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Ducky

Dec. 1, 2021

What is your favourite holiday food? Which holiday do you eat it at? Now, which is your least favourite?

In the Dessert

In Easter is very tipycal the people buy to gift a cake with a chocolat egg. It is eat as a desert and is very fun for children, .
In June 24, usually we taste the "Coca de Sant Joan". It can be of fruit or pork cracklings. My prefer is with confit fruit, is delicious.
In Catalonia, we are used to eat a Christmas Sweet named "Neules", that they are how a wafer rollsands, and usually is eaten in the dessert with cava (champagne).

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inkstars

Dec. 1, 2021

מטוסים

אתמול ראיתי מטוסים
אני תכופות רואה מטוסים כי בעיר שלי יש נמל תעופה
אני אוהב לראות מטוסים
(:

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javelier

Dec. 1, 2021

Describe the neighborhood where you live.

我是法国人

你好大家
我叫Guy 我住在法国.我住在一套公寓.它是一个小公寓 ,只有3个房间, 它在2楼.我公寓的最近有一个花园 , 那个地方是安静的 ,我很喜欢这个环境.

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anaxim

Dec. 1, 2021

冬の天気

今日の天気が冬らしいです。
最近は天気が夏らしいだけどそれは終わるです。
その変化が嬉しいです。暑い天気が嫌いです。
スープや暑いチョッコなど時です！

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leeekayi

Dec. 1, 2021

Jour 13 : thé

Le monde de thé est énorme. On peut classer le thé en matière d'origine, de dégré de maturation, ou encore de prix ! Il y a deux marques de thé que j'aime bien, c'est le TWG et le Teapig. Le premier est comme marque de luxe. Je l'aime non seulement parce que son thé est très bon mais aussi grâce à son beau emballage qui lui faire un bon cadeau. Pour le deuxième, j'aime son idée respecteuse de l'environment, vu que tous ses emballages peuvent digesté naturellement après les jetter.

Je préfère le thé noir pour le matin parce que je crois qu'il peut réchauffer mon coup. D'habitude, je le prends avant le petit déjeuner en profitant de mon "me-time", je donc choisis ceux qui ne sont pas trop forts ou bien y'ajoute du lait pour ne pas irriter la vente.

Prendre un thé le matin fait partie de ma routine matinale. C'est veritablement bien de goûter un thé en regardant le ciel se réveiller peu à peu.

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kiwy

Dec. 1, 2021

Run Again

My legs are still sore, so I just ran 2.2km today. I tried playing the volleyball with my colleagues after that. Since I had never played before, I did really bad. Besides, my arms are sore as well.

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thortank7854

Dec. 1, 2021

ジブリの映画（えいが）では何が好きですか。どうしてですか。

愛用ジブリの映画

こんにちは！

久しぶりだね‼︎

私の愛用ジブリの映画は天空の城ラピュタです！いつもこの映画が大好きでした。

子供でした時、あまりジブリの映画を見ました。でも、天空の城ラピュタを見ましたから、ノスタルジックの心情です。

三年生から、ほとんど凡ゆるのジブリの映画を見ました。

私が天空の城ラピュタが好きな理由はとても強いの情を伝える。ピアノで天空の城ラピュタの曲を弾くことが出来ます。

他ジブリの映画を見ないといけない。

読んでくれてありがとうございます‼︎

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MonsieurBaguette

Dec. 1, 2021

Pratique du plus-que-parfait

1. Tu avais fini tous tes devoirs, quand j'ai rentré.
2. Elle m'a rendu heureux quand j'étais en colère.
3. Si j'avais su cela, j'ai dû travailler plus dûr.
4. J'avais travaillé pendant avant tu as commencé de parler avec moi.
5. J'avais cherché son chambre mais je n'ai rien trouvé.
6. J'ai utilisé le méthod que tu m'avais donné à réussir dans cette question.
7. Je n'ai pas porté le t-shirt bleu que tu m'avais offert.

plusqueparfait

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levar1

Dec. 1, 2021

旅行

二週間後にはフランスとイタリアに行きます！一人で旅行するのは初めてのことです。でも、フランス人とイタリア人の友達がいるので、私は彼らの家に泊まることができます！本当にワクワクします！これは、私のフランス語とイタリア語を練習する良い機会でもあります。意外なことに、イタリア人の友達の日本人の友達もイタリアに行きます！それで、私は自分を紹介し、彼と友達になります。でもその前に、もっと日本語を練習しなければなりません。

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Jack

Dec. 1, 2021

Journal

Time flies. Unconsciously, life has passed over a half. I often have many feelings about the first part of my life. Not obtaining a senior official position, not making a lot of money and I can't achieve that in the rest of my life. In short, I am just an ordinary person. But most people are just ordinary people. Being an ordinary person still makes me happy. There are still many meaningful things I want to do. I have to make good use of the time, no longer waste it. I still want to achieve some success in the rest of my life.

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mokka

Dec. 1, 2021

What do you like to do on a rainy day?

