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Oct. 22, 2022
Q&A
Q: When did you join this company?
A: I have been working at this company since 2013. First, I worked as a sales engineer. I usually tested the product characteristics for customer inquiary at that time. Then, I transferred to operating section. I'm in charge of the procedure of export. Soon after the transfer, I found the job a bit boring, but now I enjoy it.
Oct. 22, 2022
桜チップスポッドキャスト「荷造り」
このポッドキャストのエピソードの話題は荷造りでした。まりさんは九州の旅行の準備をしていたから、荷造りの習慣について話しました。
大抵、前日と当日に荷造りをし始めても、まりさんのお母さんは２週間前によくし始めます。まりさんはその習慣がとても変だと思います。なぜなら、早めに荷造りをしたら、よく使うものを使うことができないんです。旅行で使うものはたぶん、毎日のように使ったものだから、そのものを荷造りをしたら、旅行へ行く前に日常の利用ができないわけです。
過去の留学のときはまりさんは一泊だけの旅行で、荷造りをし過ぎました。あのとき、ギクシャクした状況だったから、あれから軽く荷造りをすることにしました。旅行で使うものはよく少ないんだから、リュックサックだけで満足できます。たくさんのものを荷造りをしても、ほとんど使わずにうまくいくときは多いです。そういう理由でまりさんは最低限だけの荷造りをするようになりました。
私は今、日本に引っ越す準備をしているから、そのエピソードの話題はかなり役に立ちました。たくさんの関係な言葉があるし、私の荷造りについて考えさせられました。実は私の荷造りの習慣はまりさんとほとんど同じです。一概に最低限の荷造りをしてみて、気軽に旅行することが好きです。
Oct. 21, 2022
Easy homework
Hello! Thank you for correcting me, you're the best helping other people to improve in languages.
In this homework I need to write down about me.
I know how to memorise words.
I know learning techniques.
I don't know how to read in Japanese (yet).
I don't know how to play football.
I like to read books.
I like to take photos with my mom's camera.
I dislike to do my homework (hahah just kidding).
I dislike to eat mushrooms.
I dislike to take hot showers.
I hate to talk with egoistic people.
I hate to be distracted when I'm studying.
I love to learn languages.
I love to be with grateful people.
Thank you for reading :)
Oct. 21, 2022
Homework
Hello, I hope you're doing well :) thank you for decide correcting me.
This is my homework, It's in one month but I want to have free time so I'm doing it earlier.
Please see the image at the end for better understanding.
A) ¿Which way is the best to go from the bus station to your house?
Walk to the north, following the Queen's avenue for two apples, then turn to the right and walk one apple.
B) Your friend wants to go to the bank because he need some money. Explain him how he can go from your house to the bank.
Go down, walking in the High street for one apple and then turn to the left and walk 2 apples. The bank is in the opposite side of the pub.
C) After he get the money, wants to visit the museum. Explain him wich is the easy from the bank to the museum.
The easiest way is to go to the right taking the Oxford street and after you pass the cinema go down for one apple, following Queen's avenue after that turn to the left and finally, walk one apple.
D) In the afternoon you and he are going out to eat at a restaurant. Explain him how he can go from the restaurant to the pub.
Pass the car park, when you are in football pitch go down walking one apple in the Queen's avenue, you will see a bookstore at your right, then turn to the left and walk until reaching to the pub.
Thank you so much for correcting this :).
Oct. 21, 2022
Quelle saison de l'année est-ce que j'aime ?
La saison que j'aime beaucoup est l'été. La raison que j'aime cette saison est parce que elle est chaude, il n'y a pas de neige, et il y a aussi beaucoup de chose à faire dehors.
Cette année, j'ai fait beaucoup de choses cette été avec mon frère. On a voyagé à beaucoup de destinations intéressantes. Pendant fin juin, on est allé à Royaume-Uni et on a vu beaucoup d'attractions comme le château de Windsor, le palais de Buckingham, et le Shard au centre de Londres. Et pendant fin juillet, on est allé à la ville de Los Angeles et on a vu l'Observatoire Griffith et la plage Venice. On a eu un grand temps !
