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законопроект
Есть законопроект в России, который хочет давать пленникам доступ к телефонам и деньгам, которые смогут провести в киосках, которые находятся в пределах тюрьмы, за покупками еды и напиток, а также предметов, которые идут к жизни за решётку. По-моему, это- справедлино. Человек должный работать за тем, который хочет. Кроме того, продукты, которые будут доступны к ним, уже были определены государством, то есть пленники не смогут эксплуатировать право за своим удовольствием. Благодаря этому способу, большинство пленников смогут усвоить этот важный урок.
Тем не менне, что же кажется многих стран Западной Европы, ситуация- совсем разна. Я увидел видео, в котором пленник показывал интервьюеру шоу, как жил. Содержание клипа шокировало меня. Его камера была похожа на квартиру гостиницы. У него были телевизор, консоль, доступ к фильмам Брэд Питтом, кроме много видов элитных предметов, которые обставляли свой комнату. Знак льготы был то, что не легко искать такие предметы в реальном мире. Это- не правда.
Цель суда- убрать злодеев от сообщества, а потом наказать их, чтобы они понять свои ошибок и выйти из центра лучшими людьми, когда они отбудут срок. Разумеется, что никто должный нарушать их правы, но несколько органы власти должный осознать, что в данный момент они увлекаются аргументом того, что пленники вправе иметь более свободы.
April 7, 2022
7 avril - 2ème
Mon école est nommé comme la deuxième meilleure école de dentiste du monde, selon le QS ranking 2022 (par subject). Ce n’est pas la première fois qu’elle a obtenu une telle haute position, en fait elle est la top 1% du monde pendant les dernières années. Oui, on a de très bons dentists et cherchés ici mais si on jugeait par la performance de l’administration et le bureaucratie, elle ne mériterait pas cette position. Ici, les matériaux de cours sont publiés seulement une minute avant le cours ; les horaires d’étudiant peuvent être changé la veille et toujours ; le système irraisonnable pour réserver une leçon de travaux pratiques. Ça stresse vraiment les étudiants.
April 7, 2022
Experience of Covid 19
I've got a coronavirus and I was sick for three days. I had a terrible sore throat. It was difficult to bare. I took painkillers, anti-inframmatory drugs, fever reducers. I almost slept at that time. It was hard time. I never want to experience it again.
I went to climb a mountain last weekend. It was harder than usual, but I wanted too much. I climbed the top, and it was late evening when I descended the mountain. I was so tired. I should've hiked down early. I don't have to climb the top. By the time I was at the middle of mountain, I had hesitated whether to keep going to the top or turn around and hike down.
I found my eyes bloodshot in the mirror at night. I looked very tired. From the next day, my muscles and throat began to hurt slowly. It was negative when I first got a rapid antigen test, but the second time I got it the next day, when my body got worse, it was positive. I got a PCR test and it was positive as well. I had to quarantine myself for a week and today is the day three.
Last three days, it was hell. My fever went up and down and I was stuck between waking and sleeping. I was faint and angry. Fortunately, now I'm okay. Not be treated perfectly but very good. Thank you.
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My Old Friend
About 14 years ago, I tried to study three foreign languages at the same time.
Many people who wanted to learn multi-languages met every week, and each one presented any topic with different languages.
It was not allowed to use the same language in the next week consecutively.
Today, I watched a YouTube that one of the study group members introduced her note-taking routines.
While watching it I was so glad, and I wrote some comments on her blog in a long time.
Fortunately, she remembered me and we shared our own lives.
Meeting with old friends always makes me feel happy.
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Report about the excursion of this weekend (C1 CAE)
You have just returned from leading an adventure weekend with your school. In preparation for an assessment meeting, you have been asked to write a report for the head of school.
Your report should explain what you feel the weekend achieved for students and teachers alike, describe any problems you may have had and suggest any changes you would make to the adventure weekend that would make it more interesting for everyone.
Write your report.
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(What could make it sound more natural? )
Report about the excursion of this weekend.
Introduction.
The aim of this report is to describe the activities that took place in The Jerte Valley during the currently annual adventure weekend with the students of the third course of the secondary school.
Goals and achievements.
It was a good trip overall, despite some setbacks in our schedule related to students' behaviour, as I will explain below. This has been an extraordinary opportunity to improve communication between the different groups in both class (A and B) for this course, and especially between teachers involved and students. For example, throughout during the hike up to the valley's lake, students of both classes help one to another to go up through the hardest slopes, crossing over the river, etc. It was stimulating for a teacher to see how students that have almost not interacted before at school cooperate and have fun. As regards (it is corrected from Write&Improve website as "As regards to") teachers, we could know our students beyond the daily class context, what led us to a better and more personal communication. Moreover, they put some theory concepts, mostly from the natural sciences subject, into practice.
Problems and suggestions for the next trip.
