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台本
テラスハウスはリアリティー番組と名乗っていて毎回「台本は一切ございません」と始めるけど、深く考えなくても明らかにリアリティーらしくないところがよく見えます。この番組の設定は、男女6人が一緒に住むのです。出演者が卒業して新しい出演者を入れる際に、その人が友達や家族と話してて「テラスハウスに住むことになったよ」というふうな会話が見えます。しかし、少し考えておかしくなるのは、その場面を撮影している時点で、撮影されている人物はもちろん許可を出しているので、もうテラスハウスに入るのを知っているわけです。つまり、そのニュースを聞いてのリアクションは完全に作り上げられていることになります。こんなシーンを制作者がどうしても入れたいのなら、別によくて仕方がないけど、僕が思うのは、最初に入る出演者はそういうシーンもないので、別に全員なくてもいい、というんです。でもま、番組全体的には作りが若干感じられるので、別に完全なるリアリティーさを気取っているわけでもないかもしれないですね。
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Oct. 4, 2024
ワニカニチャレンジ ・ 🐊🦀 ・ ＃１
ワニカニから漢字と語彙は知り使って、私は例文書きたいです。少しの日本語はランダム選択です。そのために、パイソンのスクリプトは書きいました。これは悪い考えかもしれないでも、何か書いてみましょう！
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今日の漢字と語彙があります：
【船 ・ 考 ・ 外 ・ 火山 ・ 先月 ・ 方】。
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先月は野田さんは新しい船を買いました。小さくてさびさびですした。彼は船をどこに行きたい考える、ながら直すでした。「アイスランドに行きたい！」といだ。
野田さんのアイデアを妻にこう言った。 「ええええ！君はだめ！これは本当に頭悪いですよ！ 考え方はやばい！」と彼女は言った。
次の日 野田さんは海外へ航海に出ました。アイスランドに方向は知りませんでした。後になって、彼はに到着した。最初に目にしたのは火山だった。
「家に帰る方向が分からない... 考えはありません...」といだ。
Oct. 4, 2024
Oct. 4, 2024
Salut tout le monde ! (01/12/2023)
Il est 23 h 33 à Ithaca et maintenant, je regarde la vidéo 6 Vloggers pour apprendre le français par InnerFrench sur YouTube. J'écoute plusieurs des podcasts français sur Spotify et j'apprends beaucoup d'informations comme la vie de Coco Chanel, la grammaire française, les élections présidentielles en France, la tour Eiffel, etc. Honnêtement, j'aurais aimé connaître ces ressources plus tôt. En particulier, j'ai regardé beaucoup de vidéos de ces chaînes sur YouTube : Easy French et InnerFrench. Je dois parler le français avec des personnes sur Tandem avant la salle de classe en ligne en dimanche. J'ai lu les journaux français sur Google et j'ai trouvé un article surpris. Aujourd'hui, le républicain George Santos a été expulsé du Congrès et je suis heureuse, car il est un républicain.
Ce jour-ci, mon petit ami dort sur mon lit et il a fait de l'escalade intérieure à l'université de Cornell sans moi. J'étais triste, mais il est rentré chez nous tôt parce qu'il voulait passer du temps avec moi.
Bonne nuit !
Oct. 3, 2024
Resume of the day
today was a routine day, every morning start doing reports in my job, this reports have financial information and some KPI's of the differents team work in my company. Also, I participated in a few mettings, the most important metting was when the team lead told us that I was chosed how the new Costumer master data specialist, this notice is something that make me happy becasue it was a process of almost 4 month were a lot of people participated by different countries with a higth standar of knowledge. After the mittings I continued with the month-end reports until the end of the working day.
Oct. 3, 2024
The Town I Live
I live in a small town in Brazil (Around 70 thousand inhabitants). I know that there are a lot of countries that suffer the natural disasters like earthquakes and tsunamis, but here in Brazil, we don't have such huge calamities, which is one of the best parts of living in here. I like watching the trees being blown by the wind on the hills from the window. Brazil's landscapes have their unique charm. The town I live is surrounded by hills and make the city feels more connected to the nature. Even though the town is known by its historical importance, having a lot of houses with older architecture, when you live inside the town, the "magic" just disappear and I just look at them as old boring houses that are hindering the development of a more sophisticated and modern city.
