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Resumen de El hobbit: Capítulo 13
Capítulo 13: Nadie en casa.
En el capítulo 13, Bilbo y los enanos están atrapados en el túnel oscuro. Intentan empujar la puerta para abrirla, pero sin éxito. Desesperados, Bilbo convence a los demás para que comprueban la guarida de Smaug. No creen que Smaug haya regresado aún porque no lo han escuchado desde la avalancha, así que todos acuerdan de mala gana bajar por el túnel.
Una vez que ven que Smaug se ha ido, los enanos se regocijan al ver el tesoro. Bilbo ve la Piedra del Arca, un gran tesoro enano, y se la mete en el bolsillo. Esta es exactamente lo que Thorin más quiere del tesoro pero el hobbit la mantiene en secreto. Bilbo también encuentra una cota de malla forjada en mithril, un metal muy fuerte y ligero, y se la pone. Thorin decide que ahora no hay tiempo suficiente para buscar la Piedra del Arca y que volverán después de derrotar a Smaug. Ya todos satisfechos, Thorin conduce a los demás a través de los pasillos de la montaña. Por el camino, encuentran grandes cámaras donde Smaug no va, llenas de muebles podridos, viejos huesos y otros artefactos abandonados. Thorin conoce muy bien el lugar y es capaz de guiarlos hasta la salida por la Puerta Principal.
Una vez fuera, deciden que es demasiado peligroso quedarse cerca y se dirigen al viejo puesto de observación, lejos de Smaug. Tras muchas millas en marcha, llegan al borde sudoeste de la montaña, descansan y se preguntan adónde habrá ido el dragón.
Dec. 3, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
给小雨的一封信
你好小雨， 你好吗？ 我想写这一分封信因为我门已经很久没有说话了！我想告诉很多的事情。我多么不高心，因为上上个星期我有了汉语测验，我的教师跟我说没有通过考试。所以从下个星期起，我得功课好！ 安娜跟我说：“别哭了！你只能抽时间学习”。
我希望你在新城市过得愉快，即使你两个月后回到住在意大利。我知道你舍不得你的作家的工作，但是成然你回来的时候，一定可以找到一个新的工作， 你只能耐心，你是一个活跃的人。我非常想念你， 希望很快能再次见到你。
对啊，最后一个消息。我想告诉你，我和叶志祥分手了。他对我原谅，但是我们一直争论。我觉得不管怎么样，有情人不能总是相生气。好的，我写完了我的信，我想和你一起庆祝我的生日，再见！
Dec. 2, 2024
Por qué amo la Navidad
Mi fiesta favorita es la Navidad porque me encanta el espíritu navideño. Me encanta pasar tiempo con la familia y abrir regalos. Me gustan los regalos, especialmente cuando consigo algo que quería. Me encanta la nieve.
Me encanta comer adobo y flan en Navidad. Mi parte favorita es cuando decoramos el árbol de Navidad. El año pasado, pasé la Navidad con mi familia en casa.
Dec. 2, 2024
Empfehlungen für ein nachaltigeres Leben
Sich mit dem Thema Nachhaltigkeit zu beschäftigen heisst es, zukünftige Generationen respektvoll zu betrachten. Daher ist jede von uns verantwortlich, das Shönen des Planets zu priorisieren. Notwendig ist (es), unsere alltägliche Bewohneiten genauer zu hinterfragen, sodass wir das Verbesserungspotenziall deutlich identifizieren können. In diesem Text werde ich erötern, was für individuelle Veränderungen in unsere Alltag machbar, vernünftig und vor allem, hilfreich sind, den Kilamawandel zu bremsen.
