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March 6, 2021

Boca a Boca

Já acabei Boca a Boca, uma série brasileira que está disponível no Netflix. (Não se preocupe: eu não dou spoilers nenhuns.) A série se passa na pequena cidade de Progresso onde a maiora ocupação é a criação de gado. Apesar do seu nome, esta cidade é conservadora e isolada, que é uma tensão central na narrativa.

Há uma doença misteriosa que ameaça os adolescentes da cidade. É transmitida pelo beijo e rouba as suas vítimas de todas sensações e emoções. A propagação da doença é fomentada pelas festas raves na beira da cidade onde os jovens beijam-se como qualquer meia-orgia.

Esta série envolve muitas temas: as diferenças de classe, as redes sóciais, a homofobia, e a pandemia. A narrativa faz muitas perguntas das quais não todas estão resolvidas no fim. Eu achei-a muito interessante e espero ver uma segunda temporada.

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charles_spence

March 6, 2021

6. Marz - Helene Fischer

Ich habe HF das erste Mal auf YouTube gehört. Die Video is sehr dumm und kitschig deswegen habe ich auch gedacht dass das Lied dumm ist.

Aber habe ich nochmal gehort ohne dem Video und eigentlich ich finde das Lied war sehr gut. Sie kann sehr gut singen und die Melodie war auch sehr gut.

Ich habe vor dieser Stunde Helene Fischer und Tom Jones, SexBomb auch geschaut - wow sie hat wirklich ein schöne Stimmer.

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lrom

March 6, 2021

שלום לכולם

אני צריך לתרגל את העברית שלי
?אבל אני לא מדבר טוב. יש פה אנשים מישראל
אני מפורטגל ואני לא יהודי או דתי. אני רק אוהב ללמוד שפות

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kazu

March 6, 2021

Friend's Birthday

On June 22nd, it was my friend's birthday. So, we went to a beer garden with our friend's to celebrate his birthday. We had prepared a birthday plate to supprise him without telling him. It looked like he was verry happy when my other friend brought the plate, but at the same time, I was also supprised because my name was also written on the plate like " Happy Birthday Shinpei(my friend's name) and Kazu(my name)". Actually, it's my birthday on June 29th, so my they had prepared without me knowing. I was really happy about that.

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vinaspa

March 6, 2021

Spanien?

Ich habe leider nur Madrid und Barcelona besucht. Diese sind sehr schöne Städte. Barcelona braucht keine Einführung. Es gibt so viele bekannte und schöne Sehenswürdigkeiten, dass man viel Zeit (und Geld) braucht, um alles zu sehen. Madrid hat keinen Strand, aber sie ist auch eine sehr angenehme Stadt. Ich hatte nicht erwartet, dass so viel Grün gäbe. Es gibt sehr große Parks und das gefällt mir sehr. Ich war dort im Sommer und es war auch unglaublich voll von Touristen. Das ist zwar gut für die Wirtschaft, natürlich, aber ich frage mich, wie fühlt sich man, wenn man in einer Stadt wie dieser lebt. Es kann manchmal an die Nerven gehen, so viele Menschen auf die Straße zu sehen, oder? Ich persönlich mag es, aber viele Menschen, nicht.

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mrfriendly

March 6, 2021

Journal

My family used to have an adorable, petite terrier with beautiful, silky hair, named ‘B’. He died 5 years ago.

Although many years have passed since his death, I still think of him pretty often. It’s because he was my first pet.

We bought him from a pet store, which (later we learned) probably brought baby puppies from ‘puppy mills’, where notoriously, puppies are bred and raised in highly unsanitary, poor conditions. It was probably this, that he always had a poor health. Since he was young, he had low immunity and carried lots of allergies, and therefore frequently catching a cold and sometimes even needing my parents to drive him emergently to hospital.

He loved to eat and would always beg for food when we were eating a meal. But he had too many allergies so his skin broke out whenever we gave him meats.

Unlike other dogs, he was afraid to go out for a walk because he was taken out to hospital too frequently when he was a baby. I know we should have taken him to some trainer or gotten some professional help about it, but my family really didn't know any better at that time.

He was 16 when he died. He almost lived to his full life span, without major health issues when he was older. However, despite the fact we did our best to raise him well, we always feel sorry for him that we couldn't have done better.