There had been some problems with a little group of the class A. They managed to hide a couple of whiskey bottles with the purpose of drinking them once teachers were sleeping. However, I could catch them on time, so I avoided the situation got worse. I have just taken an appointment with their parents in order to have another meeting and inform them about this wrong-doing. Therefore, as a suggestion for the future, I only propose look in their backpacks before the travel start.
Conclusion
All in all, these adventure days have been a really useful experienced that help us all to get closer to each other and get to know us out of classroom.
April 7, 2022
Ma reve
Bonjour. Je m'apple suvan et c'est mon premier journal. En ce journal je decriver mon reve de devinir un player de foot . Quand je suis 9 ans je joue football pour le premier fois . Apres mon classe ete finir je regare le match professionnel et je l'aime becoup. On ce moment je decide que je volais devinire le player de foot. Pour 2-3 anne je joue becoup et becoup de foot . Aujourd'hui je suis un player national de foot.
April 7, 2022
April 7, 2022
이번 주의 수요일의 문장들
1. 하나가 뭘 말했어요?
이 다리를 넘어가야 바닷가를 볼 수 있다고 했어요.
2. 동생이 왜 울려요?
아까 우리 엄마가 동생이 싱겁은 가지를 먹였어요.
3. 오늘 집에 왜 늦게 돌아왔어?
아까 좀 학생들이 교실에서 종이를 던졌어서 선생님이 다들에게 청소하게 했어요.
4. 기뻐 보이네요.
새 직업을 구하게 되었어요!
5. 저번은 젊은 아이가 제가 밀었어요.
진짜요? 요새는 아이들이 무례하져요.
6. 영화를 보는 것을 끝냈어요?
영화를 좀 봤지만 전기를 나가서 영화가 끊겼어요.
7. 배드민턴을 자주 치던 이 운동장이에요.
선수인 줄 모르겠어요.
8. 방금 횡단보도에서 병아리를 넘어가더라고요.
응? 기억하지 않던데요.
9. 고향을 보고 싶으면 비행기 표를 사지 그래요?
사고 싶은데 현재 표가 너무 비싸군요. 싼 표면 바로 지금 갈 텐데요.
10. 게임이 아마 헷갈릴 테니까 안내서를 읽을까요?
맞아요. 지침을 찾고 있어요.
April 7, 2022
Termin beim Arzt
Sehr geehrte Damen und Herren,
mein Name ist Huan Lai. In letzter Zeit habe ich ständig Albträume und mein Körper ist extrem müde. Manchmal habe ich auch negative Gedanken. Ich glaube, dass es am Schlafmangel liegen könnte. Also bin ich früher ins Bett gegangen, aber es passierte immer wieder. Ich würde mich freuen, wenn Ihr mir einen Rat geben könnten. Können Sie mir sagen, ob wir uns am Freitagnachmittag treffen können? Bitte geben Sie mir bald Bescheid. Sie erreichen mich per Mail unter [email protected]
Vielen Dank im Voraus. Ich freue mich sehr auf eine baldige Antwort.
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Huan Lai
April 7, 2022
Bar de dragas
Las semana pasada fuí con un grupo de amigos a un espactáculo de dragas en un bar en la Ciudad de Mexico. Honestamente, no sabía que esperar, y cuando entramos eramos casí los unicos en el bar. Las pobres dragas me parecieron igual de nerviosas que disilucionadas por la falta de espectadores. Me imagino que para ellas sería raro hacer una performance drag, con su estilo muy exajerado, para una audiencia casi no existiente. El estilo se alimenta de la energía de una audiencia. De los pocos otros espectadores había una mesa con tres personas mayores que parecían muy fuera de lugar. Estoy seguro de que eran familia de una de las dragas (¡y eso me pareció muy tierno!) o tal vez turistas medios perdidos - que tenían rostros de estar un poco incomodos. Todo esto hizo que sentieramos mucha presión por ser buenos espectadores y aplaudir y chiflar fuertemente a cada canción que interpretaron.
April 7, 2022
Lesen am Computer
‘‘Lesen am Computer’’ ist ein sehr interessantes Thema. Als ich ein Kind war, habe ich Papierbücher gelesen, aber jetzt benutze ich den Computer zum Lesen. Ein großer Vorteil ist, dass ich jedes Buch auf dem Computer einfach durchsuchen kann. Außerdem kann ich die Schriftgröße und Helligkeit nach Belieben einstellen. Während des Lesens kann ich dort auch markieren und kommentieren. Neben den Vorteilen gibt es natürlich auch Nachteile. Es ist sehr schädlich für die Augen, wenn ich zu viel Zeit damit verbringt. Ein Nachteil ist, dass ich es ohne das Internet nicht lesen kann. Für mich überwiegen jedoch die Vorteile, da Lesen am Computer meiner Meinung nach die praktischste Art des Lesens ist.
April 7, 2022
Un mercredi pluvieux à New York
Aujourd'hui, j'ai eu une réunion dans une société financière à "mid-town" -- c'est une expression des New Yorkers.