There are not many places and things to do in my town. There's no mall and just a few attractions, but this doesn't bother me since I barely go outside. The best moment of the year is during winter. The town usually promotes annual events in the main square. It has open concerts, food stalls and amusing toys for the children. This year's event was Japan themed and it was pretty cool because I personally like Japan's culture and food, and I had even studied Japanese before.
Overall, I feel comfortable living here. I can go for a walk and do exercises in outdoor fitness stations without worrying about strange people being around me. I really want to visit the big cities around the world someday. Unfortunately, I'm high likely to feel queasy during car or bus traveling because of the annoying motion sickness that I feel more than the others.
Oct. 3, 2024
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En tur til Rostock
I min siste ferie dro jeg til Rostock. Det er en sted i Nord-Tyskland med et hav, mange vakre hus, mye fisk å spise og mange måker. Vi var der i august i år.
Jeg bodde på Rostock mellom 2020 og 2021. Jeg flyttet dit etter skolen og jeg jobbet i et teater der.
På ferie jeg viste venninen min byen, vi var ved havet hvert dag og jeg så byen som en turist. Det var litt rart men også en fin opplevelse.
Oct. 3, 2024
Oct. 3, 2024
Mi proyecto
Hoy he tenido una reunión sobre mi disertación de tercer año. Se trata de cómo la familiaridad de las voces puede afectar a su propia inteligibilidad. Tengo dos miembros conmigo, pero tengo poca fe en ellas. No han leído los estudios que exigimos para el proyecto y hablan en sus propios idiomas. Espero que nuestra tesis sea un éxito.
Oct. 3, 2024
Einfache Sätze
Ich habe eine Schwester und keinen Bruder. Also habe ich einen Vater und eine Mutter. Meine Eltern sind nett und freundlich. Ich habe keine Tochter und keinen Sohn. Meine Familie ist toll.
Ich spiele Geige mit ein Orchester mittwochs. Mein Freund und ich lesen jeden Tag diesen Bücher. Er malet nicht. Er kocht Chinesech Essen. Ich tanze dienstags.
Ich arbeite zu Hause. Ich sparziere jeden Morgen in Staßbern. Mein Freund arbeiteit im Büro.
Oct. 3, 2024
Pessimistic
I think I am not so optimistic how I want to be. I dream about sad situation where I lose. But I know that the muscle of joy I can increase - maybe today is not very good, not all is well and I am not pleased with myself, but tomorrow I can try to change anything.
Sorry, my sentences are not happy today.
Oct. 3, 2024
Isang Dahilan: Spanish (10/3/2024)
Unang taon ng universidad, umattend ako sa tatlong klase ng Spanish, isang klase tuwing tatlong o apat na buwan, kasi nagkaroon na ako apat na taon ng itong wika sa high school at hindi ko gustong magtapon ang lahat ng mga itong taon. Para sa mga klase, meron ang mga gawaing kailangan tayo magsulat sa Spanish. Syempre, hindi ko magaling talaga sa sulat kasi lagi akong maghanap ng mga words na hindi ko alam kung paano ibig sabihin. Tsaka, sobrang mabagal ako sa grammar. Maraming rules sa conjugation para sa isang wika. Gusto ko naging magaling sa mga magsulat sa Spanish. Naghanap ako ng mga sagot sa Reddit at nahanap ako itong website: LangCorrect. Sa itong website, nagsusulat ikaw sa wika na gusto kang mag-aral, at tumutulong ng ibang tao sa'yo. Nag-signup ako, at andito na ako, pero hindi ko nag-aaral ang Spanish kasi hindi ko gusto sa ngayon. Napapagod na ako. Iniisip ko na hindi ko mahilig sa Spanish ngayon kaysa noong apat na taon. No offence, syempre, pero ginawa ko ang goal nang estudyante ako sa high school: "Mag-aaral ako sa Tagalog para sa akin at saka sa pamilya ko." Imbes na Spanish, gagamitin ko itong website para sa Tagalog.
