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Die Socken
Stelle dich du für den Tag deinen Socken lebendig werden vor. Was Sie werden denken? Was Sie werden machen?
Ich denke, dass es zwei Socken Sorte ist : die Socken, die leiden und die Schlaubergers.
Die erste Kategorie sind die, die wir tragen. Sie warten im Schwarz, indem Sie nicht dem Licht des Tages zu sehen hoffen. Sie sind nämlich verängstigt. Die Menschen tragen sie mit ihren schmutzigen Fuß. Wir zerlöchern sie. Sie werden schmutzig und stinken am Abend.
Die andere wissen die Grausamkeit der Menschen. Sie sind sehr Intelligent. Darum verstecken sie sich um nicht gefoltert zu werden. Sie bleiben in die Waschmaschine oder sie trennen sich. Zum Beispiel, ist eine Socke in dem Schank und die andere hinter dem Bett.
March 22, 2022
22 mars 2022 - Histoires du soir
Quel était votre livre préféré quand vous étiez enfant?
Quand j’étais petite, ma mère me racontait des histoires d’Andressan, de Grimm et aussi de 1001 nuits. Je ne me souviens pas laquelle était ma préférée; peut-être c’était « Poucette » (qui s’agit une fille née dans une fleur et son aventure) parce que j’aimais bien ce genre d’aventure et le fin était bon. Quand j’étais un peu plus large, je pouvais lire des histoires moi-même et donc j’ai tombée amoureuse avec les histoires de princesses de Disney comme tout le monde. À cette période, mon chambre était si petit qu’il n’y avait pas assez d’espaces pour ranger toutes mes livres scolaires, donc ma mère m’a interdit d’acheter de livres de leisure. Mais elle m’a encouragé de les lire dans les bibliothèques
March 22, 2022
Practicing Phrases
Just because you have a lot of things to do doesn't mean you have got to rush.
Maybe you feel like doing everything as quickly as possible.
However, there is no need to do that.
It will turn out you would be able to do everything, if you keep doing them.
All worries are made by yourself.
In other words, you can remove all of them, and you don't need under pressure.
It will turn out you deserve to get the reward of the effort.
March 22, 2022
Une semaine de progrès
Je voudrais étudier le français plus souvent. Je suis déjà très contente de mes progrès pendant cette semaine.
Je suis déterminé à réussir: je vais me mettre à étudier tous les jours pendant une heure!
Si j'ai commencé à apprendre le turc, je serai également capable de booster mon français avec un peu d'effort !
J'ai recomencé à étudier la langue avec une méthode très interessante d'une autre maison d'édition car tous le autres ne me faisent pas comprendre ce que je dois faire ou apprendre. Cette méthode est concise et explique de manière simple tout ce qu'il faut savoir pour réussir le test.
Il n'y a pas de doute que c'est aussi ma faute... si j'avais étudié la langue pendant 15 minutes tous les jours pendant 2 années, je parlerai couramment sans y penser. Mais non ! J'ai préféré de perd mon temps... maintenant je dois rattraper le temps !
Je sais que j'étais stupide, mais je veux changer cette situation !
À mes yeux, je vais réussir parce que je suis la seule personne que je dois vaincre tous les jours, c'est-à dire, je dois être meilleur que j'étais hier ! Les autres ne sont pas important dans cette situation. C'est ça !
PS: Évidemment, j'ai parlé de manière métaphorique... je n'ai pas une heure libre pour me consacrer seulement au français tous les jours, mais je suis en train d'organiser mes activités pour y arriver un jour.
Merci de votre attention !
Merde, je dois penser en français et pas en portugais... =(
March 22, 2022
Bazı rastgele ifadeler
1) Hiba arkadaşim. O Suriyeli.
2) (Benim) evim büyük.
3) (Benim) köpekim yok. Benim kaplumbağam.
4) (Benim) arkadaşım çocuk var. O kiz.
5) (Benim) türk arkadaşim yok.
6) (Benim) iki annem var. Biri italyan'da, diğeri brezilya'da.
7) O Kalpsiz! O zalim!
8) (Benim) uykusuz parzadam beri.
9) Edis bir türk şarkıcıdır. Tarkan da öyle.
10) (Benim) beş dil Konuşuyorum: portekizce, ispanyolca, italyanca, ingelizce ve fransizca. Dil öğremenyi çok seviyorum.
11) Mavi çanta. Mavi kılıf. Siyah kalem.
12) Çay seviyorum.
13) (Benim) kirk yasinda. Ben yirmi değilim.
14) Türkie'de türkce konuşulur.
That is what I have learned more or less till now!!! there somethings that I still dont understand at all!!! I am starting from scratch and I apreciate all the correction I get with simply explanations if I have commited some mistake... Write in Turkish is hard with a virtual keyboard!