Alors que j'écris ce journal, le temps fait de plus en plus froid au Canada et je voudrais bien rester à la maison. Bonne chose que j'ai le choix de travailler à la maison ou au bureau car je voudrais pas travailler au bureau chaque jour de la semaine. Mais ce n'est pas tout noir que le temps se refroidit. Par exemple, on peut aller à la gym pour faire de l'exercise. De plus, le mois de décembre est toujours un mois qu'on attend avec impatience; les cadeaux, la famille et les congés sont certaine des choses que le mois offre.
Oct. 21, 2022
Oct. 21, 2022
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Oct. 21, 2022
Challenge, Day 21
Today is twenty one day of my daily English challenge.
I posted on the site "langcorrect" a text talked about ' Our relationship'. Regardless , there were many mistakes but I was not feel bad ever at English like before.
I am sincere. Today, I was not do anything interesting. I prefere to take a rest.
I want always to thank everyone who helps me.
Oct. 21, 2022
Describing my living room.
My living room has two lamps, one is flower shaped and the other seems like a cube, there is a piano because I used to play it.
There is also the table and chairs, fruits and a water purifier are located in the table.
There are also beautiful paintings and the colour of the wall is white.
There is a TV and a sofa.
Oct. 21, 2022
Describing
Hello! I hope you're doing well.
As always thank you for correcting me :).
I'm trying to describe how and where things are (this is a little bit hard for me).Please check the images at the end to better understanding.
First image (kitchen).
The microwave is in the kitchen , in the corner of the table, before the eggs, at the down of the sauce, at the left side of the window.
The fruits are above the refrigerator, down to the shelve, at the right side of the salad.
The flour is in the shelve, at the right side of the jam, up to the refrigerator and at the left side of the blender.
Second image (bathroom).
The towels are in front of the washstand, at the right of the toilet, up to the floor and under the paint of a flower.
The toothbrushes are in the front of the mirror, they are placed up to the washstand and inside a cup.
The mirror is above the washstand, at the right side of the painting, in the wall.
Third image (bedroom).
I can save my clothes in the furniture at the right hand of the bed.
I can save my clothes in the furniture under the teddy bear.
I can save my clothes in the furniture in the front of the carpet.
The lamp is above the furniture at the left of the bed, at the other side of the clock, up to the bed.
The last image ( living room ).
You can get a book in the red furniture, next to the clock, under the lamps and the paintings, before the window.
The switch to turn the light on/off
Is next to the lamp, placed in the courtains, at the right side of the sofa.
Oct. 21, 2022
About me and my family.
I have a long and curly hair, mi skin tone is between white and yellow.
I love to read, people could say that I'm smart but I rather think that I just use good learning techniques, I love to create something no matter what kind of art it is.
About my mom, well, she is a good person, she is so funny and always make me laugh, she wears the clothes that I made for her. She is dark-skinned.
She loves poetry and she is learning ukulele.
I do not have a father.
My sister is tall, she is truly beautiful, she likes handcrafts and she is learning Japanese too.
She has straight hair, her voice is so sweet and soft.
She is kind.
My brother loves Japanese food, he likes videogames like Leage of Legends and minecraft.
He is tall.
He has a close personality, he is shy like me but he is truly kind too.