Erstens is Wasser eine der Ressourcen, deren Mangel sich am stärksten auf unseren Planeten auswirkt. Obwohl es offensichtlich zu sein sheinen könnte, die meisten Menschen im Öst europas nehmen Duschen die länger als 5 Minuten dauern. Genauer betrachtet, ist das ein richtige Luxus, egal wie normalisiert es mit der Zeit in unsere Gesellschaft geworden ist. Um Wasser langfristig zu sparen, sollen wir ein Timer am Handy setzen, das(?) weniger als 5 Minuten dauert. Ein weiterer Vorschlag wäre, eine kurze Shampoo und Spühlung Pause zu machen, sodass keines Wasser unbenötig verschwenden wird.
Ebenso sollte man darauf achten, Stoffe wie Plastik, Glas und Biomüll richtig zu recyceln. Obwoh man den beste Absicht haben kann, die Geschwindikeits des modernes Lebens lenkt uns ab. Dies führt dazu, dass wir schnell unsere Müll wegschmeissen. Deshalb scheint es mir sehr wichtig, geduldig und aufmerksam in solchen Momente zu bleiben.
Insgesamt denke ich, dass solche alltägliche Methode können sich langfristig positiv auf der Umwelt auswirken.
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
Le permis de conduire
Dans mon pays, la plupart des gens ont le permis de conduire, mais l'examen est trop difficile.
J'ai mon permis depuis deux ans et j'ai réussi l'examen à la sixième tentative. Peut-être ça semble beaucoup, mais ce n'est pas un mauvais résultat. L'examen se constitue de la moitié théorique, et de la moitié pratique. À la moitié théorique il y a trente-deux questions.
On doit gagner soixante-huit points pour réussir. Une question donne une quantité de points différents selon leur importance.
La moitié théorique, laquelle est la plus difficile, on doit faire deux tâches au terrain d'entraînement, et après on doit conduire pendant environ quarante minutes. On peut faire seulement deux erreurs donc beaucoup de gens là échouent. Je crois que cet examen est trop difficile, et les tâches sur le terrain d'entraînement sont absurdes.
Dec. 2, 2024
Friends
It's hard to have friends when you're an adult, especially as someone who don't like to go to parties and don't like to drink, which is the case for me. I only have three friends from my childhood that are still my close friends, and that's enough to me. One of them is always busy and can't hang out frequently. The other two rather be going out to drink, and I don't like being at places where people are commonly wasted because I start feeling out of place.
The friends we make are generally chosen by the places we attend. As an introvert, I live in an ironic paradox; I'll never meet introverts that could potentially bond with me because they are at their homes. The only solution are the internet, even though it's very different from real life. I'm sorry if this text sound confusing; sometimes, it's tricky to put your thoughts into words, even in our native languages.
Dec. 2, 2024
My first action story
As the plane flew low over the dark fields, Jake waited for a red signal near the forest. But nothing happened for a long time. “What does it mean? – asked Jake himself accusingly, - Where are them? I can’t waste on it all night long!”
He had been circled for twenty minutes around the fields, but it was no the signal anywhere. “It is something unclear” – murmured Jake, - “I should stop my engine, it’s too loud.” Jake landed the plane.
When he opened the cabin, everything kept the silence around him. Jake carefully got out of the plane and gazed on the forest, which was near him. Jake heard only last leaves, which were waved by a little wind. But nothing could break this quiet night.
Jake already forgot, that the nature can be so quiet. Every day he takes off his plane to fight with Germans. It was 1916. Today this fields have to become a battlefield. His job was to find German positions and told it to his general. Infantry should stay in forest and when they heard Jake plane, they should give the red signal. But there was no signal.
“They must have late” – said Jake decisively.
Suddenly, three strange men appeared from the forest. Due to the darkness, Jake couldn’t understand, who was them.
“Jake, why you are so late?” – asked the man, who went ahead.
“I’m just on time, I wait you for an hour.”
“Really? I’m so sorry, Jake! Come with me, you should say everything to the general” – said the man, thoroughly try not to say something wrong. Jake understood it.
“But why you come to me? I think, you will make a red signal…”
“Oh, really? I thought, if we meet you, it could be much safety. Isn’t it?”
“Maybe, yes” – answered Jake. But something strange was in this situation.
He tried to understand, who was these guys.
