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Feb. 28, 2022
ma journée
Aujourd'hui, je suis allé á l'école et c'était très intéressant, d'abord j'ai besoin de fait une examen de maths et c'était facile mais mes copains n'ont pas aimé parce que ils ont trés difficile quand ils ont besoin de fait ca. Après j'ai mangé mon dîner mais malheureusement je n'ai pas les temps finir ca car mes amis ont mangé tout, j'étais très agaçant. A dix sept heures j'ai préparé le gâteau de citron pour mes amis demain.
Feb. 28, 2022
Vita al mare
Da sempre volevo vivere vicino al mare. Con questo non voglio dire che mi piaccia nuotare, surfare o le altre attività marine. Semplicemente penso che il mare rende il mio posto nel universo più bello nel senso puramente estetico. Sono nata e cresciuta in montagna. Come in Polonia non è possibile godere entrambe le cose, in altre parole non si può essere al mare e in montagna allo stesso tempo, il mare mi sempre sembrava molto speciale.
Principalmente sono affascinata dai mari freddi perché turisti li evitano spesso, cercando di trascorrere le sue vacanze nei luoghi più caldi con alberghi e attrazioni turistiche. Mi piace di più osservare delle onde e scoprire delle viste belle e sempre nuove dovuto a una possibilità di guardare di diverse angolazioni e diversi tempi della giornata. Anche quando fa freddo apprezzo i momenti in cui posso correre lungo riva del mare e sentire la unica e quasi magica piacere e libertà.
Invece il mio ragazzo è totalmente diverso. Lui non ha mai bisogno di ripararsi dal sole. Per lui il sole è benedizione. Lui fiorisce in clima caldo. Il calore non gli dà fastidio e non lo stanca. Le mie idee lo fanno guardare a me con terrore. Non può nemmeno immaginare che il sole a volte diventa troppo.
Per ora viviamo nell’entroterra dove non si può contare su del sole, quindi nessuno di noi sente se felice in materia di clima. Ma devo ammettere che questa non è la cosa più importante nella vita e magari nel futuro avremo una possibilità di trovare un compromesso e trasferirci in un posto che piaccia a entrambi.
Feb. 28, 2022
Feb. 28, 2022
The Wars
The human being can be very inteligent as idividual person, but can also be very stupid as a collective. It is painful but while exist the arms, will exist wars. Yestarday could seem incredible, but today we have a war inside of Europe. That is a fact, a terrible and sad fact. We must to think that the wars can the take out the worst of one person. If one of the contender become absolutely crazy, and this fighter can to access to nuclear weapons, then...., then, the picture that go out is very, very sad and disastrous. With wars there are not hope for the humanity.
Feb. 28, 2022
A Shot in the Dark - 49
Part no. 49.
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense (analyse it as if it’s taking place as you read it).
Sergeant Brunswick is walking across Brighton, his mind buzzing with thoughts. He feels excited and yet defeated. Should he hear of the grim event that has just unfolded at the seafront—journalist Harry Jupiter being knocked off the pier dead* into the water—Brunswick will likely have a breakdown. So it’s just as well that he knows nothing yet, otherwise that last fragment of hope which he still clings on to would probably be crushed.
Anyway, it has painly dawned on Brunswick that last night he made some unwise and basic mistakes at the crime scene. He keeps telling himself that he should’ve known better. He’s probably right there. In fact, overlooking a glass probably containing fingertips of the culprit is beyond doubt a negligent behaviour**. He was so engrossed in pursuing his angle on Joanna Carver’s guilt that he had become oblivious to anything that didn’t fit that view. Reflecting now on that, Brunswick feels regret. Luckily for him, the forensic team did*** its job properly and did*** not fail to collect the glass as evidence.
*By “dead” I meant that Jupiter died as a result of this.
**Would it be fine to say, “is (beyond doubt) being negligent”?
***”did (not)” or “has/have (not)”? From my point of view, Brunswick should know when the forensic team scoured the crime scene. I don’t know if that’s relevant.
