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Une lettre pour la maison
Coucou humaine!
Finalement je peux parler ta langue étrange donc j'ai preparé une longue liste d'ordres pour la maison.
Mes désirs consistent avant tout à vivre une vie pleine de luxe et comfort. Chez nous, l'état de repas a été épouvantable. Je préfère que tu m'alimentes du steak et jambon braisé—la bouffe de chien ne fait pas du tout. De plus, je veux manger avant que je dorme alors ça fait au moins 3 á 5 fois un jour avec des collations entre les repas. N'oubliez pas remplir le bol d'eau aussi!
Pourvu qu'il fait beau, on doive faire une promenade. C'est bénéfique pour nous deux: tu peux faire d'exercice tandis que j'apprécie l'air frais. Je suis déçue de dire que tu as devenu vraiment paresseuse et le nombre de promenades a réduit.
Je crains que vous partissiez un jour sans moi: je sais que vous comptez sur moi pour maintenir la santé mentale ainsi ceci serait une erreur grave mais les humaines sont une espèce stupide. Par conséquence, il faut que tu me mettes sur le lit à côté de toi chaque nuit en ordre empêcher ça.
Si tu suivre mes demandes, nous n'aurons rien de problèmes.
Bien à toi,
Honey
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May 10, 2021
der Babelturm
Als ich ein Kind war, war ich in Religionsunterrichten. In Frankreich gibt es die Trennung von Staat und Kirche. Das war privaten Unterrichten an der Kirche. So waren wir alles Kinder von religiösen Familien.
Die Lehrerin erzählte uns die Geschichte des Babelturms. Zu Beginn sprach die ganze Menschlichkeit die selbe Sprache. Nemrod der König von Babylone mochte ein Turm bauen um die Himmeln zu erreichen. Gott war nicht froh und er verurteiltet die Menschlichkeit nicht mehr die selbe Sprache zu sprechen. Das Ziel war die Verschiedenheit.
Viele Jahrhunderte später wurden die ersten Christen gesegnet mit der Fähigkeit allen Sprachen zu sprechen und zu verstehen.
Ich finde diese Geschichte sehr interessant. Die Sprachen teilen uns aber die Mehrsprachigkeit bringt uns zusammen.
Sprechen anderen Sprachen : das erlaubt uns die Anderen zu verstehen. Du kannst ein Turist sein ohne die Sprachen zu sprechen. Aber wann du die lokale Sprache sprichst ist das besser.
Ich habe ein schlecht Akzent aber ich bleibe verständlich. Die grösste Schwierigkeit mit Deutsch ist der die das. Und die Präpositionen! Sprachen sind eine Herausforderung.
May 10, 2021
Een poster op mijn deur
Ik had geen posters op mijn muur maar ik had wel eens op mijn deur. Die hangt er nog steeds op. Ik kan me niet de dag herineren toen ik deze heb opgehangen. Volgende keer als ik mijn ouders zal bezoeken ga ik deze poster meenemen. Het is een poster van de band slipknot. Zij waren mijn favoriete band toen ik twaalf was en ik hoor nog steeds graag de eerste drie albums van die. Zij hebben me er mee geholpen om mijn stages vol te houden.
May 10, 2021
A family story
I think all the families have interesting stories or even secrets to discover. Some of them are funny and make us smile when we remember them.
I have a childhood happy memory that I share with my older sister. I was around seven years old, we were visiting my grandparents with my cousin. We loved to go there because of different reasons. The house itself was remarkable because my grandmother worked as a dressmaker and there were fabrics and artifacts everywhere. Furthermore, they used to give us sweets and some money to spend.
We were all in the dinning-room, it was winter and the gas stove was on. My grandpa was having a nap cross-legged in his armchair. The upper foot was too close to the fire, and suddenly the slipper sole started burning. It was a small but visible fire. The odour of burnt rubber invaded the room. I stared at my sister wondering what to do, while grandpa was still snoring peacefully. Nobody moved or talked. All the kids were excited with the show, and suddenly the old man woke up and stood up speedly, shouting.
After he extinguish his slipper he realized all the kids were laughing and said: you rascals didn't warn me, and likewise he started laughing.
May 10, 2021
La science peut-elle tout expliquer?
Je pense que oui. Ce n'est qu'une de temps. Quand des gens parlent de choses mystiques, de choses mystérieuses, de choses inexplicables, en réalité ils parlent de choses qui la science ne peut pas encore expliquer.
Il y a de nombreuses de raisons : peut-être nous ne savons pas encore le modèle ou la formule approprié. Peut-être nous n'avons pas encore assez de données. Peut-être nous n'avons pas inventé le dispositif de mesure.
Je pense que c'est important d'être honnête : quand nous ne pouvons pas encore expliquer une chose avec la science, nous devons l'admettre. Mais admettre que nous ne pouvons pas le faire est différent de prétendre qu'il se passe quelque chose de magique ou de mystique.
May 10, 2021
Metaverse
The term "Metaverse" is from an American science fiction novel "Snow Crash" published in 1992. The book says that the Metaverse is a parallel world to real life.
