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15. La forêt, notre trésor
Est-ce que vous avez profitez de cette petite forêt près de chez nous ? Quand il fait beau, c'est une bonne idée de faire une randonné ou simple une promenade au bord du ruisseau, n'est-ce pas ? Mais est-ce que vous voulez de voir des bouteilles en plastique, des papiers gras ou des lingettes flottant sur le ruisseau ? Sûrement pas. Personne veut voir les déchets quand ils sont en vacances.
Mais récemment et tristement, j'ai découvert toute sorte des déchets lors d'une promenade le long des berges. C'était une belle d’après -midi où les osseux chantant et la lumière jouant avec le feuillage. Tout ce que je voudrais, c'était de l'insouciance. Cependant, j'ai trouvé des bouteilles en plastique, des plastiques qui flottaient sur l'eau. Quand on voyait en détail, il consistait le bouteille qui pouvait être daté de 2018 ! Ça fait déja deux ans mais le plastique était encore en bon terme !
Il faut savoir que ce soit les bouteilles en plastique ou bien les pailles en plastique, il faut plus de 100 ans de se dégarder. Donc, en d’autre terme, ces plastiques seront toujours dans la nature pour très longtemps. Pire encore, ces plastiques peuvent causer la suffocation des animaux marins.
Sans oublier que les autres déchets ont de mêmes effets négatives sur l'écologie, on doit donc prendre les actions pour conserver l'environnent et nous rendre une forêt paisible.
D'abord, tout simplement, on peut utiliser moins de produits en plastiques. Cela peut à la fois réduire les déchets de plastique, et en même temps, les coûts environnementaux de leur production.
Si vous voulez aller encore plus loin, pour la prochaine étape, on peut s'organiser pour nettoyer le ruisseau. Le dernier a été fait il y a 2 ans. Donc, c'est le temps pour un nouveau nettoyage.
Mais le plus important, c'est que les gens prennent en compte et avaient des consciences de ne pas jetter les déchets sur le rivière où bien sûr pas n’importe où dans la nature. Il faut que chacun prend son propre déchet après avoir profité de la nature.
En résume, pour rendre une forêt plus profitable aux public, il faut les actions de toutes les parties, surtout les habitants, ie. nous !
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Mehr Übungen mit Passiv
Ich habe meine Tasse aus Versehen zerbrochen.
Die Tasse wurde (von mir) aus Versehen zerbrochen.
Die Tasse hätte nicht zerbrochen worden können, hätte ich sie gut aufbewahrt.
Die Putzfirma hat gestern die Schule sehr gut geputzt. Sie ist wirklich sauber.
Die Schule ist (von der Putzfirma) gestern geputzt worden. Die Kinder können heute ohne Probleme zur Schule kommen.
Oder mit nicht:
Die Schule hätte gestern geputzt worden müssen. Jetzt müssen die Kinder zu Hause bleiben.
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Descricao
1. Eu chamo-me Rui Gomes e tenho 47 anos. Sou alto e magro. Tenho a cara oval e os meus olhos são grandes e verdes. O meu nariz é comprido e tenho o cabelo preto, comprido e encaracolado. A minha barba é preta e as minhas orelhas são grandes.
2. Ela chama-se Maria Santos e tem 25 anos. Ela sempre está talentosa e organizada alegre. A cara dela é redonda e os olhos delas são grandes e pretos. Ela tem o nariz pequeno e as olhas pequenas. O cabelo dela é liso e curto.
3. Olá! Eu sou a Rita Leite e tenho 19 anos. Sou bonita, inteligente, corajosa mas distraída. Sou jovem e uma estatura de média e magra. Tenho a cara oval e os meus olhos são pequenos e pretos. Os meus lábios são finos e a minha boca é pequena. O meu cabelo é preto e tenho tranças.
4. Ele é o Pedro Pereira e tem 22 anos. Ele é estatura de média e magro. O rosto dele é oval e o bigode é preto. Os olhos dele são redondos e verdes e o nariz pequeno. Tem o cabelo curto e encaracolado e a boca é grande. Os lábios dele são grossos. Ele é simpático, um pouco chato.
