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Sept. 22, 2021
名前を覚えるの
私はずっと前から名前を覚えるのが下手だ。でも、日本語の名前は特に難しい。英語の名前ほど日本語の名前に慣れていない以外、二つの理由があると思う。一つ目は苗字と下の名前の順序の違いだ。私はよく苗字を呼ばれたから苗字を使う自体が問題じゃない。でも、日本語に熱中している前に覚えた日本語の名前は問題だ。その類の名前は翻訳されたので、覚えた時と実際の順序が逆だ。頭の中で正すのは簡単なはずだと思ったが、なかなか難しいからたまに正しい順序を忘れる。例えば有名な作家や政治家の名前はどっちの方が苗字を忘れる。二つ目は名前の漢字の読み方だ。名前を読むのは慣れていないからどう読めばいいかさっぱり分からない時が多い。それと名前だけに使われる漢字もある。複数の読み方があればどっちがもっと普通か分からない。本を読む時、名前にふりがながないと困る。名前をより覚えるのためにしばしば読むしかないと思う。きっといつか慣れる。他の案は練習のために有名な日本人の名前を使ってフラッシュカードを作る。
Sept. 22, 2021
Liebe Abdo,
ich habe vor einer Woche meinen Geburtstag gefeiert, sie war toll, weil alle meinen Freunden, Eltern und Nachbarn gekommen sind und mit mir getanzt haben.
Es war vieles Geschenk für mich da von meinen Freunden.
Mein Vater hat mir ein Kuchen geschenkt, es ist das tolle Geschenk in meinem Geburtstag, da es sehr lecker und schön ist.
Wir könnten noch mal eine andere Feier für dich machen, wenn du zu Marokko gekommen wirst, ich werde dir dein Lieblingsauto geben.
Mit lieben Grüßen
Youness
Sept. 22, 2021
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Gli animali esotici non sono animali domestici.
Devo enfatizzarlo: Gli animali esotici NON SONO animali domestici. Meritano di essere liberi, vagare per le selve labirintiche del Brasile e perdersi nei prati vasti dell'Africa. Invece di quella prospettiva che vi ho appena presentato, ci imbattiamo in una realtà più funebre: nidiate di pappagalli selvatici in gabbie, adibite e allineate ordinatamente per loro, in modo che i visitatori dei parchi aviari possano gustarle. Un peccato che non sappiano que tali parchi, sebbene sembrino accoglienti, sono infatti degli trabocchetti.
I dipendenti tentano, con netto successo, di raccogliere a loro qualche denaro sotto la guisa della conservazione delle speci , anche se loro stessi sono coscienti del fato che gli introiti prolungherebbero solamente il calvario degli animali. Fanno finta di niente pur di conservare il proprio lavoro.
Che leccapiedi.
E poi, gli autori di spicco (e sono anche ignobili) muovono terra e cielo per ribattere, spremendosi il cervello per inventare delle spiegazioni, che le condizioni in cui vivono quegli sfortunati sono adeguate e che coloro che hanno sporto le denuncie in contro dei proprietari sono solamente dei ficcanaso; fanno tutto quello mentre ricevono tangenti dai grossi colpi. Che fitta per chi luta per la tutela dei diretti degli animali. Che spavalderia allegare qualcosa del genere, quando gli animali ricevono razioni smilzi.
Odio quel formicolio di imbecilli. Sono però soverchiato da lui (è accettabile scrivere “lui” invece di “loro”?)
E poi, quando la verità fosse stata esposta, gli animali sarebbero liberati, ma sarebbero così sgangherati che il gesto benevolo sarebbe in vano, dato che morrebbero non molto dopo.
Il maltratto non può diventare un vezzo della razza umana. Mi raccomando, smettete di praticarlo .
