1
The first line graph plots the percentage of homes that had a labor-saving electrical appliance between 1920 and 2019. Three kinds of appliances are shown: refrigerator, vacuum cleaner, and washing machine. The second line graph plots the average amount of time spent weekly on domestic chores per household during the same period.
Overall, the presence/use of these appliances increased over the period. There was a strong negative correlation between the ownership of these appliances and the amount of time spent doing household chores.
Nearly none owned a refrigerator in 1920, while four in ten % had a washing machine and three in ten had a vacuum cleaner. After that, however, refrigerator ownership underwent the largest increase, surpassing the other two after 1940 at 60% and reaching 100% in 1980, when it remained unchanged thereafter. The ownership of vacuum cleaners also experienced a notable rise and reached 100%, albeit much later in 2000, when it remained at that level as well. In contrast, the percentage of families owning washing machines, although starting at the highest value, only rose moderately and never reached 100%, but only about 75% in 2019.
Nov. 16, 2023
Journal #27: "How I'm learning English"
I want to tell you about my family. I have mother, father and two younger sisters. My parents are doctors and my sisters are pupils. My parents met at the medical university when they studed. My mother is from province and my father from city. My parants and my younger sisters live at apartment in downtown.I live with my girlfriend in neighboring area at own apartment. One of sisters study at high school and another sister study at primary school. One of sisters, which study at high school, is going to become a doctor like our parents. Another sister is going to become an engineer, maybe architect. Sometimes, I have my famaly over to eat homemade food. My girlfriend cook so delicous and perfect meals. It usually happens at the weekend. I have very wonderful family and girlfriend. I confident I can rely on my family or girlfriend.
Thanks for reading my journal.
Nov. 16, 2023
Draguer quelqu'un
Je me suis levé à 10h30, j'ai pris un petit café au café Maison Polanski et j'ai acheté un kilo de pommes au marché. la femme me disait que c'était nommé une pirouette de pommes, et je l’ai noté dans mes bloc-notes dans mon portable. J'allais au musée Beaubourg avec Sandrine, Adeline, Baptise et Anouk. Mais bon… c'était fermé. On faisait autre chose quand même. On a vu une petite exposition de Guerlain aux Champs-Élysées. Après, Bashir est parti et on est allé au bar nous quatre. Je me sens un peu coincé du cul entre les trois femmes bavardant. On a rigolé sans arrêt des gens qui sont propres et bavard de draguer quelqu'un.
Nov. 16, 2023
A App for Illustrations
Recently I use an app called Procreate to make illustrations on iPad.
But I thought it might be better to use an app called CLIP STUDIO PAINT to make illustrations like manga. So I tried to use it.
CLIP STUDIO PAINT for iPhone is subscription service but we can use it free for just one hour every a day.
Any apps for iPhone can use also for iPad, so I downloaded the iPhone version.
If I could use it well, I would use for iPad version as subscription service.
Nov. 16, 2023
Meine Träume
Ich erinnere mich oft meine Träume. Letzte nacht traume ich dass ich ein Glas gegessen habe. Gestern habe ich ein Glas gebrochen und ich habe vor schlafen über dieses Glas gedacht. Normalerweise, sind meine Träume sehr komisch aber ich denke, meine tägliche Aktivitäten einflussen meine Träume. Ich träume auch oft dass alle meine Haare oder meine Zähne ausgefallen sind.
Nov. 16, 2023
Entspannen im Winter und Sommer
Normalweise, entspanne ich mich besser alleine. Im Winter, wenn es draußen kalt ist, ich bleibe in meiner Wohnung und trinke Tee. Ich lese auch ein Buch oder höre einen Podcast mit Gespenstschichten an. Im Sommer, schwimme ich gerne im Schwimmbad in der Nähe meiner Wohnung. Aber ich bin auch mehr Freundlich im Sommer. Zum Bespiel, gehe ich mit meinen Freunden aus für einige Getränke. Heute gehe ich mit Freundinnen in ein neues persisches zu essen. Ich freue mich darauf.
Nov. 16, 2023
Giovedì
Urraaaa, oggi posso prepararmi per il weekend. È il momento di avere i giorni liberi e rilassarmi. Dopo aver mangiato studierò per mezz'ora e poi inizierò a lavorare. Non devo amdare in ufficio per il resto del mese.
È meglio ( per me ) lavorare da casa. Non indosso le scarpe e posso vestirmi comoda. Sono anche più rilassata, non sento nessuno urlare. In passato quando andavo in ufficio, c'erano troppe persone e a volte non parlavano a bassa voce.
Sto per pranzare. A domani!
Nov. 16, 2023
Nov. 16, 2023
語彙との闘い
昨日youtubeで20か国語を話せるというKaufmannさんとのインタビュー動画を見ました。言語の習得によって一番大事なのは何かと聞く質問にKaufmannさんは語彙だと言いました。ここについては同感せずにいられなかったです。言語は文法と語彙に大別されると思います。文法は学びに関していくつか便利なところがあります。
まずは量です。暗記すべきの文法の量は語彙に比べてとても少ないです。語彙はあまりにも膨大で、一日中暗記したとしてもある程度のレベルに上がるには数か月がかかります。
次に頻度です。文法はどんな状況でも必ず使われます。逆に語彙はその性格によって使い分けが限られています。単語によっては永遠に慣れることができないかもしれません。
Nov. 16, 2023
Nov. 16, 2023
Nov. 16, 2023
Nov. 15, 2023
日記 （亂想）
當學習語言碰到困難的時候很容易讓人灰心。最近我有這種感覺。
比如我沒辦法用國語做深入的分享我對文學、經濟、政治的觀點。此外文章和中文書對我而言深奧難懂。
開始變心灰意冷的時候，嘗試記得兩年前我寫不出中文字和看不懂中文字（文盲）。而且那時候比較常常跟我的父母講英文夾一些中文。其實他們講中文，我就用英文回答。那時候人家說話我會懂，但如果你問我翻譯英文子到中文我就不知道。即使這樣，我的詞彙還相當有限。
我現在只不要半途而廢。可以承認還要提高更多不過也可以承認我的中文程度提升了。反正，“好的開始是成功的一半”，是不是？
我剛剛賣掉幾本書然後買了我朋友前幾個月推薦的一本書叫「Born to Run」。那時候他才剛泡了馬拉松我剛泡了一半馬拉松。只看了三頁已經很有趣的。這本書有兩百八十二頁，有可能我明天就會看完了。
Nov. 15, 2023
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