“Which battalion are you from?”
“From Seven Infantry battalion. Did you forget, Jake?”
“Oh, I’m sorry. It’s only for safety, you know…”
“Don’t worry, Jake, I understand…”
“What about Miky? How is he?”
“Oh, Miky? Miky… - the man was a little disappointed – Not so bad, he feels much better…”
Jake gasped. He looked like he was ready to fight.
“Miky was died in Battle of the Somma in august… You are the spy!”
The man gazed on him for a minute. Two others take their weapon and look at Jake with hostility. Suddenly, the man said ferociously:
“Hande hoch! Ich heise Marcus! Du bist gefangen!”
But Jake quickly jumped to him, took his knife and hit the man in chest. Two other Germans open the fire, Jake drop the knife in one of them and dashed to the plane as quick as he can. But German fell on the ground with deep scream and fire was stopped.
Jake stopped running and glanced on his enemies. All of them were lying on the ground without breath. And one person quickly run to Jake. But now he was his friend, Tomy.
“Jake! It’s me! I’m Tomy! We should go to our general now, German diversionists attacked us tonight, they were one of them!” – said Tomy.
Jake sighed and went to the forest with Tomy.
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
T3-L’utilisation du plastique, pour ou contre
L’utilisation du plastique, pour ou contre
De nos jours, le débat sur l’utilisation du plastique divise l’opinion publique. D’un côté, certaines personnes estiment que les usages du plastique jouent un rôle essentiel dans différents secteurs. En revanche, d’autres croient que l’utilisation du plastique peut poser une menace pour l’environnement ainsi que les écosystèmes.
À ce sujet, il est indéniable que les déchets plastiques entraînent plus des inconvénients que les avantages à long terme.
Premièrement, le gouvernement devrait contrôler les usages du plastique afin d’éviter le mal pour la planète sur laquelle on vit. Pour être précis, l’autorité peut encourager les gens à utiliser des sacs en papier et recycler le plastique pour réduire les déchets.
Deuxièmement, il est également crucial de sensibiliser les gens aux dangers des déchets plastiques pour la santé. En effet, selon des recherches récentes, il y a de nombreux microplastiques qui pourraient causer le cancer ou des maladies incurables.
En conclusion, bien que certaines personnes estiment que les rôles du plastique sont indispensables dans notre vie, je suis convaincu que les déchets plastiques peuvent polluer non seulement nos habitats mais aussi notre santé dans l’avenir.
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
« Terror » de Schirach
Bienvenue dans une pièce de théâtre dans qui le spectateur décide la fin.
Nous parlons d'une question de la morale et de la droite.
La pièce commence dans une salle d'audience avec le juge, le procureur, l'avocat de la défense et bien sûr l'accusé.
L'accusé qui s'appelle Lars Koch est pilote dans l'armée de l'air allemande.
Le 26 mai 2013 il a tué 164 personnes avec une force aérienne.
Les 164 personnes étaitent des passagers d'une avion de la Lufthansa détourné.
Des terrorists ont voulu précipiter l'avions dans l'Allianz Arena. Le soir mentionné était là un match de food entre l'Allemand et l'Angleterre.
70.000 seraient mortes.
Lars Koch a donc abattu un avion détourné par des terrorists avec 164 passageres pour sauver 70.000 personnes.
Quelques questions intéressant s'ajoutent:
- Pourquoi l'Allianz Arena n'était pas évacué ?
- Aurait-il tiré si sa femme était dans l'avion ?
- Une vie compte-t-elle plus que l'autre ?
Voici un résumé amusent de la pièce si quelqu'un est intéressé :
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rPRwu3J3-Ng
Et à la fin la question aux spectateurs:
Coupable ou pas coupable ?
Dec. 2, 2024
Day 24
This failure is necessary for our growth. Therfore, the braveness after failing is also necessary. We need to know why we failed and in order to repeat the same mistakes, we must not be disappointed but have confidence that we can do it again. Once we overcome failure and take one more step, then we can get good results.