With technologies such AR and VR, the real world can be projected into the Metaverse. You are able to have a cyber doppelganger there.
In the Metaverse, people can do whatever they can or cannot do in reality. For example, you can have meals, work and get married there, no different from reality. You can also find experiences that are not available in reality - if you are a person who has lost both arms, you can experience playing basketball there; you can also make a person who has died in reality alive and let him "live" permanently in the metaverse.
In the metaverse, people can do what they can or cannot do in reality. For example, you can eat, drink, work and get married there, no different from reality. At the same time, you can find experiences that are not available in reality - if you are a person who has lost both arms, you can experience playing basketball there; you can also create a person who has died in reality and let him "live" permanently in the metaverse.
The Metaverse and the real world are not separate, but interoperable. For example, the money you earn in the virtual world, the patent application, can be transferred to reality.
May 10, 2021
Journal
The highest temperature here in summer can reach about 40 degrees Celsius, but it wouldn't last too long. Generally, the hottest weather here in summer is from mid-July to mid-August.
According to the weather forecast, it will rain tomorrow, and the maximum temperature will drop to 24 degrees Celsius. The high temperature in the past few days will be relieved.
I took some pictures in the past two days. I hope you like it.
May 10, 2021
May 10, 2021
Mark Aurel
Mark Aurel war der letzte Kaiser der Pax Romana. Er war als weiser Mann bekannt und war fast gezwungen, Kaiser zu werden, weil er das ruhige und kontemplative Leben bevorzugte. Sein Co-Kaiser Lucius Verus war nicht so zurückhaltend und gemäßigt, er würde während der Antonin Pest sterben, der größten Pandemie in der römischen Geschichte, die auch die römische Armee dezimierte. Mark Aurel überlebte die Pandemie und führte eine Reihe von Gesetzen ein, die große Sorge um Sklaven, Frauen und Waisen zeigten. Man erzählt sich, dass er ein erfahrener Jurist war und habe immer mit dem Senat zusammengearbeitet. Seine Schriften "Selbstbetrachtungen" würden in späteren Jahren für viele zu einer Quelle der Weisheit werden und brachte ihm den Titel des "Philosophenkaisers". Sie reflektieren seine stoische Haltung zum Leben wider, am wichtigsten wie der Einzelne für sein eigenes Weltbild verantwortlich ist:
"Der führende Teil der Seele ist der Teil, der sich selbst weckt, sich seine eigene Richtung gibt und sich selbst zu dem macht, was er jeweils will, und der es bewirkt, dass ihm alles, was geschieht, so erscheint, wie er es will."
May 10, 2021
Learning a foreign language
More than twenty years, I am learning English but I am not good now.
I think that I was only focused about reading tests like TOEIC.
I tried to participate classes where everyone should speak only English, but it didn't help to improve my speaking.
One years ago, I decided to start writing English.
After that, not only my writing ability but also my speaking were increased.
My skill isn't still enough to speak fluently but I have now confident to study English.
Someday, I will speak well.
May 10, 2021
THIS, THAT, THESE, THOSE, and the miscellaneous
1. (on-line chat) We have a new friend in our group, Mark, and he likes to be nicknamed Mack. Ok, so THIS is how you should address Mark. Moving on to ...
(Can I use 'THAT is how', here?)
2. You can buy her 2 different perfumes or a subscription to use a site with audiobooks or films (recent pleasers, blockbusters) for free.
But THESE are only a few examples, and I'm pretty sure you know what your mums would like to get on their Day. (Mother's Day).
So you'll certainly come up with some imaginative ideas.
(Can I use THOSE in the above-mentioned fragment?)
3. Look at THESE photographs. THESE smiles look staged and the backgrounds are fake. There's too much Photoshop in them. They even edited the colours. In the pics put up on the next wall the photographers shot people in real scenes (shoppers, passers-by, tourists).
So THOSE were 2 types of photographs we we've had a chance to compare -posed and real ones. And THAT experience was both educative and entertaining.
(Can I use THIS instead of that in the passage above?)
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Riscrivi un dialogo come se fosse una pagina di diario.
Caro diario,
Oggi è stata un bel giorno. Vorrei dirti delle mie materie che intraprenderò. Quest’anno, sto studiando 6 materie. Sono l’italiano, la matematica, la psicologia, l’educazione fisica, il francese e l’inglese.
Dalle 6 materie, preferisco l’italiano e l’inglese il più. Mi piace l’italiano perché è la lingua di mia nonna, e vorrei conoscere la cultura di Italia. Anche spero che un giorno, posso visitare Italia, quindi visto la mia famiglia, in cui è i miei cugini e i miei zii.
Mi piace l’inglese perché amo leggere e scrivere. Penso che è una materia facile, quindi non c’è molto sforzo.
E soprattutto, odio la fisica educazione. Penso che sono un po’ pigra e non sono proprio sportiva, quindi la fisica educazione non è la mia materia preferita. Comunque, gli insegnanti non sono simpatici, e invece loro sono antipatici.
