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Schaukeln
Als ich in der Jugendzeit war, war ich deprimiert und habe ich oft dissoziiert. Ich fühlte mich, dass eine Glaswand zwischen der Welt und mir existiert, und Leben hat sich wie ein Zyklus angefühlt. Jeden Samstag bin ich in die Kirche gegangen, weil meine Familie katholisch ist. Seit ich 10 Jahre alt war bin ich nicht mehr religiös, aber ich konnte das zu meinen Eltern nicht erzählen. Ich war in einer Klasse mit Schüler von anderen Schulen. Die Kirche hat einen Spielplatz, und wenn wir Zeit hatten, durften wir draußen spielen. An einem Tag in der 10. Klasse ist ein Mädchen auf mich zugekommen, und obwohl ich noch nie mit ihr gesprochen habe, haben wir wie gute Freunde geredet. Auf den Schaukeln hat sie mir gesagt, dass sie an Gott nicht glaubt. Ich habe das zu ihr auch gestanden. Die geistige Glaswand ist ein bißchen gebrochen, und ich habe mich real gefühlt. Jetzt erinnert Schaukeln mich an Freiheit, weil ich in diesem Moment wirklich "frei" war.
April 14, 2025
April 14, 2025
My Old House Site
My family lived in a small village when I was a child, where people farmed to make a living.
Years later, my siblings and I all left that village and worked in cities. During the time we were away, my father and mother passed away.
The house we used to live in was still there, but it was really shabby compared with other families' newly built houses.
According to current Chinese policy, to own a house in the countryside, people should be members of the rural collective economy, which means you have a piece of land in a village and engage in farm work for a living.
Since we moved to cities to work for the government, we lost our land at that time. Although our old house is still there,
Officially we have no right to renovate our old house. However, we cannot bear the thought of losing our house site.
I have been wondering if I can renovate our old house. Even if I can, there must be a lot of work that needs to be done in advance.
April 14, 2025
Mutual Criticism
In this life, we’re taught to be strict with ourselves and forgiving toward others. That’s how harmony grows—when we hold ourselves accountable, yet extend grace to those around us.
But lately, I’ve been noticing the opposite. We’re quick to point fingers, to dissect the flaws of others, sometimes even harshly. And when it comes to our own mistakes? We brush them off. Defend them. Ignore them.
Maybe it’s easier to critique than to self-reflect. But I believe the world would be softer, kinder, if we all swapped lenses—just for a while.
April 14, 2025
Sur moi
Je m’appelle Lauren. J’ai vingt et un ans et je suis un élève a l‘université. J’étudie un cours d’optométrie et je deviendrai une optometrist un jour.
Dans mon temps libre, j’aime lire des livres, en particulièrement des livres fantasme. En plus, j’aime écouter de la musique et mes artistes préférée sont Gracie Abrams, SZA et Giveon.
J’ai appris le français dans au lycée mais c’était il y a cinq ans. Je veux l’apprendre a nouveau parce que je pense que sais le français serais utile.
April 14, 2025
Resumen de HP y la orden del fénix - Parte 20
Parte veinte.
Los alumnos comenzaron a hacer los exámenes de MHB a lo largo de varios días. Los examinadores se alegraron mucho de conocer y poner a prueba a Harry, e incluso le ofrecieron puntos extra en Defensa Contra las Artes Oscuras por conjurar un Patronus. Todos los exámenes salieron bien, incluido el de Pociones. Sin embargo, cuando llegó la hora de hacer el examen de Astronomía, muchos estudiantes no terminaron porque estaban distraídos: Umbridge y un grupo de aurores intentaban detener a Hagrid. McGonagall quedó atrapada en el fuego cruzado cuando corrió a ayudarlo y fue golpeada por un encantamiento aturdidor, pero Hagrid escapó al Bosque Prohibido.
A Harry le costó conciliar el sueño esa noche y su examen de Historia de la Magia fue un desastre. Se quedó dormido a la mitad y empezó a soñar con Voldemort en el Departamento de Misterios y esta vez tenía a Sirius. Harry se despertó sobresaltado, con la cicatriz palpitándole de dolor, y tuvo que salir antes de tiempo del examen sin terminarlo. Quería hablar con McGonagall, pero ella estaba en el Hospital San Mungo, incapacitada, y decidió que tenían que rescatar a Sirius. Reclutó a Ron y a Hermione, y Ginny y Luna insistieron en ayudar también. Crearon una distracción para que Harry pudiera colarse en el despacho de Umbridge y usar su chimenea. Cuando Harry visitó Grimmauld Place, Kreacher le dijo que Sirius estaba en el Departamento de Misterios, y cuando regresó al despacho de Umbridge, ella lo atrapó.
April 14, 2025
April 13, 2025
April 13, 2025
Music Festival
On the twelfth and thirteenth of this month, an outdoor concert named Peak Zebra Music Festival was held in my city, and it was near my neighborhood.
