Recently corrected public entries
👉 Register to view more posts, get corrections on your writing and correct others.March 1, 2021
March 1, 2021
March 1, 2021
Journal
What is the most annoying thing when you are driving a car?
For me, I hate to receive phone calls when I am driving. If you answer the call, you have to stop the car first. If you decide not to answer the call, you will be afraid that someone may have an emergency, so it's really annoying when you receive a phone call while driving a car. Another annoying thing is that you drive at night. Although car lights are very bright at night, driving is not as convenient as it is during the daytime. You have to be very careful when driving a car at night, and you easily get tired. The third annoying thing is that you drive on rainy days. Although it's daytime and the windscreen wipers work efficiently, driving during rainy days you will get bad sight, and also, the roads are so slippery that it's easy to get accidents. Ok, that is all the annoying things when people are driving a car so far I can consider.
March 1, 2021
3.01 articles
<2021 KMA>
MOGWAA and ASEUL have won the Best Dance & Electronic Album and Song category, respectively, in the 2021 Korean Music Awards held yesterday.
MOGWAA received the award for “Open Mind,” his EP album from last August, and ASEUL for “Bye Bye Summer,” one of the double title tracks of her studio album “Slow Dance,” which was released last March.
In response to winning the award, MOGWAA took to Instagram yesterday to say, “I am really grateful for everyone who cares, loves and supports me. I will buy many quality instruments and work harder on making better tracks.”
ASEUL also thanked people on her Instagram yesterday. The caption says, “I am really grateful for my friends, fellow artists and selection committee members who congratulated me as if it were their achievements.”
You can check out the winners in the other categories here.
<ASEUL>
ASEUL’s "Bye Bye Summer" is like a grade-B SF movie produced by an indie movie director.
ASEUL won the Best Dance & Electronic Song category in the 2021 Korean Music Award yesterday. Since I hadn’t listened to it before, I gave it a shot today.
From the very intro, I got the ominous feeling that her vocal style and melodies might remind me of Neon Bunny. And I was right.
Leaving her debatable vocal abilities aside, I couldn’t get my head around the mixing quality and arrangement of “Bye Bye Summer.” I guess I could get by with the off-mark drone sound in the intro and too much reverb on her voice, which was probably ramped up to hide her incompetent vocals. But the chorus was definitely too much for me. Its instrumentation was bad, so many instruments clashing with each other, and unpleasant resonances popped up everywhere from the upper-mid to the high-end parts.
I even see the nomination of this track is unfair to the other nominees (IDOTAPE, MOGWAA, Jangmyungsun and Two Tone Shape), who produced solid tracks. For me, when it comes to dance music in particular, the sonic quality of a song should be taken more seriously than whatever messages behind it. I mean, who would’ve enjoyed watching “Avengers: Endgame” if its visual effects and aesthetics had reminded viewers of “Godzilla” from 1998?
Listen to ASEUL’s “Bye Bye Summer” and maybe share your thoughts as well.
March 1, 2021
March 1, 2021
Journal
I can thoroughly feel you. The reason you think so is because you are still young, which means you have a lot of time to spend. If you reach a certain age, like in your fifties, you will definitely change your mind, and I bet you will never do those so-called "relaxing and enjoyable" things again or at least you will decline it to the minimum. Of course, it is just my assumption and it is not necessarily right. However, everyone has his own attitude towards hobbies, no matter what hobbies they have, as long as those hobbies are legal, they are all right.
March 1, 2021
Journal
Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it.
March 1, 2021
Journal
Everybody has different hobbies. Playing cards, drinking alcohol, exercising, traveling and so on, and these may all become hobbies of some people. In short, what hobbies are more beneficial and positive? I think there are two kinds of hobbies we should take priority the most. One is beneficial to our health, another is to improve our knowledge and skills, because these two kinds of hobbies are both meaningful things. So please be careful about your hobbies. If they are not able to bring you benefits to your body and your knowledge and skills, you better think about whether you should quit it.
March 1, 2021
March 1, 2021
March 1, 2021
March 1, 2021
Der Präsident von Brasilien
Bolsonaro ist der größte Fehler, das Brasilien durch Auswählen machte.
Er ist besonders Dumm. Wir erreichten am der letzten Woche die traurige Marke von 250.000 toten und er sprach noch, dass die Pandemie eine falsche Geschichte ist.