La psicologia è una materia che penso è molto interessante ma anche complicata. Studiamo il comportamento degli esseri umani, lo sviluppo intellettuale dei bambini o degli adolescenti e… un sacco di cose interessante. È propria una materia che è molto interessante e non mi secca mai.
Comunque… penso che dovrei andare a letto adesso. Buonanotte, diario!
May 10, 2021
Navels
When I was a kid, I was said "If you touch your navel frequently, you'll get cold or something bad will happen." Also, there is a myth in Japan that if you expose your navel when it is thundering, your navel is taken away by the thunder god. Probably, this myth was made to prevent children get cold because the temperature goes down when the weather is bad. However, I thought it is better for me that my navel disappears because it has no function and brings bad luck in some cases.
May 10, 2021
Journal
The croaking of frogs in the first video evoked my distant memories, and it reminded me of the scene in the summer nights in the countryside when I was a child. Summer night breeze, croaking of frogs in a pond, and the villagers in trees shadows to take cool after a whole day's hard work. What a nice idyllic scene.
The second video reminded me of Anshun in Guizhou province , where the famous Huangguoshu Waterfall is located. The waterfall in the video is almost the same as those in Anshun. It makes you feel refreshed after watching it. Meanwhile, Anshun is also a famous summer resort, where the temperature in summer doesn't exceed 30 degrees Celsius because it is a plateau, so the temperature is low.
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May 10, 2021
Fachgeschaeschaften
Frueher kaufte ich gern in Fachgeschaeften ein, aber heutezutage kaum, weil die Waren Online oft viel wieniger als die in Fachgeschaeften. Das ist wahrscheilich ein der Gruende fuer das Sterben von Fachgeschaeften. Die Entwicklungen des Online Handels foerdern /verursachen das Sterben.
Die Menschen moechten Waren, die guestiger sind, einkaufen. Ausserdem koennen die Kunden beim Online-Einkaufen zu Hause bequem und muehelos die wuenschenden Waren kaufen. Es ist sehr anstrengend, dass viele Laden eintretten muessen.
Aber man muss zugeben, dass die Qualitet der Waren, die Online verkauft werden, nicht garantiert werden wuerdem . Durch nur einigen Bilder bewertet man die Qualitaet schwierig. Im gegensatz dazu kann man in Fachgeschaeftendie Produkte selbst ausprobieren. Ob sie fuer mich geeignet sind? Ob sie hohe Qualitativ sind? Dabei haben die Einkaufe noch weitere Vorteile. Waehrend die Kunden ein paar Tage fuer die Zeit des Lieferns (ob Paket Beitraeger besser?) warten, koennen die Leute, die zu Fachgeschaeften fahren, ihre Guete normaleweise sofort mitbringen.
Insgesamt ueberwiegen fuer mich aber Nachteile.
May 10, 2021
May 10, 2021
고향은 과거와 달라진점
나는 부모님의 이야기를 들을때 멕시코시티는 얼마나 변한 것을 깨닫았다. 요즘은 여기서 모둔 것을 살 수 있는데 30년 전만 해도 어떤 가전제품을 멕시코에서는 찾을 수 없었다. 그리고 물건이 멕시코에서는 미국보다 더 비쌌다. 그것을 때문에 많은 멕시코 사람들이 제품을 사러 미국으로 갔다왔다. 그 사람들은 미국 백화점에서 물건을 싸게 샀고 멕시코에서 비싸게 팔아서 돈을 많이 벌었다. 이행동이 불법인 반면에 좋은 사업이었다. 그래서 많은 사람들은 이러한 것을 했지만 쉽지 않았다. 우선 멕시코시티에서 가장 가까운 미국 도시까지 적어도 15시간이나 걸렸다. 게다가 당연히 경찰에게 그 사람들이 잡히면 감옥에 갈 수도 있었다.
May 10, 2021
May 10, 2021
Senhor Flamel
Nicolau Flamel foi um escritor e herói popular francês. Não foi um grande alquimista durante sua vida, porém tornou-se um alquimista lendário depois de seu falecimento. Mais de duzentos anos depois da sua vida, Flamel foi creditado como descobridor da pedra filosofal. Se dizia que ele tornou-se imortal.
May 10, 2021
He comprado patinetes
¡Por fin he comprado patinetes! Creo que este último año muchos amigos me han hablado sobre los patinetes o me han pedido que comprara algunos y ahora está hecho. Estaba un poco triste esta tarde y mi hermana y yo intentamos proponer actividades divertidas que se pueden hacer afuera. Había traído sus patinetes consigo (está de visita) y me sugería que podamos conseguir algunos para mi y patinar juntos. Lo hicimos, pero me sorprendía que patinar fue mucho más difícil que recordaba. Parte de eso fue que las suelas eran muy anchos y mis pies deslizaban por dentro. Mi hermana me dijo que suele llevar dos pares de calcetines para evitar este problema. Tendré que practicar más antes de invitar a algún amigo a hacerlo juntos.
*** Todavía tengo dificultades con el subjuntivo. Además, ¿no sé si "consigo" es una palabra? La aprendí en el colegio pero en España mi madre anfitriona me dijo que no era una palabra.