I hope ‘B’ is happy in the heaven now.

Thank you for having brought joy and happiness to my family, and I’m sorry we couldn't have done better to you, B.
I hope you are well and happy now.

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asia_yuqing

March 6, 2021

ημέρα μου

Στις εφτά και μισή παίρνω το τραμ για το Πανεπιστήμιο. Το πρωί προτιμάω το τραμ από το λεωφορείο. Φτάνω στο Πανεπιστήμιο στις οχτώ παρά δέκα το πρωί. Στις οχτώ το πρωί σπουδάζω. Στις τρεις παρά τέταρτο το μεσημέρι κατεβαίνω στο Πανεπιστήμιο. Το απόγευμα προτιμάω το λεωφορείο από το τραμ. Στις τρεις το απόγευμα περιμένω λεωφορείο, το λεωφορείο φεύγει στις τρεις και τρία. Γυρίζω σπίτι στις τρεις και είκοσι πέντε το απόγευμα. Κάθε βράδυ διαβάζω στο σπίτι.

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Yoko

March 6, 2021

It's my first diary.

I write my first diary here.
It was warm today. I didn't dry the lundry outside, but dried it in a laundromat because I have hay fever.

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ponta

March 6, 2021

Landolt C

Landolt C is the ring used for the vision test. This mark seems to be common all over the world. In Japan, people see this mark in an elementary school's infirmary. Nowadays, when testing vision, the marks are projected on the screen, but, when I was a kid, a chart was used. I often memorized each mark's direction when another kid did the test before me and I got a good (but not accurate) result. Children tend to compete with friends for trivial things.

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thinkmore

March 6, 2021

Strawberry Jam

I bought strawberries at a greengrocer yesterday. I got home and looked them closely, most of them were too ripe. So, I decided to make strawberry jam. It was my first time making jam by myself. I've read a cooking manga about how to make it. It didn't seem it was difficult. I don't like something too much sweet, so I reduced sugar. After 30 minutes, I could make jam easily. It was a bit sour, but I like sour food. Next morning, I had toast with the jam. It was really good. I wanted to have one more, but I'm on a diet, so I didn't do it.

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heavensblade13

March 6, 2021

日本語日記　3月5日

今日は「からかい上手の高木さん」の第15巻を読んだ。楽しかった。読みながら「お手つき」の言葉に出会った。ある場面で高木さんがあるゲームをしながら、お手つきをした、相手の西片さんの手を触った。これは西片を照れさせるためにした。「お手つき」の他の意味も面白い。一つの言葉は二つの段違いの意味を持てるのは興味深いと思う。

日本語日記漫画

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julia00

March 6, 2021

A voiced sound 「濁音」

A voiced sound is called "Dakuon" in Japanese. It is indicated with two small dots. Tenten (dots) is a sign that is attached to the upper right corner of the specific kana to express a voiced sound.
濁音は2つの小さなてんてんのことを言い、特定のかなの右上につけて濁音を示します。

Dakuon changes its voice based on a certain rule. To put it another way, it sounds muffled.
濁音は、あるルールに基いて音声が変わります。簡単に言うと、濁った音になります。

Dakuon has twenty letters in total. The voiced sound are as follows:
全部で20文字あり下記が「濁音」です。

が ga ぎ gi　ぐ gu　げ ge　ご go

ざ za じ ji 　ず zu　ぜ ze　ぞ zo

だ da ぢ ji　づ zu　で de　ど do

ば ba び bi　ぶ bu　べ be　ぼ bo

Did you realize the following letters in the table? "じ" and "ぢ", "ず" and "づ" are same pronunciation.
表の中で、「じ」「ぢ」と「ず」「づ」は同じ発音です。

This four letters are called "yotsugana" as a technical term, and originally those had had different pronunciation.
この4つの仮名をまとめて専門的に「四つ仮名」と言い、元々は全部違う発音でした。

"ぢ" sound is di and "づ" sound is du. For that reason, there were different letters.
「ぢ」の発音は「でぃ」で、「づ」は「ドゥ」だったので、異なった文字だったのです。