Sept. 22, 2021
Describing an illustration
The diagram illustrates the mechanism of generating electricity with water. In total, this process includes three different stages. While the water of a sea evaporates, clouds start to formate. After it starts to rain, the water will fill a specific reservoir which is build with a dam that collects the water over a certain area. For the second stage, this water is connected to two other buildings. When the valve opens, the water starts to circle between these three buildings and constructions. The flowing water turns on the Turbine, which generates the eletricity with high voltage cables. After that, the water flows to the third building where the Pump pumps the water up to the Reservior again. The last step is about to transport the electricity with high voltage cables to a transformer station. From that point, the electricity will be distributed between different buildings by underground cables. For example, these buildings could be hospitals, schools or other places that are connected with these undergroud cables.
Sept. 22, 2021
Should historical important buildings be protected by law?
*Little mock test *
Many nations own historicaly protected buildings by law, but is this really necessary or should the protection by law be banished for building new buildings to offer more living-places? To answer that, this essay will discuss that question, summarize the arguments and give a short opinion.
The importance of protecting these buildings differs depending on the building. Due to the historical identity of every nation, the protection of these buildings are important in general. However, it is necessary to differ between buildings with big historical impact, compared to them with a little. If they had played a historicaly important role in the history, they should completely be protected by law. On the contrary houses with little historical impact should be treated differently. They could still be protected, but the government could set new laws.
For instance, the government could set the requirements for moving in these houses lower. With this, more people could get the opportunity of moving in such houses. Second, laws for modernizing these buildings could be improved as well. While it could still be important to protect the historical character of these buildings, little modernizations could help to improve the living conditions.
In total, history has a big influence on current situations and the identity of a nation. By destroying historcal important buildings, history could also be vanished at some day. Even though more people search for houses, it is not a solution to destroy old worthful buildings. This problem should be solved by the government by improving the laws.
Sept. 22, 2021
Mock exam - writing
I have a language test in the next days. This is a mock exam. The first task is about to describe 2 different charts and the second was about to discuss about a given opinion.
Task 2: "In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility."
Task 1:
The bar chart gives information about the number of Japanese tourism outside of Japan between 1985 and 1995 and the graph below shows the relation in percentage of Japanese tourists travelling to Australia in the same years.
The share of Japanese people travelling abroad increases in general. While the number was by 5 million in 1985 it increased up to 15 million until 1995. Although the number increased in general over the years, it fluctuated at specific points. The share constantly rose until 1990, however, it decreased a little for the following year.
The graph has similar movements compared to the bar chart above. Even though the share of Japanese rose in general, it decreased from 5% to almost 4% in 1989 to 1990, and in contrast to the first chart, also a little from 1994 to 1995. While the slope was stronger in the first half, it is a little bit weaker in second half.
Task 2:
Should children work? While some call that completely wrong, others say collecting working expierience supports their mental growth. To provide an answer this essay will consider adavantages and disadvantages, and discus why children should not work.
If children work during their childhood they are able to collect worthful working expierience and learn to act responsible. Furthermore, they can learn to appreciate money. Indeed they develop a better feeling of the worth of money. For instance, not working children could compared to working children buy more sweets, toys or other things working peple could see as money waste in comparission for the needed working time.
In comparission to the supportive perspective others see that as a big mistake. Due to stay concentrated in school, they should not work in their free time. Even though they can collect working expierience, it is more important to let them meet or play with friends when they do not have to go to school. Improvements in their social skills with other children should not be underestimated. Additionally, the threat of falling behind in school increases if they work after it.
In conclusion, the advantages to work do not overweight the disadvantages for the explained reasons. The threat of losing the focus in school or a lack of developed social skills are to big, which is why children should not work during their childhood.
Sept. 22, 2021
Wort des Tages: die Spiegelkommode
Eine Spiegelkommode ist ein kleiner Schrank mit einem Spiegel und normalerweise auch mit kleinen herausziehenden Kästen. Hierzu ein Sätzchen:
Frau Hadar ist letztes Jahr leider verstorben. Jetzt muss ihre Wohnung ausgeräumt werden. Sie hat eine kleine schicke Spiegelkommode, die vor ihrer Wohnung steht, willst du sie haben?