Wir haben keinen Präsident aber einen wahnsinnigen Esel, der an die Macht kam.
Er habe zum Beispiel gestern gesagt, dass Masken keine wichtige Maßnahme gegen die Pandemie ist..! Für ihn ist Cloroquina der Heiland und andere FakeNews er mag teilen. Aber ohne Trump ist er nun allein und ich hoffe, er kommt niemals wieder an die Macht.
March 1, 2021
Writing Prompt - ability
Den wasn't your ordinary high schooler. He had a special ability to see when and how people would die. This was helpful because he could help save the lives of the people around him. However, there was a catch to this ability. Some deaths aren't preventable. This was quite rare, as Den has never come across someone with an unpreventable death. But little did poor Den know, today would be the day he would meet the person who he wouldn't be able to save.
Den walked down the wooden stairs, meeting his younger sister at the dining table. Today is her first day of kindergarten, so she is very nervous. But Den assured her she would be fine. However, he noticed something wrong. Her body was glowing red, causing him to gulp. This meant that she would die today. Den took a deep breath. He won't let that happen to her; he promised himself that he would always keep his younger sister safe. Glancing at her glowing body once more, he learned that she would get hit by a car. Okay, that's easy to prevent. Just watch over her carefully as she crosses the street. "Ready to go, kids?" Their dad asks, and the siblings nod, getting their jackets.
Den and his sister walked down the sidewalk in the cold breeze until they had to cross. They made sure there were no cars nearby and walked across. But right in the middle, they hear the loud screeching of tires and a scream that would change Den's life.
March 1, 2021
Quiero hacer chilaquiles
Durante casi una semana he querido probar una receta para hacer chilaquiles pero cada día resulta mejor comer las sobras de los días anteriores. Siempre prefiero comer lo que ya tengo preparado para no olvidarlo y echarlo a perder.
Nunca he comido chilaquiles pero esta receta tiene buena pinta y creo que sería muy divertido comer algo nuevo con mi familia.
March 1, 2021
Smoking risks
Smoking is harmful to health and the environment, causing many diseases in smokers and people in their countries and polluting the environment.<br>
What are its disadvantages? How can it be prevented?<br>
Smoking is harmful to health and the environment; <br>
it causes many diseases for smokers and those around them, and causes pollution of the environment. WHO studies indicate that smoking causes about 6 million deaths per year, more than 83% of which are caused by direct smoking, while more than 16% of deaths are caused by secondhand smoke.<br>
Studies show that few people are aware of the health risks of tobacco use. A 2009 study in China found that only 38% of smokers realize that smoking causes coronary heart disease, and only (27%) know it causes stroke,On the other hand, only 15% of the world's population has comprehensive national cessation services to give up smoking.<br>
smoking risks<br>
1- Causes bad breath, discoloration of teeth, yellowing of nails, and wrinkling of the skin.<br>
2- The heart rate increases by 10-25 beats per minute, increasing the risk of fatal heart attacks and strokes by 15%.<br>
3- It causes many diseases for the digestive system, such as: peptic ulcers, gallstones, stomach burns, Crohn's disease, and finally stomach cancer.<br>
4- Disrupts the distribution of oxygen-rich blood to parts of the body and increases the risk of peripheral vascular disease.<br>
5- Smoking during pregnancy increases the risk of miscarriage, premature birth, small birth size, congenital malformations.<br>
6- Increases the risk of osteoporosis in women<br>
7- Exposure to smoke residues causes damage to DNA, fats, and proteins in the body, causing high blood glucose and insulin resistance, which in turn increases the risk of type 2 diabetes.<br>
Giving up smoking:<br>
There are several ways help the smoker to give up smoking:<br>
1- Get rid of all cigarettes, lighters<br>
2- Wash all clothing to get rid of the smell of smoke stuck out.<br>
3- Breaking the habit, for example, if a person is used to smoking after meals, he can engage himself in walking or a friend's conversation.<br>
4- Replace the cigarette with sugar-free chewing gum, mint or any other alternative when you feel like smoking.<br>
5- Ask for help and support from those around the smoker, such as friends and family, and join the many online support groups.<br>
6- Set a specific date for quitting smoking, and inform your friends and family of this appointment.<br>
At last, the fumes cause a lot of diseases and lead to death, so they should stay away from it for smokers and not approach it for for those who haven't tried the tasting.