Thanks for your attention.
Iyi guler!!! =)
March 22, 2022
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March 22, 2022
Making a good habit
I have a lot of things to achive and persue.
And I also grasp what is needed to make goals.
However, I couldn't make any habit and set up the way to the goals.
Also this diary is too.I started this last July ,but it has not reached 10.
Exercise,muscle training,English,reading some books.
Everything ,I only have that maind ,"I get it done!!".....
March 22, 2022
ich will eine briefe fur meine prüfung schreiben
heute will ich meine deutsche fahikeiten ubungen dafür werde ich eine briefe an meinen eltern schreiben
liebe eltern
wie geht's es bei ihnen, haben sie schon im neuen haus ausgezogen, wo finden sie das leben in frankreich und wie weit ist das unterschiede zwichen hier und dort drüben, hoffentlich sie haben schon das heimatweh uberwinden, neue nette nachbaren kenenlernen und orte wo man zum haus fuhlen kann finden, der anfang ist immer schwer aber im kurzen zeiten alles wird gut gelaufen und unsere trenung ist nur ein preis fur eine bessere zukunft unserer familie
machen sie nicht bei nichts sorgen, alles in ordnung hier, ich werde in ein paar tage ein wichtige prüfung bestanden, deswegen verbringe ich viele zeit im haus zu vorbereiten und ein gute ergebnis am ende zu bekommen
am ende des monats werde ich mit meinem freund im urlaubnis fahren, wir haben noch nicht an eine ziel entscheiden, ich gehe gerne irgendwo, wo er warm ist, eine gruppe reise mit nachtwandern hast mir immer gefahlt
ich kusse Ihnen beiden, ich vermissen Ihnen
bis wir uns trafen
ihre tochter
i know my german is really bad at the moment, writing is the hardest part so far and i hope that i can pass a b1 test in two months
March 22, 2022
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21/03/22
Heutzutage habe ich entschieden, dass ich mein Deutsch verbessern muss. Seitlang habe ich fast kein Deutsch gesprochen, geschweige denn auf Deutsch geschrieben. Ich bermerkte die bedauerliche Lage meines Deutsches, als ich versuchen habe, ein E-mail auf Deutsch zu schreiben.
Das E-mail war zur eine Universität in Deutschland, in Zusammenhang von ein Forschungsprojekt, dafür ich interessiere mich seh. Das Projekt geht um die Beziehung zwischen lokale Regierung, die Verwaltung und Asylanden, was die sogenannte Tempohomes anbelangt.
Sowieso fand ich es so schwierig, ohne Wörterbuch zu schreiben und letzendlich, habe ich mich auf Deep L verlasst. In diesem Moment merkte ich wie schwach mein Deutsch geworden ist.
Mit hilfe meiner Freunden, war ich erfolgreich, eine Rückantwort zu bekommen, aber ich schäme mich - wie kann ich ein Diplom in Deutsch haben?!
Ich fühle mich als ob diese letzte 4 Jahren im Sande verlaufen. In der Zukunft möchte ich mit dieser Art von Forschungsprojekt arbeiten und Asylsuchenden helfen - aber dass ist undenkbar, wenn mein Deutsch nicht verbessert.
Also! Dieser Monat habe ich entschieden, für eine Deutsch-Prüfung zu vorbereiten.
Dieses Jahr ist noch ein Deutsch-Jahr ( obwohl ich in Japan studieren werde lol) und hoffentlich es ist mein letztes "total-Deutsch Jahr". Es ist mein Fehler, dass letztes jahr ich zu viel auf Wörterbücher getstützt habe.
March 21, 2022
March 21, 2022
Book - A Shot in the Dark - 57
Part no. 57
This summary was deliberately written in the present tense (analyse it as if it’s unfolding as you read it).
As Sergeant Brunswick leaves Penny’s lodgings, he feels relieved and pleased. Brunswick has gathered a great deal of information from interviewing her. Before that, he knew little on Bobby Melma. Although he hasn’t gained any clear insights on Bobby Melma—assuming it is his real name—he has obtained some promising leads to follow up. Since he’s sure that Penny is concealing something, Brunswick will have her under constant surveillance.
Constable Twitten is on his way to the Albion Bank in Middle street. Even though the bank was robbed over ten years ago, he thinks it a clever move to return to the place where the crime unfolded. Despite his thoroughness, it hasn’t dawned on him that the bank may still employ someone that might have been involved with the crime. Once inside the bank, Twitten starts questioning the director. Twitten learns that the two perpetrators behaved like any regular customers at first, and when they took out the guns, no one dared to look at them. Though, what strikes Twitten the most, as well as the director, is that the robbery took place on the 16th, while the bank would have been full of money the next day.