비오는 날

비오는 날이 침착해서 너무 좋아요.
저는 보통 제 침대에서 따뜻한 음료를 차처럼 마시고 책을 읽어요.
밖의 가고십다면 영화관나 박물관에 가는데 저는 쇱게 아파서 집에 있는 것이 좋아요.
저는 걸으면서 "Rain Song"이라는 음악을 듣기 좋아요.
마지막으로 비오는 날에 제 재일 좋아는 순간이 창에 비를 듣고 잠이 들다 이에요.

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 1, 2021

2 to the 8th power is 256

I have written journals on this site in 256 days now.

256 is a well known number of the SW programs.

There is a RGB color system when a computer shows a color dot on the monitor.

The combination of Red, Green and Blue is a basic of the RGB color system.

The three colors are each limited to 256 which is from 0 to 255 numbers.

For example, 255(red), 255(green) and 255(blue) display a white color dot.

In yellow case, it is 255(red), 255(green) and 0(blue).

Like this, a computer creates colors with a combination of 256, 256 and 256 numbers.

By the way, it is very hard to describe the term of the computer system.

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nambatsuyoshi

Dec. 1, 2021

December 1st, 2021

The results of the buzzwords-of-the-year contest were announced today. The grand prize was a "two-way player ". It's because a Major League Baseball player, Shohei Ohtani, played an active part as both a pitcher and a batter. He won the American League MVP. He gave us courage and energy.

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alexwong2164

Dec. 1, 2021

I changed!

We have a shopping mall just selling computer.

Is got more than 100 shops and you can buy everything related to computer.

In past I will usually go there to buy a specific model.

I even like to hang out in such place.

But nowadays everybody just shopping from internet or smartphone.

Go a store and looking at the real thing become not so common.

This morning I was thinking go this shopping mall again.

But in the afternoon, I already give up this idea.

Maybe I will go there someday.

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sircerulean

Dec. 1, 2021

일상에서 인식해야 하는 소소한 성공

한 일주일 전에 제가 충격적인 희소식을 받았어요. 언어 능력 시험 봤고 생각보다 결과가 높게 나왔어요. 그때부터 기분이 정말 좋으며 제 실력과 해 온 노력에 대해 뭔가 안심이 됐어요.
그 결과를 봐서야 긴 길을 얼마나 걸었는지 이제만 알아주는 것 같아요. 당연히 언어 자격증뿐이에요. 그전에도 그리고 미래에도 바라건대 같은 수준인 걸 물론인데 왜지 그 자격증에 제 생활의 초점을 좀 많이 담았던 듯해요.
본인이 할 수 있다는 걸 굳이 왜 단지 안 믿을까요?
아주 기본적인 자신감 문제일 수도 있어요. 말은 제가 작은 성공을 하면 마치 별 것이 아닌 것처럼 느껴지고 심지어 큰 성공도 소소한 것으로 받아들여 살아가요.
심하죠..

그래서 삶에선 지금까지 뭘 마쳤고 어떤 성공을 해 왔는지에 대한 인식을 시켜주고 여러분을 격려하고 싶습니다.
대단한 거예요! 시험 합격한 거, 고등학교를 졸업한 거, 알바 생긴 거, 가족이랑 소중한 시간을 보낸 거, 취직한 거, 결혼한 것에 축하드려요! 애를 써서 자기 자신의 선택대로 해넸어요.
그건 명심해야 해요. 중요하다 보니까♡

동기부여이거 뭔지 모르겠음새벽 갬성

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felixir

Dec. 1, 2021

음악을 좋아하십니까?

저는 많은 음악을 들어요. 물론 영어 음악을 듣는데 많은 한국어 음악도 들어요. 슬픈 노래를 아주 좋아해서 한국 발라드를 좋은 것 같아요. 드라마 OST를 특별히 즐겨요. 이번 주에 펀치의 “Done For Me,” 백현의 “나인가요”와 김범수의 “보고 싶다”를 자주 듣고 있어요.

음악을 좋아하십니까? 무슨 음악을 듣습니까?

음악

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koyo

Dec. 1, 2021

私は本当のばかだよ

皆、昨日、文を書くのを忘れていたので、大きい馬鹿者だ。でも、とてもいそがしくて疲れていた。忘れることはとても簡単だった。だから、今日は二つ文を書くつもりだ。
今日の計画は働くこととシーティに買い物と日本語を勉強することだ。どこと何を食べるのはまだ分からない。
じゃまた。

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toranomonta

Dec. 1, 2021

Training to write English Email

I want to learn how to write English Email in business scene.
Please tell me whether a following email is appropriate as business correspondence and how to improve it.

Assumption:
I am administrative staff in a consulting firm. Client request us to provide some documents related to a project that has finished a few years ago.

*********************
Dear XXX and YYY

I hope you are doing well.
Please kindly find attached documents.
I collected all documents related to Project A as per your request in your previous Email.