C'était un jour gris et mouiller. La pandémie a causé une baisse d'activité c'est perceptible pour quelqu'un qui vit ici depuis longtemps. C'est triste.
Cependent, un chose que je sais -- New York change rapidement. Déjà il y a des nouvelles que les gens retournent. Il n'y a pas d'appartements disponibles dans mon quartier. Il y a autres signes de vie et et j'ai reçu un e-mail concernant la saison de ballet du printemps au Lincoln Center.
Peut-être qu'un peu de soleil et des températures plus chaudes amélioreront l'ambiance à New York. Je l'espère.
April 6, 2022
안전조처 소홀로 물류창고에서 화재 발생
내가 읽은 기사에 따르면, 1월 초 평택시에서 공사 중이던 물류창고에서 화재가 발생하였다. 화재의 구체적인 원인은 아직 수사 중인데, 설계도안 없이 설치된 열선과 우레탄폼이 현장에서 발견되었다. 화재가 19시간여 만에 진화되었는데 그 과정에 소방관 3명이 순직하였다.
이 화재에 대한 기사를 읽으면서 이런저런 생각을 많이 하게 되었다. 창고에서 안전조처를 왜 취하지 않았을까? 너무 급해서 그런가? 아니면 돈의 문제였을까? 공사를 너무 대충해서 결국에 창고에서 불이 났고 사람 3명이 목숨을 잃었다. 안전을 우선순위로 하면, 공사가 무사하게 잘 될 가능성이 높아진다. 만약에 돈 때문에 안전조처를 취하지 않았을 가능성이 있는데, 안전을 보장하는 데 쓰는 돈보다 더 많은 돈을 이제 화재 때문에 없어져 버렸다. 복잡하거나 번거럽더라도 특히 공사장 같은 위험한 곳에서 안전을 무엇보다 중요시해야 한다.
April 6, 2022
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Are there food kitchens for the needy in your country?
I am currently living in Russia and I've never checked whether there're food kitchens for needy nearby. When I and my farther lived in Montreux, Switzerland we used to ride a bike to the food kitchen which was situated in the neighbouring town. We pedalled there two times a week: On Wednesdays and Fridays. For two euros you could buy a pack of different food and have lunch right in the kitchen, while the same food in nearby shops was by threeholds more expensive. In the local shops we only bought the red fish.
April 6, 2022
L'exam
L'école est durée et parfois vraiment stressant. Je n'ai pas vraiment de problemes à l'école. Seulement la matière "allemand" me donne un peu de problèmes en temps de temps. Il y avait des moments comme maintenat quand j'étais vraiment stresse mais j'éspere que je vais me debrouiller. Aprés tout je ne suis pas la seule personne qui visiter cet école.
April 6, 2022
JLPT N4 Practice 28
１．この間田中さんが夏休みはどこに行くかと聞きました。
２．田中さんが冬休みはどこに行くか分かりません。
３．日本にいたときは、度々日本語を話せました。
４．今月は時間があるので、他の言語を勉強できます。
５．昨日娘に買い物をしてもらいました。
６．昨日息子に台所を掃除してもらいました。私を怒らせましたので。
７．彼女はお金を使わずにデパートにいられない。
８．私はイタリアにピザを食べずに旅行したくない。
９．今週末東京に行こうとは思いません。
１０．私は来月田中さんがスペインに行くと思います。
１１．そのアニメの歌を聞かせてください。
１２．私は彼に試験中辞書を使わせました。
１３．午後は天気が悪くても、喫茶店で会いましょう。
１４．日本語ができないのに、日本に行きたい。
１５．時間があったら、そのドラマを見ます。
１６．外が暗くなると、電気を付けます。
１７．明日今日みたいな日なら、動物園に行きたい。
１８．昔は天気が悪かったと、いつも学校へバスで行った。
１９．昨日テレビを見ながら、飴を食べすぎた。
２０．あなたの猫が一番美しいです。
April 6, 2022
Hello there
Hello everyone! My name is Michael. I am a seven-year-old boy from Russia. I'd like to improve my English. I currently have English classes at school. We do some activities there: reading , writing and speaking. Most of the time we read out loud. Sometimes, we act out some scenes. I love my English classes, but I'd like to be more involved and interact with not only my classmates, but with people all over the world.
April 6, 2022
6 avril - La sélection de chef d’état
Aujourd’hui, on dit qu’il y aura qu’un seul candidate pour la sélection de chef d’état qui aura lieu le moi prochain. Ce seul candidate a été le chef de police, et puis le chef du bureau de sécurité et désormais il est le ministre de affaires politique qui est un poste de plus haute fonctionnalité au dessus de chef d’état. C’est drôle de dire que ce soit une « sélection » parce que c’est evident que le gouvernement de Beijing a déjà décidé qui va prendre ce poste. En fait, je n’intéresse pas vraiment au politique mais chaque fois que j’ai reçu tel message, j’ai vu de détérioration répandu ici et j’ai eu envie de quitter cet endroit envahi par une nouvelle forme de « démocratie ».