Sept. 22, 2021
11. Les cohabitations entre une personne âgée et un-e étudia
Avec le progrés dans le domaine médical, les gens vivent plus longues, surtout dans les pays développés, comme le Japon. En plus, il y a de moins en moins de naissance chaque année. Donc, le problème du viellissement de la population s'aggrave, surtout qu'il y a plus de seniors qui vivent seuls. D'un autre côte, le loyer de ville devient de plus en plus cher et ce n'est pas très abordable par les jeunesses. Pour résoudre ces problème, l'idée de cohabitation est née ! Mais est-ce que c'est un scénario gagnant-gagnant ?
D'abord, ça la rend service à tout le mode : pour les seniors, ils ne sont plus seuls mais ont de la compagnie, ce qui est rassurant pour eux. C'est aussi bien pour la santé mentale en avant quelqu'un avec qui parle. Et pour les jeunes, ils peuvent trouver un logement assez confortable pour un prix très modéré. En cohabitant avec un senior, ils peuvent apprendre beaucoup, que ce soit l'expérience de vie ou encore la pratique inter-personnelle. Donc, ça peut être bénéfique pour tous les parties.
Cependant, il y a une grande possibilité d'avoir des conflicts tous les jours. Étant donné qu'il y a un grand écart de leur âge et de leur histoire, c'est facile d'avoir différent pointe de vue sur le même sujet, surtout dans le domaine politique. Et ça peut avoir un grand problème.
De plus, leurs horaires de vie sont différentes. Les jeunes se jouent souvent tard de la nuit mais les seniors dorment toujours tôt. Ça peut donc créer des ennuis pour les seniors.
En outre, il y a des risque d’intrusion dans la vie de l'un et de l'autre s'ils ne gardent pas un minimum de distances. Et c’est difficile de définir ce distance. Par conséquent, ça peut être inconfortable pour tous les deux.
D'après mon propre expérience de vivre avec mes grandparents, la cohabitation n'est pas si simple et pas toujours si sympas. Mais comme ils sont mes proches, je peut accepter les inconvénients. Pourtant, pour habiter avec les autres seniors, c'est difficile, non ?
Sept. 22, 2021
A trip by train
Some years ago, when I was young, I done a travel to Hastings by train to see this famous battlefield in the south of england. When I went down i the station, I still remember a pleasant smell of the air to humid ground. Now, when I smell something similar, I always remember that trip to Hasting.
Sept. 22, 2021
Anger
This morning, my father told me to wait him at the corner. When I opened the car door, I saw a woman sitting on the right side. So I went to the left side to put down my luggage. When I closed the door and went to the shotgun seat, the car left. Yep, it left without me. I was a little confused at first, I thought that maybe my father want to change a place to let me in. However, the car just left quickly. I spoke loudly to ask my father stop, but I failed. Then I ran after it fast, but failed either. I went to the gate and called my father.
He went back to pick me up a few minutes later. I was so angry that I accused him of careless. But my father contradicted angrily that he thought I was in the car because he heard the sound of door closing. The woman sat in the rear said that she also considered I had gotten in because she also heard the sound of door closing, when she was having a nap. I realized that he would never admitted his mistake. As for he was driving, I didn't want to make him angry, so I told him that it was all my fault. Then he became quiet.
Then I went to school, I found three boys were absent. I called for their parents, one of them replied that they arrived very early, the others didn't answer the phone. A few minutes later, there were about ten students stood in front of the teaching building with the teaching leaders. They were stopped bucause of late for class. When they went upstairs, I asked them why they were late. They all went to the dormitory first, one of them arrived school at 07:43, while they were asked arrive before 07:40. So, his grandpa lied. I punished them for cleaning classroom for two weeks. Then I told the incident in the parents chatting group. I had redeclared the arriving time for more than three times, but some parents still didn't take their responsibility, what they did was bad for the whole class.