Currently, these pronunciation are unified by "ji" and "zu", so "ぢ" and "づ" actually not need.
「じ」と「ず」の発音に統一されたため、実際のところ「ぢ」と「づ」は無くても問題はありません。

However, sometimes we have to use "ぢ" and "づ".
しかし、「ぢ」「づ」を必ず使わなければならないときがあります。

It has two cases. One is called "douon no renko", in which the same syllables are pronounced in repeat.
二つの場合があります。一つは「同音の連呼」と言い、同一の音節がつづけて発音されることです。

For example,

「ちぢむ」縮む（to shrink）

「つづく」続く（to be continued）

「つづり」綴り（spell）

The other is called "rendaku", in which two words are combined into one word, and the first word behind changes to a voiced sound.
もう一つは「連濁」と言い、二つの語が結びついて一語になる際に、後ろの語の語頭の清音が濁音に変化することです。

For example,

「はなぢ」　　鼻血　→　はな + ち（nose and blood）

「そこぢから」底力　→　そこ + ちから（underlying and strength）

「こづつみ」　小包　→　こ +つつみ（small and package）

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fabledlamb

March 6, 2021

El jardín comunitaria de mi compañera de trabajo

Esta tarde visite la huerta de mi compañera de trabajo. Tiene una parcela en un jardín comunitaria y me ha interesado mucho ver sus plantas. En su huerta, hay muchos tomates, berenjenas, guisantes y cilantro así que me dio unas berenjenas japonesas y su "vecino" del jardín me dio una col china.

Me gustó mucho andar por el jardín y explorar cómo los miembros habían personalizado sus huertas. Fue una tarde muy relajante :)

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watreedisishomie2

March 6, 2021

Shortsentences39

1. Açlığı Dünyanın genelinde çok önemli bir konu. Hunger is an important matter across the world.

2. Kebaplarımızı yemekten sonra açlığımızı kaybolmuştu. Our hunger had disappeared after we ate our kebabs.

3. Dün gece akşam yemeği yemedim bu sabah uyandığım zaman açlıktan ölüyordum. Last night I did not eat dinner, when I woke up this morning, I was dying of starvation.

4. Bahçemde beyzbol topları vururken bir parça yılan dersine rastlamıştım. While hitting baseballs in my yard, I had come across a piece of snake skin.

5. Mahallemizdeki fırında her zaman eski arkadaşıma rastlarim. I always come across/encounter my old friends in the bakery that's in our neighborhood.

6. Bahçende bir çok tavşanlara rastlıyor musun?
Do you come across a lot of rabbits in your garden?

7. Son günlerde yarı zamanlı bir iş için arıyorum ama henüz şansım yok. Lately I've been looking for a part time job, but I have not yet been lucky.

8. Geçen cuma günü akşam yemeği yerken bir araba parça dükkandaki yarı zamanlı işten hakkında babam bana haber vermişti. While eating dinner last Friday, my dad informed me of a part time job at an auto part store.

9. Meslek lisesindeyken yarı zamanlı bir iş çalışmalıdım. I should've worked a part time job while I was in vocational school.

10. Atölyedeki şu an öğrenciler dolablar yapıyor. Right now the students are making cabinets in the workshop.

11. Babamın atolyesinin yanındaki bina fırın. The building which is next to my dad's workshop is a bakery.

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mat23

March 6, 2021

Metallica e os direitos autorais

Não deve ser surpresa pra ninguém o quão chato é a censura por direitos autorais no mundo dos videogames tanto quanto na música.Tá mais chato e complicado na internet do que nunca.
Pra vocês terem uma ideia, mal botando uma música com copyright por 3 segundos, pode dar merda de várias maneiras
1)A plataforma tira a música e em troca, tu leva um strikezão show.
2)Trocam a música e tiram a monetização na cara.
3) Tem ainda algo pior?Até que tem, mermão.Se liga nessa história

Indo direto ao ponto, acho doido que inclusive os artistas e as grandes empresas sejam censuradas em plataformas que nem a Twitch.É irónico porque nem os própios artistas podem tocar suas própias músicas.
Foi exatamente o que rolou com Metallica numa apresentação online na plataforma roxa.
A Twitch censurou eles, e colocou uma música super alegre de criança, livre de direitos autorais, em cima da música dos caras na cara de pau.