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
Receta de macarons
Je n’aime pas la recette des macarons. Le chef n’a pas inclus tout qui le nécessaire dans la recette, ce qui a rendu le recette difficile pour moi et les macarons. Je pense que le chef n’a pas expliqué les choses correctement. De plus, je pense que les macarons sont quand meme plutot bons, mais ils seraient offensants pour un cuisinier de macarons professionnel.
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
500ペソのサンダル
最近、新しいサンダルが欲しくてネットでいろいろ調べました。私のサンダルはもうボロボロで、そろそろ替えようと思っていました。コスパのいいブランドはTevaとKeenです。おしゃれで足に気持ちがよくていいチョイスですが、ほかのブランドを試してみたかった。調べていた時、一番気に入ったデザインはこのモンベルのソックオンサンダルです：https://webshop.montbell.jp/goods/disp_fo.php?product_id=1129476
先の週末、もうネットで買いたかったが、アウトレットモールに行く予定があって、「そこに何かを見つかるかも」と思ってまだ買いませんでした。買わなくてよかった。アウトレットモールに「Travel Club」というアウトドアや旅行用グッズを売ってる店がありました。そこに見つかったのはたった一足（いっそく）残っていたモンベルのソックオンサンダルでした。そして私のサイズでした。そして割引きで売られていて、値段がただ500ペソでした。（千円ぐらいで）すごい偶然で買うしかなかったよね。なんか勝ったって感じです。（笑）
Dec. 2, 2024
Пауки
Мы уже открыли 46 000 видов пауков на планете и многие люди их боятся. Мне тоже не очень нравятся... Когда я вижу огромных австралических пауков, думаю каждый раз, что никто кроме черта их создал в самых глубоких пропоастях ада. Многие их ассоцируют со злом. Кстати, я недавно узнал, что у слова «паук» есть переносный смысл. Оно означает жадного человека, который эксплуатирует других. Интересно! Многие таже ассоцируют этих животных с грязью. На самом деле живут пауки только в очень чистых домах. Так, если у вас соседы по комнате с восьмью лапками, это доказывает, что вы живёте в здоровном месте.
Пауки играют очень важный экологический роль, потому что они ограничивают распространение насекомых. Известно, что некоторые насекомые (как комары) передают серьёзные заболевания человека. Поэтому, пауки могут нам помогать предупредить распространение проблематических заболеваний как малярия.
Паутины давно очаровывают людей. Некоторые виды пауков совсем не ткают паутины; другие, наоборот, могут покрывать целые сети туннелей шёлком.У шёлковых нитей пауков есть удивительные свойства. Они одновременно лёгки и очень плотны. В равных количествах, они 30 раз плотнее стала! Поэтому, они очень интересуют науков, которые хотели бы развить технологии синтетических волокон базированных на нитях пауков.
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
Lunedì 2 dicembre
Stamattina mi sono sentita stanchissima dopo essermi svegliata, sebbene avessi dormito a sufficienza. Dopo aver bevuto il caffè, le cose sono migliorate, però ne berrò un altro fra poco.
Non ho più le energie per lavorare, ma devo andare avanti comunque. Ce la farò nonostante la poca voglia, soprattutto perché spero che i nuovi cambiamenti mi portino più soldi in futuro.
Sarebbe bello se ci facessero una sorpresa a dicembre. In fondo, è il mese dei regali, della speranza, della ricompensa per tutto il nostro sforzo.
Somiglio a Don Chisciotte, che lottava contro i mulini a vento, però posso ancora avere speranza. Può darsi che io sia troppo coinvolta nei miei obiettivi, ma questo rimane da vedere.
Dec. 2, 2024
my opinion
I don't like American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because of that people not going to hospitals that's terrible, the other reason is doctor quality if doctor can't see many case that's a bad thing for a doctor because they can't learning What causes this is the first result.
Dec. 2, 2024
Dec. 2, 2024
Do People Like Virtual Sushi?