Feb. 28, 2022
Mes textes en français
Harry Potter à l’école des sorciers.
À cet moment je suis en train de lire le prémier livro de la populaire saga de Harry Potter. Je n’avais jamais lu aucun de ces romans ni vu aucun des films, mais, je veux amélliorer mon français et apprendre des nouvelles mots, et por ça, j’ai décidé de lire un livre, et le livre que j’ai choissis c’est Harry Potter à l’école des sorciers.
C’est un livre simple, dans lequel le registre utilisé n’est pas trop compliqué, il est bien simple. C’est vrai que il y a plein de vocabulaire que on ne trouvera pas facilément dans une situation quotidiénne (des mots liées à la magie et la sorcierie, par exemple). L’histoire est facile a suivre et les personnages ont de charme.
Je essaie de intercaler le roman avec le film, et pour cette raison, je suis en train de regarder le film peu à peu, quelques minutes chaque foix.
Avec temps, je lirai, peut-être, tous les livres de Harry Potter. Je ne sais pas. Le temps nous dira.
Feb. 28, 2022
28 février 2022 - Ce matin
Je n'avais pas noté que j'ai eu un cours ce matin-là. Jusqu'à 8h40 de ce matin, après que j'ai terminé le petit-déjeuner et j'étais entrain de me mettre au travail, j'ai regardé mon téléphone par hasard (d'habitude, je ne regarde pas le téléphone le matin si je reste chez moi de travailler) et il y avait de messages sur Whatsapps qui s'agitaient des choses liées au cours de ce matin. J'étais étonnée et puis J'ai vérifié qu'on avait vraiment le cours ce matin-là mais même si je sortais tout de suite, je serais sûrement en retard, alors j'ai décidé de ne pas y aller. Cependant, j'étais un peu malheureuse de le sauter et j'avais un peu de culpapilité parce que l'école nous offre encore de cours dans ce moment difficile de Covid mais moi, je ne l'ai pas valorisé. Mais comme c'est déjà arrivé, je ne pourrais que le laisser tomber.
Feb. 28, 2022
Jeu, set et match !
Je jouais au tennis et maintenant j'adore le regarder. Le tournoi de Roland-Garros est relativement proche, je suis donc en train de compiler un petit lexique du tennis en français avec des petits aspects québécois.
J'ai commencé par compter les points.
— 30:0, trente–zéro. C'est du gâteau, tu as presque fini. Appelle ta blonde/ton chum pour faire une soupe à l'oignon pour le souper !
— 30:15, trente–quinze. Il/elle a eu un coup de chance, t'inquiète pas.
— 30:30, trente A. Baisse la température de ce four! Ça prendra du temps. Je n'aime pas ma soupe trop cuit.
— 40:40, « quarante A » ou « égalité » quand ça arrive encore et encore. Ennuyeux, ce match.
— Avantage dehors. Frappe le court avec ta raquette ou fais semblant d'être blessé. Fais n'importe quoi pour irriter ton adversaire.
— « 'Osti d'Criss de ta...k » Tu as raté un smash facile et c'est fini.
— Jeu, set et match ! Tu as perdu et personne ne t'aime. Décroche ton sac de sport et deviens ermite dans un village isolé de la Gaspésie.
Feb. 28, 2022
Exercising For My Health
I have tried exercising as often as I can to stay healthy.
But it isn't easy to do because of COVID-19.
Before the pandemic, I went to the gym after work, sometimes I went to the swimming pool.
I also walked around my office building or climbed the stairs of my house.
When the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle over than 60 km.
Except climbing the stairs, I can't do other things now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
Feb. 28, 2022
A Reply
Hi Kai, thank you for still remembering me and the concern from you. Around the Chinese New Year, I don't think everything was going well for me. The first is that someone reported me for no reason and the discipline investigation department investigated me. Afterwards, I lost my mother. I stopped learning for about a month. I have just restarted learning since the end of this month. I will continue learning English for a long time until I can speak fluently. I also wrote an article to remember my mother and my local newspaper published it. But the editor edited my article and I don't think they are doing well.