March 1, 2021
Feb. 28, 2021
Demerit of normal life.
Our world is back to normal step by step?
Start from last week all the restaurants, bars…allow closed at 10pm.
The very first week of our almost “normal life”.
What have happened?
Things I hated so much!
First, traffic jam!
Last 3 months a lot of people need to working at home, students no need go to school…
The road condition is amazingly smooth.
But this week is horrible.
Second, Drunk Person at street.
Usually, you will see many drunk person at around 12pm or later.
Since restaurants and bars closed at 10pm.
Last night when I walking to the train station from a bar.
I saw at 3 drunk persons sleep on the street.
Now, I like our un-normal life more than the current normal life.
Feb. 28, 2021
El azúcar
Aunque ahora solo se asocie con los dulces y las dietas, el azúcar tiene una historia muy complicada. Originalmente, la planta que lo produce se hallaba en India y el Sur de Asia. Hace mucho tiempo, los granjeros encontraron cómo extraerlo de la planta, pues parcialmente. Averiguaron cómo extraer el jugo de azúcar de la planta. Aún este jugo es bebida popular en algunos lugares del mundo. Gracias a Alexander Magno, llegó al Medio Oriente y Europa. Plantaciones de azúcar se establecieron donde se puede, principalmente en el sur. Con la exploración y colonización de África y las Americas por los europeos, se llegó a esos lugares también. Ya que se valía mucho, el azúcar era muy caro, al menos en Europa, durante este tiempo. Con la industrialización, el precio de azúcar se ha declinado dramáticamente. A pesar de esto, incluso durante el siglo XX, la melaza estaba más disponible que el azúcar.
Todos nosotros sabemos que el azúcar está bien en moderación. Sin embargo, ¿qué significa moderación? La respuesta no es tan clara, al menos en mi opinión. Me parece que cada institución tiene su propio número de lo que considera "saludable". Al final, he adoptado la estrategia de comer lo mínimo de azúcar posible. Esta no es muy fácil. En nuestros días, se pone en un montón de cosas. ¡Hay muchos que no te das cuenta de que lo tienen hasta que miras al paquete! Por ejemplo, muchas sopas de tomate lo tienen. Además, ¿cuál se identifica como azúcar? La fruta tiene azúcar natural, pero te es saludable.
Al fin y al cabo, tenemos que cuidarlos a nuestros cuerpos. La historia de azúcar es larga, triste y complicada, y ha demostrado lo bueno y lo malo de los seres humanos. A lo largo del tiempo, nos ha atraído. Tenemos que equilibrar nuestras dietas, pero no significa que es necesario que lo elimine.
Dos oraciones con "tal como/tal y como".
1. Es tal como te dije ayer.
2. ¡Será tal y como nos explicó Julia, pero lo dudo mucho!
Feb. 28, 2021
我的生日
我的生日是五月十五日。我已经多次庆祝生日，但我仍然爱着我的生日。一切都是绿色的，外面有很多花。去年是我的生日星期五的，这是庆祝我生日的完美日子。我通常邀请很多家人和很多朋友庆祝我的生日，可是去年是冠状病毒来的。我的妈妈没有能来，我的岳父母也没有能来。我没有能邀请很多人。我邀请了妹妹和我的朋友以及他们的家人。星期四晚上，妹妹给我打电话。她说她的小儿子生病了，他们不能来。我好难过，这么糟糕的生日！
早上我女儿来到我们的卧室。我的丈夫和女儿唱歌我“生日快乐”！因为我有空闲的一天，我没需要上班。爸爸妈妈给我打电话。我岳父母给我打电话。我的朋友在Facebook上写生日快乐。我喜欢生日礼物,可是今天我决定自己买礼物。我上星期买的黑色钢琴在客厅。我从早餐开始，然后弹钢琴。我去超市买食物。我做了很多食物：沙拉，肉菜，蛋糕。我女儿从学校回家，帮我做饭。我丈夫给我送了漂亮的花。晚上我的朋友和她的家人一起来了。我们吃了非常好吃的晚饭，喝了好喝的酒。我们聊了几个小时，跳舞。生日快乐！
Feb. 28, 2021
Feb. 28, 2021
Journal
It is merely 3:30 am now, but I woke up. I went to bed at 11 pm last night. It was not so early. In recent years, my sleep has always been in this kind of situation: go to sleep later and wake up in the middle of the night. After a while, I fell asleep again, and then woke up again. Fall asleep and wake up two or three times during one night. It may be troublesome for someone else to have this kind of sleep, but for me, it doesn't matter because I can take advantage of it efficiently. When I wake up, I write paragraphs in English. When I am sleepy, I just go to sleep again. I never feel bored when I wake up in the middle of the night, because I have positive things to do and I am always afraid that I don't have enough time to do them.