March 21, 2022
Y una pizca de magia
Miro la show de televisión: Y una pizca de magia. Es sobre las aventuras de tres muchachas y se llaman Kelly, Darbie, y Hannah. Encuentran un recetario mágico. Hacen comida y cuando lo comen, la magia acontecío. La abuela de Kelly es enferma porque de el recetario y las chicas, especialmente Kelly, quieren hacerla mejor con la magia del recetario.
March 21, 2022
Why the USSR collapsed?
Many modern political scientists attribute the collapse of the USSR to its failed economy. Command economy, the economic scheme that the USSR adopted for its entire course, proved ineffective. Such a scheme lacked the power of the “invisible hand” to optimize productivity and relied highly on the economic plan of the leaders who, more often than not, had no access to critical and accurate information. The western world understood this well and started a “containment” strategy in which it contained the development of the USSR via economic and financial approaches. The involvement of the quagmire war in Afghanistan (a lesson that the US did not learn either) and the costly “Star war” campaign made things even worse. As people became angry and desperate when they saw empty stores, it seems true that the failed economy played an essential role in the collapse of the USSR. However, an angry and disappointing population is not uncommon in authoritarian systems, most of which, instead of destruction, chose to suppress such sentiment even harder in one way or another.
March 21, 2022
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Mystery in the dark
This is a creepy story of what I have lived through few weeks ago. It was Wednesday, I was walking home after my football practice. Outside was cold and dark which already made it scary. As I was walking I noticed someone walking in front of me 10m away, I thought nothing of it. The person was tall and he walked slowly and that made me nervous. Out of nowhere he made a turn to the left and dissapeared. That was weird because I could be sure that he went into the bushes. I started walking faster to see what happened but when I got there he was nowhere to be found. That gave me goosebumps and I was terrified. At that point I started running home to tell my parents what happened. To this day I don't know if I was tired and imagined it or I experienced something mysterious.
March 21, 2022
The swamp monster
In the evening of August, two friends went for a walk. They saw a nice place where they could sit and relax for a bit. Everything was calm until they began to hear squeaky sounds. At first they thought it was just some animal, but they kept hearing that noise. They noticed that they were not at a normal place, but next to a swamp. That swamp was actually abandoned and haunted because it was believed that a little girl drowned there. Her spirit is thought to wander there in the form of a monster. Suddenly steam began to appear, so they're blood ran cold. They set out to flee, but it seemed to them that they saw something. It started to rain and the wind was blowing hard. They felt as if something was following them and suddenly heard a scream. Behind them was actually a kind of green dirty creature. Did they manage to escape from him?
March 21, 2022
My terrible story
For 3 years I walked down a dark street. Strange things have happened in the street before and that's why I was afraid. The first time I went alone I only heard the barking of dogs, but the second time I went I heard some creepy creaking and I got scared. I hoped that I was just imagining and while I was thinking about it as if I saw the shadow of an older man ... I thought I was just imagining but suddenly I met him face to face and my heart started beating fast and I screamed to myself. He looked at me and asked "Are you afraid?" I was silent. And she tried to pass him but he wouldn't let me. He left, but there was still an eerie squeak, I started running and I said out loud to myself, everything is fine, nothing will happen to you. I thought I saw a light and I said to myself too, but it was the light of the same old man's bicycle. I wondered to myself, God, will you help me? He looked at me again and said “we are destined” I shuddered. And she turned and went on her way. Suddenly the dogs barked and I turned to see where they were, but we didn't see them. I reached the end of the street and I met again ...
March 21, 2022
une lettre
Salut Betty,
Je t'écris parceque je voulais te demander si tu as envie à faire une excursion avec moi. Je pensais que nous pouvons visiter la montage en France. Pour quatre jours dans un hebergement. Alors ce n'est pas le plus impressionnant mais assez pour le vit. En plus je me souvenir comme tu as moi direr que tu adores la montagne avec tout sa nature. Ce n'est pas grave si tu n'a pas de temps ou quelque chose similaire.
March 21, 2022
Why I learn english
Everything all begon with the school . I wasn't interested so of englisch. But when I took with my relatives I must speak englisch then the most can't speak german. In addition is that a major subject of my land from the school. It is very important for my building and my future.I comming so further in live. Because of this I must every day learn englisch. Also for my homework and my schoolwork and test. When we make holiday. I must also speak english by Italy Paris Africa neither austria and berlin . I watch sometimes my series of the computer of english it give a less of germany. While english is easyly language use the world that on most. For TV newspaper bussiness computer and other.
March 21, 2022