Thank you for reading :)
Oct. 21, 2022
おばあさんの誕生日
今日はおばあさんの誕生日でした。85歳になりました！今オーストラリアにいるお姉さんと一緒におばあさんの好みのスイーツが入っているギフトバスケットを上げました。
おばあさんは誕生日を毎年家族と一緒に過ごします。今年はインディア料理のレストランで昼ご飯を食べました。午後でおばあさんの家で手作りのケーキを食べて、コーヒーとお茶を飲みました。
夜は、おばあさんとおばさんと一緒にドイツ語で「Rummikub」というゲームをしました。日本語のネームは「ルミ―キューブ」だそうです。以下にウィキペディアで書いてある説明を張っております。2つのゲームをして、私は2回勝ちました！普段は運が悪いですから、勝ちませんけど、今日は何とか運がいい日でしたね。
ルミ―キューブについてː https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E3%83%A9%E3%83%9F%E3%83%BC%E3%82%AD%E3%83%A5%E3%83%BC%E3%83%96
Oct. 21, 2022
Personen auf der Zeichnung
Neun Personen sind auf der Zeichnung. Alle sitzen auf einer Treppe. Sie sehen aus eine Familie aus. Oben sitzt ein älder Mann, die einen Stock hält. Er ist wahrscheinlich der Opa, weil er am ältest von den Personnen ist. Unter ihm sitzt seine Frau mit ihren Kindern, die Erwachsene schon sind. Ihre Hände liegen auf ihnen Schultern. Im unteren Teil des Bildes sind fünf kleinen Kindern. Sie sind die Enkelkindern der Großeltern.
Die Meschen machen nicht viele Aktivität, aber die Kindern lacheln und einer von ihnen spielt mit einem Flugzeug. Ein anderes Kind hat einem Ballon neben ihm. Die Mutter wiegt einem Kind in den Armen. Auf jeder Stufe auf jeder Seite liegt ein Blumentopf.
Oct. 21, 2022
My plans for the weekend
First I need to study for my highschool and I also will studiy physics for my own. That's my number one priority.
I will take photos for my photografy course following my studies. I'm so excited!!
I want to prioritize myself because "we are not human doing, we are human being".
After that I will knitt some amigurumis for my sister, she wants bears from the program we bare bears, she said she'll pay me but I love her so I'll do it for free.
Thanks for helping me correcting this :).
Oct. 21, 2022
Oct. 21, 2022
Books Against Ebooks
I think that the two formats are interesting. For instance, I like paper books because I can to write notes in the edge of the pages. In the design and painting books, watch the pictures are more easy because the books are more big than ebooks. When I go to a bookshop, I like to do a glance to the shelves, look throurgh the leafs and, if I like some book, then I buy it. The only problem is they take space in the shelves. On the other hand, an e-reader can keep back a lot of ebooks, so they haven't any problem of weight or space. In an ebook, you can search easily words in dictionaries or change the size of text, against, but it size is small, the screen in black and white and you need to charge the bateries every now and then.
Oct. 21, 2022
Oct. 21, 2022
Wynalezienia, które mogły być pomocne
Teleportacja
Zawsze fascynowała mnie teleportacja, bo byłaby bardzo wygodna. Tak można byłoby przejechać gdziekolwiek w chwilę, kiedy się zachce. Byłoby miło, gdyby były budki teleportacji, w których można wejść, by potem wyjść do zupełnie innego miejsca. Chyba byłoby również linie dla teleportacji?
Jedzenie w pigułkach
Myślę, że to może być bardzo pomocne dla tych, którzy mają niedobory żywności. Dziś ludzie nie znają, jak jeść zdrowo. W bogatych krajach jest niestety dużo otyłych ludzi. Fast food to dobre rozwiązanie, by ugasić głód w krótkim czasie, ale z punktu widzenia wartości odżywczej jest strasznie niezdrowe.
Holograficzny telefon
W przeszłości telefony miały wielką klawiaturę, a mały ekran. Od wtedy technologia poczyniła wielkie postępy i teraz nasze telefony mają wielki ekran, a klawiatury już nie ma, bo jest wirtualna. Ekran powiększa się z roku na rok i jest tylko jedno pytanie: jak wielkie mogą jeszcze być?
Holograficzny telefon może łatwo rozwiązać taki problem, bo telefon może być mały jak pierścień, a ekran może być mały albo wielki, zgodnie z naszym smaku.