Oct. 3, 2024
Giovedì 3 ottobre
Anche se ho preso il raffreddore, sono voluta uscire un po'. Dopo aver preso le medicine, mi sento meglio e sono pronta a continuare a fare le faccende.
Come ogni giovedì, ho fatto le pulizie prima di lavorare. Preferisco lavorare da mezziogiorno invece che dalle 10, perché così ho sempre il tempo per fare le faccende. Non voglio che mi interrompano durante il lavoro.
Non vedo l'ora di finire il turno e di cenare. Le nuove mansioni non mi danno più fastidio. Non so ancora se mi ci sono abituata oppure se mi sono rassegnata.
Oct. 3, 2024
The first step to improving my academic writing
How is writing different from speaking? It is suggested to respond questions as how the language joined together.
Spoken language use simple linking devices like 'and', 'but', however academic writing prefer to use complex form as which, even, etc. Grammar in spoken language is flexible, whereas academic writing uses a formal grammar. Insted of body language including hand movements will be applied specific and clear text. It is also important to remember how emphasis is created in the text: punctuation insted of changes in tone and volume what possible in speaking. The most inportant is vagueness and ambiguity must be avoided in the texts.
Oct. 3, 2024
Oct. 3, 2024
T2-mon expérience et mes impressions sur une salle de sport
Bonjour à tous,
Avez-vous déjà participé à un cours de sport en salle ? Récemment, après de longues journées de travail qui m’ont laissée épuisée, j’ai décidé de m’inscrire à un cours de yoga dans une salle de sport moderne située près du centre-ville, nommée “Rose”. Aujourd’hui, je suis heureuse de partager avec vous mon expérience et mes impressions sur cette salle.
Tout d’abord, en ce qui concerne les installations, la salle est bien équipée avec des appareils modernes qui facilitent l’entraînement des clients. Ce cours de yoga est particulièrement adapté aux débutants grâce à l’accompagnement des entraîneurs qui sont à la fois professionnels et attentionnés, ce qui me permet de me sentir en confiance, même en cas de difficulté pendant l’entraînement. De plus, le tarif est raisonnable : trois séances par semaine, chaque séance durant deux heures. Après deux mois, j’ai constaté des changements physiques et mentaux significatifs, car j’ai perdu deux kilos et me sens beaucoup plus épanouie. Grâce à ce cours, j’ai également rencontré des personnes intéressantes et élargi mon cercle d’amis. Honnêtement, cette salle est un choix idéal pour ceux qui mènent une vie bien remplie mais souhaitent prendre soin de leur santé.
Je vous recommande vivement de vous inscrire à ce cours pour améliorer votre bien-être physique et mental.
À bientôt !
Oct. 3, 2024
My first post
Hi.
I'm a newbie here.
I don't like writing much, but at the same time, I know writing skill is one of the skills I need to work hard on.
My biggest concern is that I may not be able to continue writing here.
I've never kept a diary for more than three days because I have nothing to write in my diary.
Anyway, I'll try to do my best.
Wish me luck.
Oct. 3, 2024
Autopresentación
¡Hola!
Me llamo Lily.
Soy de japón y vivo en japón.
También, soy estudiante.
Me gusta estudar los idiomas por exemplo ahola estudio español, inglés y francés.
Me gusta escuchar música como el pop americano, pero no me gusta la música de japonesa.
Me gustan los series de televisión americanos como "Grey's Anatomy."
¡Gracias por leerlo y mucho gusto!
Oct. 3, 2024
Greetings
Hi
I just want to see how it works.
Maybe 2 or 3 weeks ago I bought a book. It's called 50 steps to improving your academic writing. And of course it includes writing tasks. However I 'm learning without teacher and I use it like self-study course. So, I need help to check my texts.
Let see how it will be?
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