I didn't buy a ticket. Maybe I'm not the target audience as I'm much older than the typical concert - goers.
However, during the concert, I took my wife there to see the scene outside the concert.
When we got close to the concert spot, we saw many cars parked on the surrounding roads. There were many security workers at every intersection, and a large crowd of audience members was heading towards the concert.
As I had expected, almost all of them were teenagers. I guessed they were either in college or high school. In Chinese, we have a phrase “啃老族”, which means that young people don't work but live relying on their parents. I wondered if some of these concert - going teenagers were like this, considering the money they spent on tickets and trendy outfits.
The audience members wore fashionable clothes and colorful makeup, dressing themselves in a cutting - edge style.
Maybe only young people, who have time, money and energy, are suitable for the concert.
I learned from social media about how they behaved at the concert. They danced, shook their heads and sometimes made exaggerated gestures.
Maybe that is what being young is about.
April 13, 2025
President Trump’s Tariff Policies
President Trump’s tariff policies have caused chaos around the globe. For Japan, exports of automobiles and other related goods are of concern. In addition, we will be forced to import even more American agricultural products, creating problems for Japan's agricultural sector. Personally, our family doesn't buy many American products, but we cannot avoid further inflation. In particular, Apple, Google and amazon are indispensable in my life, so my first thought was that I had to buy a new iPhone right away before the prices went up. However, yesterday, the U.S. announced that tariffs on smartphones and PCs will be excluded. I understand that Americans will also be affected by these tariffs, because iPhones are made in China. Trump is such a selfish and opportunistic man.
April 13, 2025
April 13, 2025
April 13, 2025
始めた文章...です！
皆さん、今日は！お元気ですか？じゃ、今日は僕のlanguagecorrectの始まりポーストですよ。大学生の時に半年から日本語の授業を受けました。でも4年後で、日本語を全然勉強しません。ちょっと寂しいですね？が、13月前で情熱があってまた日本語がしりたいですから。毎日1時間位でAnki（暗記のプログラム）で使います。Ankiはすごいプログラムですよ。Ankiのカードは日本語で言葉と文があります。では逆のカードは英語で説明があります。更なる同じのカードが度々見られているまでカードが知られていました。
残念ながら今まで会話練習を全然しませんでした。それから、始めた文章です！それはどうでしたか？よろしくお願いします！
April 13, 2025
April 13, 2025
April 13, 2025
日本語能力試験に合格したからといって、日本語が上手なわけではありません。
日本語能力試験はアウトプットを評価しません。それは大きな問題だと思います。言語を話すためには、他の人の言葉を理解するだけでなく、自分の意見を話したり表現したりすることも必要です。試験でアウトプットが評価されないなら、認定書を持っていても、話せない人が多いと思います。 (私も含めます。だから、少しずつ話したり書いたりするようにします。) 理解があるはずだけど、アウトプットというのは大切なことなので、無視すべきではないと思います。だから、日本語能力試験を合格するために日本語を勉強する人がこれを読んでいるなら、そのポイントを気にしてください。
April 13, 2025
Journée Mondiale de la Santé
Le lundi 7 mars était la journée mondiale de la santé. Dans cette article, je discuterai comme serait un système ideale de santé pour tous les personnes.
La prèmiere chose que devrait avoir un système parfait de santé est que tous les personnes doivent avoir accès à médicaments de qualité por traiter ses maladies, et ne traiter pas ses maladies avec des médicaments maison. Également, tout le monde doit avoir accès a hôpitaux et médecins publiques.
Un système parfait de santé devrait inclure attention à la santé mentale de tous les personnes, avec des programmes publiques pour prevenir suicide et mal-être.
Enfin, cette système aurait aussi technologie basique pour les lieux en pauverté et technologie un peux plus avancée pour traiter maladies comme le cancer autour du monde.
April 13, 2025
April 13, 2025
Someone in the attic
Oggi vi parlerò del libro che sto leggendo, l’ho cominciato da poco ma mi sembra abbastanza buono!
La storia comincia con una donna che si sta rilassando nel suo bagno bevendo un bicchiere di vino, quando ascolta un rumore, come se qualcuno stasse camminando nella casa. È ritrovata uscita il giorno seguente, si sarebbe annegata « per colpa del alcol ».
Dopo, seguiamo una donna che si è traslata da poco nella stessa casa con I suoi bambini. Si chiama Julia. È « l’amica »della vittima, anche se in realtà si odiano. La figlia di Julia gli mostra un video in cui si può vedere un uomo in casa loro che si nasconda nella soffitta. Julia non ci crede, all’inizio non ci presta attenzione e pensa che è un montaggio. Poi, succedono delle cose strane, in notte, il bambino ascolta rumori strani come se fosse un uomo dietro la porta, come se qualcuno lo guardasse mentre dorme.