During the second class, I receive many photos about my students who were just standing in the school yard when they should had cleaning the yard. They spent a class there when the other students were all having class. It was the third time they were accused of default in cleaning their clean zone. What should I say? I didn't know. It is so boring of teaching them.
I played drums in the afternoon. I ran 2 km at night. I need to relax more.
Sept. 22, 2021
Suomeksi #4
1. tarkasti
- Hän ampui hirven tarkasti. (She[He] shot and killed an elk accurately.)
・ampua → ampu- + -i → ampui
・hirvi → hirve- + -n → hirven
2. kuolla
- Pelkään kuollakseni maanjäristyksiä. (I am deathly afraid of earthquakes.)
・pelätä → pelää- → pelkää- + -n → pelkään
・kuolla → kuolla + -kse → kuollakse- + -ni → kuollakseni
・maanjäristys → maanjäristykse- + -i → maanjäristyksi- + -ä → maanjäristyksiä
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
Conscious About Health
In the past, people thought less about their health.
Being healthy was just not being sick.
And there was not enough information about health.
But these days, it has changed a lot.
First, people can easily get information about health on the internet.
We know what food is good for the body and what we should do to stay healthy..
Next, people try to check their body on a regular basis.
With the regular check, they understand the current state of their bodies and what they need to do.
Lastly, these days, people try to work out as often as they can.
So they usually go to the gym to train their bodies.
The gyms also provide many training programs like yoga, Pilates, cross fit and so on.
Once again, people are more conscious about their health these days.
Sept. 22, 2021
Joke
I think saying funny things is very difficult. It has to suit the situation and it is not obvious that what fanny things are. Sometimes, something funny you think is boring or rude to other people. It depends on other people, so you need to understand the personality of who you want to make laugh. I look up to humorous people and they are smart.
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
A Brighter Summer Day - 2
A minha mãe diz-me que o filme foi verdade filmado atrás da casa da minha bisavó.
É legal!
A coisa mais supreendente para mim foi eu posso lembros as cenas.
Infelizmente, as casas japonesas no filme foram resgarado muitos anos atrás.
O nosso governo é estúpido!
O lugar foi construído das casas novas e luxusas.
Mas, a árvore onde eles datem existe.
E o restaurante onde o Honey veio existe também.
De facto, ele é lugar onde a refinaria da açúcar venderanda sorvete.
Eu gosto muito da sobremesa que ela venderanda!
Este ano é o filme que estreia há 30 anos, e é o incidente aconteceu há 60 anos.
A distribuição do filme publicou DVD e BluRay com o pôster.
Eu comprei um, e o pôster é bonito.
Acho que Criterion Collection é Deus, porque ele restaurava o filme.
Ele restaurava há 10 anos.
Vamos agradecer como Criterion Collection fazia o filme!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2AMSHs2adWk
0:57 A árvore !
1:42-1:58 Quando eu era criança, o lugar foi assim!
Sept. 22, 2021
September 22nd, 2021
As I wrote before, my son took two graduate school entrance exam the other day. His first choice is Kyoto University and his second choice is Tokyo University. He passed the Kyoto University entrance exam the other day. Today, the result for Tokyo University was released, and he passed the exam.
Sept. 22, 2021
048 Audience’s Fault
048 Audience’s Fault
Kevin played as a dad in the soap opera, The Manny. He suggested to the director and play writer that they make it in a serious way. However, the director didn't agree with him. The audience didn't like serious topics. They just wanted something funny and light. In one of the scenes, Kevin was quite pleased with his own performance. He showed his talent as a real actor. Although the director liked this scene, he knew this wouldn't work for the audience in front of TV. He demanded to take an alt. Kevin lost his temper and began to throw a tantrum. He smashed the fake baby on the ground. He opened the suitcase which was empty and smashed it. Everything was fake. He said it was not the directors fault, not the writer's fault, and not the network's fault. It was the audience’s fault to like this soap because they demand so little of the play.
Sept. 22, 2021
Choses à faire
Un autre jour! Une bonne journée! Je regarde un arbre bel par la fenêtre. Elle est jaune et verte sous les rayons du soleil. C'est l'automne!