Feb. 28, 2021
Arogancja
Bardzo lubię pomogać ludziom, choć myślę, że mam więcej do się uczenia. Nie uważam siebie za autorytetem, z wyjątkiem, gdy chodzi o mój ojczysty język, czyli włoski. Jestem poliglotem oraz pisarzem i używam języków codziennie. Włoski to język, którego używam więcej i ponieważ jestem pisarzem, musiałem uczyć się języka intesywnie. Dzięki temu znam włoski lepiej niż innych Włochów, ale rozumiem też, że ludzie mówią tak jak chcą i gdy ktoś mówi różnie ode mnie, to nie znaczy, że mówi niepoprawnie. Ma tylko różny styl.
Przez to wszystko jestem tutaj na LangCorrect. Lubię pomagać ludziom uczyć się mojego ojczystego języka i bo mam taką głębną wiedzę włoskiego, myślę, że moja pomoc im jest użyteczna.
Dzisiaj poprawiłem tekst pewnej osoby tutaj na LC. Bardzo zdziwiłem się, bo tekst jest bardzo dobrze napisany. Użył poetyckiego języka i bardzo wysokiego rejestru w ogóle poprawnie. Popełnił kilka błędów, ale wydawały mi się raczej przeoczeniami. Tylko nie polubiłem, że użył kilku słów, które po włosku są trochę przestarzałe, nawet gdy mówisz poetycko. Niektóre z tych słów wcale nie są już używane, inne są nadal używane, a tylko w bardzo określonych sytuacjach i nie przez wszystkich (w ogóle chodzi o styl). Ja polecałem, żeby nie użył takich słów, bo Włosi nie używają ich często i brzmią bardzo źle, gdy używane w niepoprawnych sytuacjach. Skomentował... ale nigdy nie oczekałbym takiej reakcji. Dał mi link do filmików, w których używali tych słów.
W przypadku tych słów, które Włosi nie używają, zrozumiałem, że usłyszał źle. Po włosku mówi się "con la", a nie "colla", które brzmi przestarzale. Nie zgadzał się ze mną i napisał, że słyszy "colla". To fajnie, gdy nie zgadza się ze mną, a ja jestem Włochem i jestem pewien, że dowolny Włoch usłyszałby "con la".
Gdy chodzi o inne słowa, nie zrozumiał kontekstu. Te słowa są używane, ale bardzo rzadko i w określonych sytuacjach. Tylko dlatego, że usłyszał tych słów w tych sytuacjach, to nie znaczy, że są zawsze używane. Gdy używa się ich w codziennym życiu, brzmią bardzo źle i przestarzale. Nawet gdy użył poetyckiego języka, jeszcze myślę, że nie użył tych słów poprawnie.
Szczerze mówiąc bardzo polubiłem jego tekst. Mówił o jego problemach ucząc się niemieckiego i miałem pomysł napisać coś podobnego związanego z moim doświadczeniem z polskim. Nie wiem, dlaczego był tak zły na mnie. Postarał się poprawić moje korekty i to znak arogancji.
W życiu trzeba pokory, bo nikt nie zna wszystkiego. Nikt nie przestaje się uczyć. Poza tym ja tylko dał radę; gdy nie chce jej zaakceptować, to fajnie. Nie jestem "językowym policjantem", który może cię aresztować, gdy nie mówisz tak jak ja. Mówię serdecznie: bądźcie pokorni.