É revoltante e engraçado, a ironia das ironias, pois Metallica foi quem ajudou a dar ínicio essa geração chata de censura injustiçada sem pé nem cabeça.
Derrubaram um site (o Nepster) de pirataria nos primeiros anos da internet, onde a galera baixava músicas muito antes delas serem lançadas no mercado.
O site levou processo e aí já era.
Das cinzas dele, a queda do Nepster, nasciram Spotify e apps do gênero.Curioso, não?

Será que o negócio tá indo longe demais?Tá na hora de mudança, de deixarem de ser tão cricris sobre?
Vai saber.Uma hora quem fizer live será banido mesmo, mano KKKKKK.Credo.

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winterdawn

March 6, 2021

제 연습 문장

1. 가능한 한 빨리 프로젝트를 완성한 나중에 시험을 위해 준비할거예요.
2. 인기 있는 감독님의 신난 영화는 세 날 후 나옵니다.
3. 엄마는 저를 찾고있을 때 저는 제 침실을 청수하고 있었어요.
4. 코로나-19의 나는 상황은 때문에 많은 사람들은 실직했어요.
5. 옛날에 저는 엔지니어가 되고 싶은데 이제 안 싶어요.
6. 영문학 수업 동안 공부하는 소설은 베트남 전쟁에 참가하는 미국 군인들을 관하는 것입니다. 이 책이 매우 매혹적있다.
7. 가능한 한 빨리 프로젝트를 완성한 나중에 경쟁 위해 준비할 거예요.
8. 봄에는 저는 개와 같이 공원에서 편하게 산책하는 걸 즐거워요.

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jorgeces

March 6, 2021

Ataraxie

Letztlich fühle ich mich besser, aber ich weiß nicht ganz genau warum... Ich beschwere mich nicht! Aber ich finde es ein bisschen überraschend.

Ich bin jetzt zurück in meiner Stadt, die die ich fast immer Zuhause genannten habe, und es geht mir viel besser. Ich stehe um 6:00 Uhr auf, ich habe genügende Energie zum Lernen und Yoga machen. Dies ist mir überraschend, weil ich dachte, dass diese Rückkehr trauriger wäre. Es ist ein komisches Gefühl... aber es fühlt sich, ob ein Wendepunkt meines Lebens wäre. Ich musste mich von sehr schönen Leuten verabschieden und ich denke, dass jeder etwas Bemerkenswertes unterrichtet hat. Ich bin extrem dankbar... Vor langem habe ich mich nicht so selbstbewusst, ruhig und optimistisch gefühlt. Das Gehirn ist wirklich das seltsamste Organ. Danke fürs Lesen.

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heyyawn

March 6, 2021

Übung 2

Es war ein Sonntag, und sonntags war Erik nie ein Frühaufsteher, manchmal durfte er sich hinlegen, bis es Zeit für das Mittagessen war. Letzten Sonntag ist Erik spät aufgestanden. Erik schaute aus dem Fenster und es war dämmrig draußen. "Verdammtes Wetter!" Erik dachte: "Es regnet wieder." In diesem Moment klingelte das Telefon. Es war Jan, der anrief. "Ich bin gerade aus dem Zug gestiegen", sagte sie, "ich komme zu Ihnen."
"Aber ich frühstücke noch", sagte Erik.
"Mein Gott", sagte sie, "stehst du immer so spät auf? Es ist schon ein Uhr!"

übung

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oceandrive76

March 5, 2021

La vida de un perro

La vida de un perro es oxímoron. Viven con no mando de nada. Sin embargo, también (si viven en buen hogar) tienen libertad completa. ¿Cómo es posible? Aunque sea un poco filosófico, quizá el mando y la libertad solo son conceptos. ¡De hecho, creo que lo he oído algo similar antes! Si no tenemos mando de nada, entonces no tenemos ninguna responsabilidad. Si la ves como una carga, entonces no tendrías nada de preocuparte. Al otro lado, si tenemos mando de todo, o libertad completa, entonces siempre tenemos que hacer algo. Las fechas, faenas y tal abruman tu horario, y siempre te controlan.