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056 Everything that Doctor Mike Eats
056 Everything that Doctor Mike Eats
Here is everything that doctor Mike eats in one day. The first thing he does when he wakes up is to grab a warm glass of water. Actually it doesn't have to be warm, just room temperature. If something is too cold, he feels like it aggravates his throat and decreases circulation. He wants all his blood floating in his throat. He doesn't always eat first thing in the morning. But he has just fallen in love with vitamin blender. He puts all sorts of vegetables and fruits in it to make a morning smoothie . He feels like it provides the vitamin and mineral boost that he needs to go through the day. He is a fan of intermittent fasting. But he is flexible with it. It's okay when he wants to skip intermittent fasting for a single week. He has never enjoyed caffeine beverage. He went through all of medical schools without needing coffee. Even when he pulled night-overs or he had 24 hours shift, he was OK without coffee. But now with all the demands being placed on his time, he starts to drink espresso.
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A National Vacation!
I am so happy that I am having 7 free days! I have made a plan with my friend, we will go to a beach and stay there for 2 days. We also will visit Auntie De together, and then have a walk on the field yards. I am anticipating it very much!
In the morning, I went to my clean zone, there were only three boys there. It was 5 minutes earlier before the class. What's worse, three boys absent. All the five boys were being punished this week, but they did really badly. So the punishment would be continued for the whole October. And two of them whose mobile phone were kept by me wouldn't get the phones back as I said before. I also told them I would notice the incident in Parents chat group.
During the class, I mentioned the word "make up." Then some boys laughed at the girls who made up two days ago. I told them that they shouldn't behaved like that because it was very impolite. If what other people did didn't disturb you, you should be quiet. Judging people by their appearence or body shape or anything like this was very impolite. People always blame the mothers didn't take their responsibility to teach their children the moral standards, but it was quite strict with the women. Where were the fathers? Didn't they do anything? So the girl should be more independent, only then they could escape the harm from bad marriage. A boy asked whether I wanted to start a revolution, as the society was traditional, they couldn't do anything. I told them they could be kinder with their families now and the fucture.
At noon, a mother asked me to give the phone back to her son. She was so rude that I told what her son did at school, and it was a punishment of not getting the phone back. After school, a boy came into my house with his dad. The father told me his son want the phone back. I told him the situation and blamed him shouldn't help his son to do this. He said his son should be punished.
I really think the parents never truly care about their children. They just think that money is everything. The manner and mental world are unimportant.
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Traveling Abroad
Korean tourists do a lot of things during traveling abroad.
First, they take tons of pictures or shooting video clips around tourist attractions.
They post them to their SNS or their blogs.
Next, tourists like to go to decent restaurants for eating local foods.
They often try to search online to find good restaurants.
Sometimes, they ask the locals for recommendations.
Plus, tourists buy some souvenirs for their friends or families.
They like to visit duty free shops at the airports as well.
So, these are why Korean tourists do a lot of things when they go abroad.
Sept. 30, 2021
I want a sequel for ''Hotel Del Luna''!
If there is one drama that I really enjoyed, and was excited in every second while watching, it would be ''Hotel Del Luna''.
It's a Korean drama that has comedy, sadness, and fantasy all in it, exactly what I love. The hotel welcomes spirits that couldn't go to the afterlife. The femlale lead, who is the owner of the hotel, was a sinful ''spirit''. While the male lead was a human that got the ability to see dead people's spirits from the female lead. I prefer not to say anything more about the story line because it would serve as a spoiler. But the ending was very unexpected and non-understandable. It seemed like they kept it open to the audience's interpretations. However, I still think they could have made it more clear to the viewers. Also, what trigerred me the most was the fact that at the end of the last episode, we saw a kind of trailer for a potential sequel, the cast seemed to already be decided, but we didn't get any other season or additional episodes. Which is truly unfortunate considering how the story is still open to development with new characters. Though, we never know, maybe this incredible drama is going to get a sequel soon i the futur, at least that's what I hope.
Sept. 30, 2021
大学オンライン授業を続するべきですか？
「大学オンライン授業を続するべきですか？」について、自分の考え方は「オンラインと対面授業の併用」が今最適な方針。でも、対面授業はまだ主流です。対面授業のほうがいい。
理由は、三つがあります。
第一、オンライン授業の発展、今なお不足があります。突然のコロナ、多くの大学が準備できてない。オンライン授業は応急の役割だけです。
学習体験の完全性は対面授業に及ばない。例えば、いくつか専门はオンライン授業をすれば、困ります。学生にも、先生にも
第二、大学で授業以外の体験も重要です。例えば、いろいろな部活、クラスメートとのやりとり。
第三、雰囲気がとても、いや、一番重要です。
自分にとって、運動する時、ジムてはじめて運動のアクティビティがあります。学習する時、自習室、図書館てはじめて学習の意欲があります。だから、授業、ゼミなどについては、教室と研究室のが最高の場所ですね。
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Wie sieht für dich ein perfekter Tag aus?