Feb. 28, 2022
Do you remember the first novel you ever read?
I do remember the first novel I read.
It was called "Keritai Senaka". I think that was the first novel for adults that I read. I was 10 or 11 at that time.
That book is about a teenager who struggles with something.
I can't remember any other story about the book.
I even forget about the book I read a couple of weeks ago. So it's no wonder I forget about the book I read 10 years ago.
Feb. 28, 2022
Feb. 28, 2022
Ce que je vais faire apres lycée
Je suis au dernière année de lycée, donc l'année prochaine je vais commencer à étudier. Je vais déménager à une autre ville, loin de la ville dans laquelle j'habite maintenant. La bas il y a plein d'études. Cependent, je ne suis pas sur si je pourai prendre l'étude que m'interesse le plus, puisque je dois avoir suffisament de points. Malheuresement, je peux entre à quelques études qui m'interessent. En outre mon frére m'a dit que je pourrai changer à tous les études ingénieures si j'entre à une des études ingénieures. Donc je pourrai changer à l'étude qui m'interesse le plus. Cependent, il faut qu'il soit siéges vacants dans l'étude. Néanmoins, il y a toujours des décrocheurs, donc il y aura probablement des siéges vacants.
Feb. 28, 2022
온라인 수업 현상
코로나가 퍼지기 시작한 후에 많은 사람의 인생이 바뀌었다. 매일 출근하던 직장인이 재택근무를 하게 되며, 매일 학교에 등교하던 학생이 온라인으로 수업을 듣게 되었다. 처음에는, 모두가 집에서 잠깐 쉴 수 있으니 좋을 줄 알았지만 그 잠깐이 길어지면서 자기 자신이 예상지 못했던 문제가 생겼다. 비대면으로 수업을 듣게 된 학생이 자기주도학습 능력을 기르는 데 집에서 공부하는 것이 효과적이다. 따라서 자기 자신에게 더 의존해가고 독립적인 삶을 가지는 데 영향을 준다. 하지만, 온라인 수업을 계속적으로 듣는 것은 학생에게 큰 단점이 될자도 모른다. 또래 친구를 만나지 못하고 화면으로만 보기 때문이 사회성이 점점 악화되며, 미래의 인간관계를 유지하기 어려움이 생길 것이다. 또, 청소년 경우에는 우울증과 감정 거북 같은 정신병에 걸리기 쉬운 시기 때문에 밖에 나가지 못하면서 그들에게 일어날 수 있는 정신적 문제이다. 처음에는, 집에서 휴식을 취하는 것이 나쁘지 않다고 생각했지만 시간이 지날수록 생각이 틀렸다는 것을 깨달은 사람이 많다. 코로나로 인해 모든 사람의 인생이 급격히 바뀐만큼 서로를 도우면서 지내야 이 위기를 빨리 극복할 수 있다고 믿는다. 그렇기 때문에 교사들이 학생을 잘 챙기고, 그들이 올바른 삶을 이끌 수 있도록 잘 가르쳐야 한다. 선생이 없어도 독학하고, 좋은 점수를 얻을 수 있다는 점을 학생에게 알려주면 큰 힘이 될 것이다. 언젠가 끝이 날 단기간이라고 위로해줘야 그들도 버틸 힘이 생긴다.
Feb. 28, 2022
022801 - Finding Jobs
I am still waiting for my dream school's offer. I chose computer science as my major because it is a competitive skill to help me live in another country. This month, I practiced speaking English every day, and I dream to go to New York City. But however, through friends and online forums, I learned that the competition is so fierce this year, and many talented candidates are not selected. Hope I have good luck!
I also have to consider plan B of the situation that perhaps objective factors would prevent me from leaving where I live. So I have decided to start finding jobs this month. I have two internship experiences, so I am not scared to interview. But I have never been to an interview in English. This time I would try to apply for some international companies, have fun!