Based on this article.
https://news.yahoo.co.jp/articles/f51504a1b518e25bd7c4bcc6863cd910863798ef?page=1
Unique, traditional, and, above all, delicious, sushi is the epitome of Japanese cuisine. Being Japanese as well as an avid sushi enjoyer myself, I find conveyor belt sushi restaurants one of the better options for eating out and having a good time with friends and family. As with many other specialized Japanese fast food restaurants, their dishes are not strictly limited to what they advertise: They offer ramen, fruit parfait, karaage(Japanese chicken nuggets) for instance, not to mention many new types of sushi, such as avocado, beef, and tempura. Their ingenuity and mindset of experimentation seem to have roots in their beginnings, when a company decided to combine the old and new, streamlining the process of serving the traditional Japanese fast food using newly-invented conveyor belts. In modern times, some unexpected turns of events seem to have pushed conveyor sushi restaurants into the next phase of evolution.
It began with Covid
For the last few decades, Japan was slow to adopt newer technologies due possibly to its aging population. The situation changed dramatically, however, with the arrival of the pandemic. Under the State of Emergency, restaurants and Izakayas (Japanese pubs) were forced to follow very strict rules aimed at curbing infection cases, such as keeping distance from each other, wearing masks, installment of hand sanitizers and plastic boards, and so on. To reduce human contact as much as possible, many big chain restaurants turned to new technology and introduced tablets for customers to order their food on, which we now see installed in most restaurants big and small.
"Licking Boy" scandal
Food chains at large suffered severely due to the pandemic and strict measures by the government, but a certain sushi restaurant had a different misfortune. One of the biggest sushi restaurant chain Sushiro was devastated when a video went viral where a teenage boy licked the tip of a soy sauce bottle on the table, which was to be shared among customers. Even though it wasn't their fault and could have happened to any other sushi restaurants, the trust Sushiro had in their food hygiene policy was severely damaged and they experienced a precipitous drop in their stock prices.
Virtual solutions for human risk
In an apparent attempt to prevent the recurrence of such incidents, Sushiro reduced the amount of sushi on the conveyor belt. The less sushi on the conveyor belt, the lower the "human" risk, their idea seemed to be. As a result, it is now quicker to just order your sushi on the tablet than browse and pick up sushi on the conveyor belt. Also, there was already a case against the conveyor belt system even before the pandemic. Since the taste of sushi deteriorates and the likelihood of food poisoning increases when it's not picked up soon, a piece of sushi is usually discarded after making a few rotations. This creates food losses, which are bad for the environment and business alike.
Instead, they made this conveyor-belt experience virtual. According to the article, Sushiro is increasing the number of restaurants with a big touch screen, a system dubbed "Dejiro"(portmanteau of "digital" and "Sushiro"). On the screen, you can see moving pictures of sushi on a conveyor belt, virtually recreating the browsing experience. Not only is this new way of business advantageous for the company, customers seem to like it too. The author of this article speculates that this is because it feels like a game—you look at the screen, waiting for delicious-looking pieces of sushi that you'd like to order, and you find some unexpected kinds of sushi that you'd never thought you wanted.
Is this what the future of sushi restaurants looks like?
Since it creates a win-win situation for both companies and their customers, the digitization of conveyor belt sushi restaurants seems unavoidable. However, is it really the only way? I remember a friend of mine saying "disappointed" when she saw almost nothing on the conveyor belt at Sushiro. You have to practically order everything on your touch panel to get your sushi. There is nothing unique about the experience anymore: No excitement for unexpected discoveries, no rushing to get your sushi before it gets out of your reach, no defining characteristics that makes a conveyor belt sushi restaurant special. Now, it's almost the same as any other fast food restaurants.
There is no denying that technology has made our lives convenient. However, a little bit of enjoyable inconvenience can make our lives a little more fun, more authentic, and more unique. I believe Japan is where technology meets tradition, and I hope we can strike a good balance between new inventions and old culture, just like how conveyor belt sushi restaurants started.
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