Zum Anfang wollte ich erwähnen, dass ich Variation in meinem Leben mag. Obwohl ich hier einen Tag, der für mich perfekt aussieht, beschreibe, wären alle meine Tagen gleich, würde ich mich langweilen.
Darüber hinaus, ich beschreibe hier einen Arbeitstag. Der Grund dafür ist, dass ich bis jetzt nicht wirklich verstehe, was für mich ein perfektes Wochenende macht.
Also, wie sieht mein perfekter Tag aus? Es ist am besten, wenn ich früh aufstehe. Für mich bedeutet das vor 8 Uhr morgens :) Früh aufstehen ist zwar schwierig, aber ich fühle danach so produktiv und ich habe auch genug Zeit, um einige Dinge vor dem Frühstück zu beschäftigen. Zum Beispiel, ich kann Deutsch lernen.
Nach dem Frühstück ist es mir am liebsten, kurz draußen zu gehen und vielleicht Kaffee zu trinken. Danach muss ich aber arbeiten.
Am Nachmittag gehe ich für etwa einundeinhalb Stunden spazieren. Es hilft mir, zu entstressen und mein Gehirn zu erholen.
Am Abend, nachdem ich meine Arbeit beendet habe, gucke ich YouTube oder Fernsehserien. In letzter Zeit schaue ich gerne K-Drama. Und danach habe ich auch Zeit, Koreanisch zu lernen. Es wirkt entspannend.
So, das war’s! Klingt irgendwie alltäglich, oder? Deswegen mache ich am Wochenende etwas ganz anderes. Aber wenn es zum Arbeitstage kommt, mag ich sie gewöhnlich und Stress-frei.
Sept. 30, 2021
Expert or Not
I have friends who share languages, one of whom is Australian. Lately, she's just enrolled in Lingaistic in Australian university as a part-time student. She is now no more than a housewife who got married to a professor and have a daughter. Actually, she has a Ph.D as well. I am the one who has to help her put old Japanese sentences into English now. Nobody but me can help her at present. She is making a lot of efforts to pass the Japanese N2 exam this year. I am not sure if she can pass the exam. But she is pushing herself hard now. Lo and behold, we can use a OCR software to recognize the Japanese calligraphy.
The other day, she asked me a question about "Kanamonoya" on a letter of Edo period, which sounds Japanese like. It was explaining about a printed cotton, which is called ”更紗,Sarasa” and origin from India. She is somewhat asserting strongly that she can be only one expert in this kind of field related to Sarasa in Australia. I've heard this name from somewhere in my memory of the past that I can't yet remember exactly. What's more, it was so surprising for me that this name "Kanamonoya, 金物屋" was already used in Edo period, and the OCR software really worked so well. Firstly, I took what she said was half in jest. When I began to talk to her for the first time, we hit off instantly. If assuming she was saying it seriously, I hope that she'll pull that off. Thanks.