Il libro si chiama : someone in the attic di Andre Mara :)
April 13, 2025
My favorite seasonal dish
Well, to be honest I don't really have a favorite seasonal dish.
I don't even have a favorite dish if I think about it.
But what I do have is a favorite fruit, and fruit is seasonal.
I do love strawberries and raspberries.
I believe that they not only look incredibly delicious but the also taste fantastic.
April 13, 2025
Something I would never wear
If I ask someone, what a piece of clothing is, that this person would never wear, many would take a moment to think about.
Then, they would listing items of clothing, that they percieve as unflattering, and ugly.
Things, that once were worn by many people around the world, because they were considered pretty, and trendy at the time.
But trends change.
That, what was once considered cool is now uncool.
However, I would take a different take on this question.
Let's look at an example.
If you would wander the streets, and would ask a random person what they think about skinny jeans, it is likely that the answer will often times be the same.
That they are ugly.
I would disagree with this statement.
I don't believe that anything is necesserally ugly.
There are people out there, who can wear them and look absolutely stunning.
Even though it is not something for me, and I would never wear them, I don't judge people who do.
Also, I don't wear them not because I think that they are ugly, I don't wear them because I have fat legs, and don't want to highlight them.
This is why I never wore them, even while they were trendy (Yes, I was a child. Yes, I was a really self-conscious child).
Still, I don't judge people for what they are wearing, and I would never say that a piece of clothing is ugly.
I would just say that it is ugly on me.
April 13, 2025
What do you usually do in your free time? (relaxing/ active)
please correct me, I would be grateful sa much :))))
I usually go for a walk to park. I tend to read a lot of books. I'm really into garden. I like plant new flowers or trees. I prefer study than work out. I hardly ever listen to podcast. At the weeknd I loveeee sleeping in. I always binge-watch in my free time or when I must study. I scroll social media every day. I don't like clean up. So I usually relax in my free time.
April 13, 2025
April 13, 2025
Vritras Legende
In der indischen Mythologie ist Tvashta der Schmied der Götter und auch der Erfinder vieler Künste und Techniken. Er hatte sich einen Sohn namens Trishira („Dreiköpfig“) gemacht. Ein anderer seiner Namen war „Vishvarupa“ („der Vielförmige“). Vishvarupa war höchst mächtig. Einer seiner Köpfe trank den Soma (das heilige Getränk der Götter) und ein anderer wollte nach dem Universum selbst fressen. Alle glänzten stärker als die Sonne. Die Götter befürchteten die Macht dieser Kreatur, also benutzte Inda, der König der Götte, seinen Vajra (den Blitz), um Trishira niederzustrecken. Ironischerweise wurde Indras Vajra von Tvashta geschmiedet.
Tvashata, voller Kummer, wurde rachsüchtig und führte ein Ritual aus, um einen zweiten Sohn zu machen. Er machte aber einen Aussprachefehler in den Beschwörungsformel und statt um einen Sohn, „der Indra besiegt“ zu bitten, bat er um einen Sohn, der „von Indra besiegt wird“. Im Deutschen sind „Sieger“ und „Besiegte“ zwei Wörter mit unterschiedlichen Phonemen aber im Sanskrit liegt der Unterschied in der Betonung: „indrashatrU“ (mit betonten Endvokal) bedeutet „der Zerstörer/Sieger von Indra„ aber „indrashAtru“ (mit betontem <a>) bedeutet „von Indra besiegt“.
Der kreierte Sohn hieß Vritra und war eine Art riesiger Schlange. Er war trotzdem mächtig genug, um das Wasser der ganzen Welt zurückzuhalten. Sein Schicksal war aber schon geschrieben, oder eher, ausgesprochen, und Indra tötete ihn, um eine Dürre zu vermeiden. In diesem Moment fing das befreite Wasser an, als Ströme und Flüsse überall auf Erde zu fließen.
Vritras Legende illustriert es, wie wichtig eine richtige Aussprache in religiösen Ritualen ist. Die wedische Religion (eine frühe Stufe in der Entwicklung des heutigen Hinduismus) umfasste viele sehr komplexe (manchmal tagelange) Rituale, und der kleinste Fehler konnte ein ganzes Ritual wirkungslos machen.
April 13, 2025
Altre frasi sul calcio
Il difensore si è impegnato nel contrasto.
Questa squadra giocano bene sotto pressione.
Ha messo un gran cross in area.
Pure l’altra squadra ha pensato lo stesso.
Forse possiamo ancora vincere.
Quell'attacco li ha confusi.
Esso è il nostro punto debole. (So che “esso” è letterario solamente, ma voglio communque impararlo.)
Non vedo l’ora di guardare la partita.
Quanto tempo ci vuole per arrivare allo stadio?
Hai guidato la scorsa volta, vero?
Allora, sto guidando oggi.