Feb. 28, 2021
Auf Wiedersehen Frankfurt
Letzte Woche habe ich die ganze Zeit mich beschäftigt, mich meinen engsten Freuden verabschieden. Dieses außergewöhnliches Erlebnis musste an einem Ende kommen. Ich bin so glücklich, dass ich hier eine Familie gefunden hatte.
Ich habe jedoch nicht geweint, ich war so zufrieden mit meiner Zeit in Deutschland und jetzt kann ich alle meine Bilder sehen und hoffen, dass ich einen Tag in Frankfurt zurück bin und dass alle die Erinnerung zurückkommen können.
Die letzten Tage musste ich verschiedene häusliche Objekten loswerden. Geräte verkaufen, Besteck an Freunde schenken und die Wohnung überall reinigen. Ich war ein bisschen enttäuscht, wenn mein Hausmeister mir gesagt hat, dass ich ein "Sauberbeitrag" bezahlen musste, weil meine Wohnung war nicht sauber genug. 75 Euro dafür? Ich fand das ein bisschen sehr übertreibt, wenn ich stundenlang sie geputzt hatte... Aber was kann man machen?
Bis bald Frankfurt.
Feb. 28, 2021
Katte
Jeg har altid været vild med katte. Da jeg var 13 år gammel, bad jeg min mor om jeg ikke kunne få en kat. Det var ikke så nemt, for min mor er allergisk til katte, men til sidst lad hun mig vedtage en kat og jeg var i den syvende himmel. Hun var calico-katten og jeg har aldrig set en kat som hende, sort og rød, derfor var jeg meget lykkelig og stolt, for jeg troede at hun var utroligt smuk. Min bror kaldte hende Kinia og jeg kunne godt lide det navn. Vi var de bedste veninder og hun plejede at sove på mit seng. Nogle gange var jeg ikke hjemme, for jeg rejste og da jeg kom hjem, min familie sagde mig, at Kinia har forsvundet, men da jeg gik ud og begyndte at kalde hende, kom hun altid tilbage med det samme. Huk elskede at løbe i vores stue og skjule sig inde i sofaen. Hun kunne ikke lide da mennesker ville røre hende. Hun havde et langt liv, hun døde da hun var circa 17 år gammel.
Nu bor jeg i Israel og her har jeg ikke en, men cirka 12 katte som jeg giver mad hver dag. Min yndlings kat kalder hedder Gloria, men jeg kan ikke lide det navn og kalder hende altid forskellige navne på portugisisk. Hun har meget store øjne og en kort hale. Jeg ville gerne tage hende med når jeg kommer snart tilbage til Portugal, men hun har altid livet udenfor of jeg ville ikke lukke hende i et lille hus i en by. Jeg føler hun er mere lykkelig her og jeg skal selvølgelig savne hende meget.
Feb. 28, 2021
Thoughts
I feel so tired. Perhaps I’m ill. Perhaps, my shivering body reflects my emotional state.
Yesterday, when I arrived at home she was waiting for me. I wasn’t in my best emotional moment because I had just come home. She came and started to explain how she was feeling about our coexistence at home.
My resolutions:
-Express myself when I need something or when something bothers me.
-Stay in my center. What is important to me and no ignore it.
-Don’t wait until she gives the first step. I could do it.
-It is so difficult living with a friend.
-I don’t have enough energy to guess how she feels or what she wants or what she expects.
-I’m going to prioritize my objectives in my life rather than people who round me are feel comfortable.
-
Show Italics Staff replied5 5 yesterday
-
Make it easier to see a poster’s native language in the mobile version of LangCorrect5 2 Aug. 13, 2026
-
Corrections at the word level; not individual letter changes. Staff replied16 11 Aug. 12, 2026
-
Mark language variants more clearly5 4 Aug. 12, 2026
-
Bring back the messenger / DM Staff replied28 27 Aug. 12, 2026
-
Provide a "Thank you" button3 5 Aug. 12, 2026
-
Ability to bookmark other people's posts privately? Staff replied11 5 Aug. 1, 2026
-
Let post authors rate corrections as helpful or not9 12 Aug. 1, 2026
-
Adding pictures, videos, and audio to the journal entry Staff replied1 4 July 21, 2026
-
An AI button to explain corrections like what changed, why and the rule behind it (premium)2 0 July 21, 2026
16:58:50 (UTC)
Streaks reset at midnight (00:00)