Feb. 28, 2022
Pourquoi je déteste l’école
Premièrement, la majorité de ce qu’on apprendre à est inutile. On a beaucoup de sujets inutiles au lycée, mais pas autant qu’au collège. La moitie des sujets sont plutôt inutiles pour moi, parce qu’ils sont les sujets obligatoires. On a par exemple norvégien où on apprend d’analyser texte et apprendre à écrire dans une manière que je n’utiliserai jamais.
Deuxièmement, nous apprenons vraiment lentement en classe. La raison pour laquelle est qu’il y a toujours des personnes qui ont besoin d’utiliser plus de temps que la personne moyenne. Les professeurs doivent prendre en compte de cela, donc la majorité des élèves pensent que l’enseignement est trop lent.
Troisièmement, il y trop de classes où on doit être présent. Si on est absent dans plus de 10% des classe de chaque sujet, on ne pourrait pas avoir le diplôme. Donc on doit passer beaucoup de temps à l’école, au lieu de faire d’autres choses qui seront plus utiles.
Feb. 28, 2022
China's Intangible cultural heritage
I am translating something in Chinese into English. It is about Intangible cultural heritage (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Intangible_cultural_heritage).
From the Yimakan epics of Hezhe ethnic minority to the classical national chanting "Gesar Er", from the green tea making technique in the West Lake area to the art of embroidery, porcelain, opera and Kung Fu tea in the Chaoshan region, from Hainan’s Li brocade to Tibetan carpet weaving…, the rich and colorful intangible cultural heritage is strongly integrated with our modern life. It has become a rising star in the cultural tourism market, as well as a pop trend that the public is chasing for. Splendid artistry amazed audiences while other simple but rich folk festivals aroused nostalgia. The craftsmanship behind the arts passed from generation to generation and now builds a huge business market. Not only does Intangible cultural heritage exhibit the profundity and longevity of Chinese culture, it also achieves its own strong vitality and new possibilities through innovation.
Feb. 28, 2022
生徒に出会うこと
いつものように厳しく添削していただけませんか？文法的に合っていても不自然な文であれば遠慮なくどんな風に言えば良かったか教えてください。一文をすべて変えても全然構いません。むしろそうしていただいた方がありがたいです！
今日の日記はいつもより短くしようと思う。時間があまりないんで、長くは書けない。今日のトピックは最近の出来事についてにしたい。働いてる学校の近くに住んでるからたまに校外で私の生徒に出会う。出会う時は軽く挨拶や手振りをして、何もなかったようにやってたことに戻す。でも、その生徒が親と一緒にいる時はどうすればいいだろう。ちゃんと挨拶して自己紹介をした方がいい気がする。親から積極的に話しかけられたことがないから別に私が逃げてる訳でもないけど、声をかけた方がいいかな。昨日、またスーパーで生徒に出会ったけどその時も手振りしか出来なかった。みんなはどうすればいいと思う？本当に私にはいい生徒しかいないから、きっと親に自分の子供がどれだけ元気で楽しくやってるか伝えたら喜んで私と話してくれる（当の子供は絶対に恥ずかしいからその話が嫌になるけどね）けど、なんだか初対面が苦手で消極的な態度を取ってしまう。
Feb. 28, 2022
Mon jour aujourd'hui
Aujourd'hui j'ai lu un épisode de webtoon. C'est un webtoon amusant, donc j'aime lire des aventures de la protagoniste. Je me suis promenée aussi avec mon chien. Aujourd'hui il faisait froid alors j'ai porté mon manteau. Á demain je voudrais étudier plus de la conjugaison des verbes. J'en ai besoin de améliorer mes aptitudes de la conjugaison.
Feb. 28, 2022
About everyday shopping
People have different styles of everyday shopping. Some of them prefer to buy what they need in large supermarkets rather than small stores or local markets. In my opinion, these options respond to different necessities. In this brief essay, I am going to explore some reasons to choose one over another.