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今日の１０文
実は十一文を書いてしまいました… 😋 訂正してくれませんか。
夜までに着くといいね。
他の猫に比べて、この方が眠い。
どうしてあのドアがこうやって閉めづらいかな。
大学まであまり環境を大切にしなかった。
いつも給料をもらうとレストランで食べに行きたい。
開いている窓のころで座りながら、猫ちゃんは外でいる人を見ろのが好きみたい。
壊れていると知っていたのに古いトースターを使ってみた。
ひげを剃りながら音楽を聞くのはちょっと危ないでしょう。
注射でうでが痛くなり始めた。
会っていた時に、友達は窓があんまりないアパートで住んでいた時、彼氏とよくケンカしてた、と言った。
お酒を飲み過ぎる後で踊ろうとすると是非転ぶよ。
Sept. 30, 2021
晨间之雾1
最近有很多事情慢慢改变了，但在我国里还有很多人觉得年轻人应该很快结婚，很快生孩子。我觉得一个人应该好好做自己人生的计划，欣赏他们的"单身时间"。单身人可以把握好时间，比如: 积累工作的经验，省钱，旅游，交很多朋友，去不同的地方，积累知识、开口眼界。有一次，一个好朋友跟我说: "结婚之前，你应该经历单身生活的不同情况。这样的，你可以成熟了许多。" 对于我来说，这句话确实有道理。
有的人可能觉得因为他们的年龄大，所以有点压力而必须快点找到男女朋友。这种情况导致很复杂的结果，可以让人觉得他们急拍拍地做这个决定真倒霉。有一个朋友 （我称呼他X），当他开始工作的时候没有那么多钱，所以他女朋友决定了要把他甩掉了。他感觉伤心得很，所以他觉得结婚的事情无所谓。过了几天之后，他意识到了年龄大，还没有妻子，这种情况对他来说不好。他的家人总会给他添加压力，一直逼着他快点结婚。他的朋友都也会催他要快点找到妻子，因为不仅是为了让家人快乐，而且对那个男人的工作也很好。如果他跟同事或客户说他有妻子，有孩子，会给他们留下深刻的印象。同事，客户和领导都会觉得X是一个非常努力，认真和有责任心的男人。如此， X答应了一个熟人给他介绍相亲对象。在他的心里想那位相亲对象不太适合他但是他们俩被别人甩了，他们俩还单身，那个女人有高级的学历，工资高。那次相亲像两家公司彼此评估能否一起合作赚钱。一年后X娶了那个女人，他们之间一点真正的爱情都没有，但是他们可以一起合作省钱。十年过了之后，他们俩发现了那个女人生不了孩子，所以X又面对了社会的压力。他年龄大，没有孩子，没有他爱的人。原来，他们的婚姻是幻境，如晨间之雾一样短暂的。
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Journal
There are audio files for the whole book. I sent them to your email before, but you said you couldn't download them. Here on WeChat, I can only send audio files separately, not in packs. But it's okay, I think, because I will send them to you when you need them. Here are the first three audio files. You can try and get familiar with them.
Every lesson has one audio file, just let me know when you need it. But the best way is downloading the zipped audio files from your email and saving them on your phone to use.
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Recogiendo manzanas
Pienso recoger manzanas este fin de semana con mi esposo. Es mi actividad otoñal favorita porque pueden divertirse todos los sentidos. Me resulta tonificante sentir el aire fresco en mi cara y me encanta el sonido de las hojas crujiendo bajo mis zapatos. Después de recoger las manzanas, las utilizo para hacer varios postres. Hago pasteles, galletas, pan dulce, magdalenas, lo que sea. El aroma de manzanas, canela y clavo persiste en la cocina durante semanas.
El año pasado, tratamos de recoger manzanas pero no pudimos por la pandemia. Por eso tenemos que recoger muchísimas manzanas para compensar el año pasado.
Sept. 29, 2021
Reseña de película: "Tale of Tales"
Acabo de mirar la película "Tale of Tales" (Cuento de Cuentos en español), una película de fantasia hecha por un director italiano. La película es muy rara y inquietante, y consiste de tres cuentos, escenas de cada uno intercaladas durante la película. Tiene lugar en Europa medieval.
El primer cuento trata de un rey y reina que ha tratado de concebir pero no pueden. Un mago visita el castillo, y los dice que necesita desempeñar un ritual muy peligroso: tienen que cazar un monstruo del mar, toma su corazón, pide a una virgen que ella lo cocine, y entonces la reina tiene que comer el corazón. Desesperados por un hijo, ellos acuerdan hacerlo. El rey caza el monstruo y logra matarlo, pero se muere en el proceso. Ellos encuentran una virgen en el pueblo cerca del castillo, y ella cocina el corazón y se vuelve embarazada. La reina consume el corazón y también se vuelve embarazada. Ambas dan a luz el día siguiente.
Años atrás, los dos niños, que parecen idéntico, son mejores amigos. A la reina no le gusta este hecho, y ella trata de decir a su hijo (Elias) que no ya pueda ver a su amigo (Jonah). Elias desafía sus ordenes y sigue viendo a Jonah. Eventualmente la reina trata de matar a Jonah en un sótano, pero él escapa y sobrevive. Decidiendo que es demasiado peligroso quedarse en el pueblo del castillo, Jonah se va. Deja un arroyo con cualidades mágicas que puede señalar a Elias si él esté en peligro.
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