Me parece que la mayoría de nosotros vivimos en un equilibrio entre los dos. Tenemos mando de algunas cosas, y algunas cosas nos mandan. Para mí que tiene algo que ver con nuestras sensaciones. Quizá si no podemos pensar en esto, no nos importa tanto, como los perros. Al fin y al cabo no creo que deberíamos tener menos libertad, pero la relación entre ella y el mando te hace pensar mucho.

Dos oraciones con "verse + participio".

1. Me veo ocupado porque acabamos de recibir el nuevo entrego.

2. Nos vemos abrumados por culpa del montón de deberes que tenemos.

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ppaulam

March 5, 2021

Qual é o seu prato preferido? Que outros pratos típicos existem na sua região?

Meu prato preferido

Meu prato favorito se chama Spätzle. É um tipo de massa que vem do sul da Alemanha. Os ingredientes são farinha, água e ovos. Nós comemos com lentilhas ou em uma sopa chamada Gaisburger Marsch.
Além disso, temos um prato chamado Maultaschen. É um tipo de massa também, mas parece um grande ravióli. Esse prato foi inventado na idade média porque naquela época a igreja proibia comer carne às sextas-feiras. Por causa disso, as pessoas escondiam a carne dentro da massa.

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Jacque

March 5, 2021

मेरे कुत्ते

मेरे पास दो कुत्ते। एक का नाम kane है और दूसरे का नाम harold है। Harold Kane से बहुत छोटा है।

Kane मेरा पहला कुत्ता है। जब वह एक साल्बथा तब मैंने उसे किया। वह काला और सफेद है। Kane को झेलना पसंद है।

Harold मेरा दूसरे कुत्ता है। वह काला और भूरा। वह बात करना पसंद है। उसको चाह महीने है।

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maartijn

March 5, 2021

Sentences 038: Fruit Trees, The Storm, Lies

Quite a few types of fruit tree died off because consumer demand only favoured very sweet fruits.
The storm really did a number on the old barn, it is totally broken now.
I could proof that he'd lied but he still flat-out denied it.

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charles_spence

March 5, 2021

5. März

In der Zukunft werde ich, habe ich nachdem nach Berlin gezogen, Deutsch fleisig lernen.
In der Zukunft werde ich sehr gut Deutsch sprechen.
In der Zukunft werde ich mit meiner Mutter jeden Tag sprechen.
als jung ich war habe ich taglich fusball gespielt aber heutzutage mache ich meistens boxen.
als jung ich war mag ich Fernsehen geschaut. Heutzutage lese ich das Buch am liebsten.
als jung ich war, war ich sehr dünn. als jung ich war, habe ich nur Pommes und Käse gegessen.

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abjectegg

March 5, 2021

Describe your favorite movie or TV show. What genre is it (comedy, drama, etc.)? Who is your favorite character? What do you like about it?

"Always Sunny"

Ma série télé favorite s'appelle "It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia". Cette série est une comédie de 'the gang', un groupe de quatre amis qui sont vraiment méchants. Ils ont un bar à Philadelphia où tous l'action arrive. Dans un épisode qui j'ai regardé récemment, 'the gang' a décidé qu'ils vont auditionner pour l'équipe de football américain. À la fin d'épisode, trois des quatre amis sont injuriés pendant les sélections. Le quatrième est perché cars il a pris trop du LSD. Chaque épisode est sur des bêtises comme ça.

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eeprom

March 5, 2021

Freitag

Ja, ich weiß, wie doof meine Titel sich manchmal anhören. Es fällt mir wirklich schwer, genug Vorstellungkraft zu haben, um mir neue und witzige Titel einzufallen. Vielleicht liegt es daran, dass heute Freitag ist und dass ich nach einer Arbeitswoche wenig Sprit habe, um witzig zu sein. Ich bin gut darauf, obwohl es heute geschneit hat, was selbst etwas eigenartig im März ist (und wird wohl nicht so eigenartig in der Zukunft sein). Ich bin auch gejoggt und habe danach einen Spaziergang gemacht. Zumindest hat der frische Luft gut angefühlt.

Schlechtes Wetter ist ja keine Ausrede, muss ich mich wiederholen, um mich mehr Sport zu treiben zu zwingen. Ansonsten würde ich ja den ganzen Tag Zuhause herumlaufen, ohne etwas Wertiges zu schaffen und auch mit einem schlechten Gewissen.

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