First of all, wholesale can be an option for you. If you want to save some money, you could buy bigger quantities of a product in a large supermarket. Generally, big retail stores have a large stock of a product, which means that you can find whatever you need offered by different brands or in different presentations. Another benefit, if you decide to buy there, is related to promotions and discounts. These big sellers usually have collaborative agreements with suppliers. Then, it is easier to find special days where some products have discounts.
On the other hand, buying in small stores or local markets has some benefits as well. They are perfect when you want to buy a few things and do not spend too much money. Not to mention that these stores likely are closer to where you live and are perfect for solving an urgent necessity. In addition, you do not have to queue for a long time nor be surrounded by a myriad of people.
To sum up, choosing a style of shopping could be an important decision according to your necessities. Between the variables to consider we could find a budget, quantity, time available, closeness, brand preference, among others. Luckily, the retail sector is big and variable enough to offer many options to their consumers.
Feb. 28, 2022
Tutto Quattro le Stagioni in una Settimana!
Il tempo é bizzarro* dove abito! Ho tutto quattor le stagioni in una settimana! Un giorno é fa molto caldo e soleggiato, il dopo giorno é fa molto freddo e nevica! Piaco la neve perché poto scio. Piaco il giorni di soleggiato perché poto cammino con mio cane a il parco.
Feb. 28, 2022
我在美術大學的經驗（一）
我在大學時是唸美術的。其實我一點也不後悔選了美術系，因為我至今都一樣那麼熱愛繪畫，將來也打算從事美術職業，但如果我可以再次選擇的話，我一定不會唸美術大學。美國大學學費昂貴是眾所周知的，雖然我比其他同學幸運，並不是借了很多錢來交學費，但我還是覺得我所得到的教育並不值得我付出的那個價錢。
第一，那所美術大學的課程不是安排得很好。如果你想成為一位出色的畫家，那你必須要學好繪畫基礎。繪畫基礎就是差不多每幅代表性繪畫都會擁有的元素，比如說人體結構、透視原理、光影色彩等。我在大一大二時有一些必修的基礎課，但那些課程所教的內容跟繪畫基礎是幾乎毫無聯繫的，而之後我所修的課程已經假設你對它們瞭如指掌，沒有再花時間來解釋，所以我到畢業時還是沒有掌握到那些原理。到現在，我還是需要用網上教材和資源來填補我不明白的地方。
Feb. 28, 2022
Feb. 28, 2022
Los veinte en Estados Unidos
No voy a escribir más sobre el virus X hasta que no haya terminado la guerra en Ucrania. Con tanto conflicto en el mundo, no hay razón por la que escribir ficción sobre la guerra y muerte.
Voy a escribir un poco sobre los 1920s en Estados Unidos, pero de estilo informal y con un poco de humor, ya que todos necesitamos reír ahora mismo.
En Estados Unidos, los veinte eran un tiempo de caos, crimen organizado y de gran conflicto entre la sección conservadora y la progresiva de nuestra sociedad.
Había mucha prosperidad durante los veinte, gracias al aumento de producción debido a la primera guerra mundial. Además, con los avances en la tecnología, las fábricas podían reportar más y los sueldos de los obreros subían.
A pesar de esto, para los granjeros, los viente eran un desastre. El precio por los productos agrícolas, como la paja y el grano, seguía bajando y tenían cada vez más deuda. Sus problemas aumentarían aún más en los treinta, cuando las sequías en el centro del país obligaron a muchos a abandonar sus casas y buscar trabajo en las ciudades.
Los veinte también eran un tiempo en que el crimen organizado florecía. Con la Prohibición, un periodo de tiempo en que la venta y compra de alcohol eran ilegales, había un gran mercado negro para las bebidas alcohólicas. Pandillas bajo el liderazgo de personas como Al Capone se las proveían para ganar más dinero, y grupos se peleaban a menudo.
Había gran conflicto entre la ciencia y religión durante este tiempo también.