As for our fees, we provided these administrative services for free in this time.
However, usually our fees are calculated on hourly basis for those kinds of services.
If you want to know further detail, please see attached our fee schedule.

And all documents are written in Japanese.
If you need English translation, I will send you fee estimation and estimated delivery date so please let me know.

Should you have any question, please do not hesitate to ask me.

Best regards,
Toranomonta

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kidneyprivilege

Dec. 1, 2021

Do you prefer to give gifts or to receive gifts?

2021/11/30

我喜歡送禮，因為看到朋友打開禮物時的興奮和快樂，都讓我覺得很開心，比收禮更有意義。我覺得選禮物有點技巧，最重要的並不是禮物價錢，而是心思。即使你花了多少錢，也不代表對方一定會喜歡的。每次要買禮物前，我都會想想最近跟那位朋友聊天時，他提過近日喜歡甚麼，然後試圖找找有聯繫的東西。這樣，你可以對朋友顯示你確實有關注他跟你講的話。

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Archy

Dec. 1, 2021

Katte (Kan du hjælpe mig?)

Godaften! Jeg set en masse katte i dag. Der var brune og sorte katte. Jeg har en kat også. Han navn er Simba. Simba løb omkring udenfor med mig. Han er glad og perfek.

Jeg lærer dansk, men jeg er stadig en begynder. Kan du hjælpe mig? Tak!

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Jack

Dec. 1, 2021

Reply to My Language Partner.

Generally speaking, I’d like to live in a city by the sea with mountains. I could go climbing or look out at the sea.
The blue skies and clouds have always been my favorite. They are so simple, yet so beautiful, and you don’t need to pay anything.
Yes, although pianos are nice, they can't bring the feeling that comes from plucking strings with your hands.
I also had a guitar when I was young, but I couldn't play it well. I’ve forgotten where I lost it.
I can imagine the photo you described: a clear lake, a quiet mountain forest, an elegant woman and a melodious 古筝, it paints a really beautiful scenery.

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joooules

Dec. 1, 2021

ほしいアパート

しゅうしょくしたら、新しいアパートに引っこしたいです。今住んでいるアパートは悪くなくて、私に似合わないことがあります。一番の好きじゃないことは、ルームメイトがいることです。一人で住んでいたいです。ほしいアパートは、何よりきれいで近代的なアパートのほうがいいと思います。そして、掃除するのが好きじゃないから、掃除が早くできるアパートがほしいです。小さくても、じゅうたんがなくてもいいです。でも、近いバス停や駅が是非要ります。

アパート

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roads3112

Dec. 1, 2021

My routing morning

I'm going to show you my routing morning.
First, my alarm goes off 7 am. I wake up, but I don't get up until 7:10 am.
After I have a breakfast. At 8 am I take a shower. Next, It's time to get dressed and At 9 am I turn on my laptop and I start to work.

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soijetsu96

Nov. 30, 2021

JLPT N4 Practice 6

１．母はもう買い物に行きましたので、また買い物に行かなくてもいい。
２．今日は日曜日です。だから、学校に行かなくてもいい。
３．今日からイタリアにマスクをしなければならない。
４．私は試験に合格をするなら、夜も勉強しなくてはいけない。
５．この部屋に電話を使ってはいけない。
６．この公園には夜に行ってはいけない。
７．あんたは一週間にレッスンが何課ありますか。
８．今日5時間もイタリア語を教えました。
９．大阪に電車で行くことは3時間も掛かります。
１０．彼女は日本語と英語しか話せません。
１１．今晩はあのドラマだけ見ます。
１２．私の趣味はギータを弾くことです。
１３．イタリア語を教えるのが大好きです。
１４．言語を勉強するのはいいですが、時間が掛かります。
１５．映画を見られますか。
１６．ここから海も山も見られます。
１７．5日後に兄の誕生日だので、プレゼントを買っておきた。
１８．明日たくさんの事しますので、今日洗濯をしておきました。
１９．頭が痛いので、今日勉強しようとは思いません。
２０．頭が痛いから、パーティーに行こうとは思わない。

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izyvhs

Nov. 30, 2021

I'm going to learn French!

In my first journal I wrote that I wanted to learn French, and now I finally stopped procrastinating and started doing. December and January are my free months, so I knew I should begin right in the of November, and when it was November 20th I realized that the months was already ending so had to hurry up. Although my " project (as a like to call it) only starts tomorrow, I already tried to learn the IPA for French, and I ran into problems. That's the first hurdle I have to overcome, the second one is that I don't know what vocabulary I should learn. In the beginning, my intention was to learn words from a Frequency Dictionary, but I didn't find it, so I found a frenquency list online. The problem is that most of those words are pronouns, prepositions, and so on. So I see two options: find another list that has only nouns, adjectives, verbs, and other stuff like this or pick up a new method to learn vocabulary. I personally like to learn words in a context rather than in a list, but it would be really useful to learn the most common ones first. Despite that, everything's going well.

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