Dobrze wiem, że te wszystkie pomysły są po prostu niemożliwe, ale mi było trzeba pretekstu, by napisać krótki tekst po polsku.
Oct. 21, 2022
Oct. 21, 2022
Our relationship
Today is our important date.We saw us over Skype for the first time.And I can never forget what we did wear in this espeacial day. Today, I can't believe, three years ago has gone quickly. We are together we love each other with all respect,with mind, and with our heart.
I feel so blessed for having you in my life; very much blessed meeting a man with you attribute is not an easy task. I consider you sooo speacial. God is giving me the best for me and the best is what I do get every single day of my life. You are a gift of" the best".
I don not want to be a longer email. Thank you for your supporting me in a bad time and in a good time.
Thank you for your teaching me How to be patient in life.
Thank you for your making me happy every day.
In my turn, I will support you in a bad time and in a good time. You're always the apple of my eye.
I can't wait for to see you in my counrty. I wish our dream come true.
I want to thank everyone who helps me to write a beautiful letter. Please, if you have another words or sentences, help me.
Oct. 21, 2022
Oct. 21, 2022
Popular Ship
My mama (the artist who drew my vTuber model illustration) started to study English using Duolingo, and tweeted that she liked the girl character who spoke lazily.
The character’s name is Lily.
I told her that Lily and another girl character, Zari, were kind of a popular ship.
Then she got excited and drew their cute fan art and posted it on Twitter.
I also told her that there was a story category in Duolingo, where you learn with characters’ conversations, so apparently, she is trying to unlock it.
I have never used Duolingo myself, but I used to visit streamers who studied using it, so I know what it is like.
I am thinking about doing a Duolingo live stream on Twitch soon.
I doubt my rare existing followers would be interested in this kind of content and I will get new followers by it either, though.
Check out related links in the Notes section.
Oct. 21, 2022
Une chose que j’aimerais voir changer à l’avenir
Une chose que j’aimerais voir changer à l’avenir est le stigma autour des règles. Le tabou des règles existe partout, et c’est l’un des stéréotypes misogynes qui est plus dangereux pour les jeunes femmes, en particulier. Le notion qu’avoir des règles est honteuse, comme un signe qu’une femme est polluée, est très ancrée dans notre société, bien que ce soit une chose qui arrive chaque mois ! On ne l'adresse jamais ouvertement. Or, ce silence crée des problèmes.
La plupart des gens - y compris les femmes - ne comprennent pas toutes les conséquences néfastes qui accompagnent les règles. Je ne l’ai jamais appris à l’école, mes parents n’en ont pas parlé non plus. Alors, j’ai passé une grande partie de ma vie à penser que j’étais anormale parce que j’éprouvais des sautes d’humeur, d’envie à manger certains aliments, d'acné, la nausée et surtout des crampes épuisantes avant mes règles. Même s’il est très difficile de se concentrer pendant cette période, je ne demanderais jamais un jour de maladie, parce qu’on s’habitue à se taire à ce genre des choses.
Il y a des femmes qui souffrent encore plus que moi, qui manquent l’access à des produits hygiéniques ou qui sont victimes de discrimination très sevère pendant leurs règles. Au Népal, par exemple, où des femmes doivent rester dans une cabane délabrée, toute seule, au cours du leur cycle menstruel. Il y a même des femmes qui sont mortes dans ces endroits pitoyables, à cause du froid et de l'isolement. Ce qui est plus lamentable dans cette situation est le fait qu'elles sont tuées par une chose qui, en vérité, n’existe que dans la tête de certaines personnes. Il faut que la santé menstruelle des femmes ne soit plus stigmatisée. Sauf que, lutter contre ce stigma, qui dans certains contextes est devenu presque une norme socio-culturelle, n’est pas facile.
Il faut investir davantage dans la santé et de l’éducation pour les adolescents. Si on peut enseigner aux jeunes à considérer la menstruation comme une fonction des corps de femmes toute normale, et pas une chose effrayante, ce serait un bon départ.