Je pense que je dois m'asseoir droit pour avoir bonne santé.
Je dois aussi commencer à aller à la piscine, à nager, pour bonne santé et humeur également.
J'ai juste rappelé que j'ai voulu à marcher à la rivage et ramasser des coquillages. Je vais faire cette bientôt!
Sept. 22, 2021
I sold my electric grill.
I sold my electric grill.
I also sold my hiking shoes.
There is a famous application for selling used items.
You can upload your items on it to sell them.
I have been selling many of my items which I won't use anymore.
I 've got a bit of money from that.
I thought I have to reduce my properties for my mental health and it worked.
Items that wasn't organized distracted me a lot.
I have to clean our home before my girlfriend coming.
I have never cleaned home during this holidays.
I feel like it was a heaven.
I have been in laziness as possible as I can.
I have been lying back and reading books all the time.
I went for a run just once in a day.
Now autumn has come and the weather is so so beautiful and I think I should go travel to enjoy the weather.
Sept. 22, 2021
14/15/16-8 迎月追(送)月
昨日、中秋祭りでした。
Yesterday was the mid-autumn festival.
前の日は「迎月」の名がありますし、後の日は「追(送)月」の名があります。
The day before will call “welcome moon”, the day after call “chase moon”.
外国の友達はなぜこの二つ日がそういう名前があるの質問を聞いた。
My non-Chinese friends ask why we named such days.
これは説明：
Here is why.
実は「月」は伝説の主人公「嫦娥」に代表しています。
The moon is actually referring to the lady who lives in the moon.
彼女は8/15に地球を戻る。
So, she will come back to earth at 8/15.
だから、前の日は彼女に期待を会う、歓迎としてに待ている。
Therefore, the day before we are waiting /expecting her to come.
後の日は月に帰る。
And the day after she will go back to moon.
だから、彼女に「送る」或いは「追う」の気持ちがあります。
So, we are trying to chase/sees her go back to the moon.
実はこの説明は本の根拠がない、個人的に思う。
This explanation is not from any books, it is what I think.
もし、不賛成たり、ぜひ、自分に解説をする。
If you don’t agree, you can have your own version to explain.
Sept. 22, 2021
Sept. 22, 2021
훈훈한 하루
요즘 비가 3일간 동안 꾸준히 내린다. 하루를 천천히 시작하니까 최고. 보통엔 커피 한 잔을 끓으면서 이렇게 하루를 시작된다. 커피의 나에겐 일어나기에 도움이 되기보다는 향이 내 기호에 맞다. 그러니 비가 내리는 날엔 도시가 조용해서 빗소리가 들으며 내가 커피 끓는 과정에 폭 빠진다. 고향에선 비가 이렇게 내린 날이 겨우 없어서 기상하자 하루를 편한 마음으로 보내곤 한다. 일단 커피를 끓고 책도 읽기도 하고 시간이 흐르며 밖에선 무슨 일이라도 생기면 보기도 하고 공부도 하고 그냥 하루를 편하게 보려고 한다. 이렇게 비가 엄청 내리는 날엔 음악을 든 생각 없고요. 왜냐하면 내가 '이 순간'을 즐겨 보내려고 해서 음악을 들면은 안 되는 것 같아요. 또 보통 비가 내리면 머리가 갑자스럽게 아파서 공부도 하지 못하는 때가 있고. 그런데도 오늘 오후쯤엔(?) 요새 읽는 말다 한 책 두 권을 다 읽어 버려서 둘다 너무 재밌었다.
오늘은 예상처럼 공부도 못 하지만 적어도 새 어휘를 쪽지에 적이라도 할 수는 있었다. 이렇게 적어 놓으면 잡생각을 다 사라진다.
아무튼 내 나라에선 비가 내리면 모두 사람들이 집안에 고립되기 때문에 전통이 있어서 tortas fritas를 만들어서 즐겨 먹는 날이다 :)
Sept. 22, 2021