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L'acquisition de deux cents suçons
Mon manga favori, «Chainsaw Man», a été adapté en émission plus tôt dans l'année. Dans l'intrigue de l'émission, il y a une scène important avec un suçon de Chupa Chups au Cola.
Après avoir vu l'émission, je achetais un Chupa Chups à chaque fois que je suis allée au supérnette avec mes amis pendant nos pauses déjeuner. C'étais sympa, mais je savais qu'acheter un suçon d'un dollar presque tous les jours, ce coûtera beaucoup à long terme.
Donc, j'ai acheté en gros deux cents suçons de Chupa Chup d'Ebay en début d'année. Ils sont arrivés hier.
J'ai compté manger un suçon à la fin de chaque jours, si je finais toutes mes tâches. Aujourd'hui, je n'en gardais qu'un dans ma poche et le voyais durant tout la journée. Ce soir, j'ai finalement avancé sur une tâche difficile, alors je l'ai mangé. Deux cents me soutenira jusqu'à l'obtention de mon diplôme cette année.
C'est gamin, mais comme mon journal quotidien en français , il aiméliore ma jourée pendant des longues périodes de travail.
Jan. 18, 2023
Un travail de voyage
Si vous pourriez avoir un travail de voyage, qu’est ce que ce serait ?
Je pense qu’il serait très amusant (fun) être blogueur de voyage. J' écrirais sur mes voyages. Par exemple, si j’ai visité Thaïlandais, je donnerais mes recommandations de plats, de logements, des excursions. Si possible, j’aimerais visiter tous les pays du monde ! Évidemment, j’ai besoin de vérifier si des pays sont sans danger. J’aurais un site internet. Je pourrais poster mes recommandations pour chaque pays. Pour gagner de l’argent, je pourrais avoir des publicités dans les sites. Des publicités d'hôtels, des restaurants, des excursions. Alors, j’aurais des réseaux sociaux : FaceBook, Instagram. J’aurais mes voyages que mes abonnés pourraient voir.
Jan. 18, 2023
2 great advices
In my life I've received lots of pieces of advice. But today I want to remark the two that changed my life.
1- Don't put all your egss in the same basket. This is so helpful. When I was younger (age 12-13) I had a friend who wanted me to be exclusive with her. To the point of "forget about all your friends and think just about me, you have to pick me over everything" I remeber she getting mad because I was watching TV and I didn't reply. I tried not to lose my friends but I ended up staying away from some of them. My life was only her until one day we had a fight and I realized I didn't have anyone else left. She was the only person I had. It was difficult for me to make friends again. Plus my supposed friend was spreading rumors about me. Now I learned to value and keep all my friends in touch but this advice works not only regarding to friends but everything in life. Sometimes people will let you down or you'll let them down, or things will go wrong and you'll need an extra hand. Putting all you effort in one single thing/person will never be a good idea.
2- Do not take things personally.
Most of the time people is not thinking about you. They're thinking about themselves. If someone is in the phone while you're speaking you never know what's on the phone of that person if it is having an emergency or your talk is simply not his/her cup of tea and that's fine! But it doesn't mean is actively going against to you. Of course sometimes there's people who have a problem with you. But in that case you think about yourself. If you have done something and if you haven't done anything well you don't take it personally! It is nothing do with you.
As a teacher I saw many angry faces, I went through many disturbing moments from my students and I never thought "it is about me" I had simply just pay attention to realize they were going through so many things that at the end I didn't gain anything grounding them or worst taking it personally(well most of the time they were upset because I was assigning homework or I told them to sit down or stop speaking with your classmates, I don't mind because they were children and teenagers. I can't imagine myself taking those childish behaviors personally). This idea might seems as I don't care if people disrespects me but is not the point.
I'm referring to minimal 'offenses' that I'm surprised how many people will take personally and start a whole war against the others. This advice helps to live a peaceful life not thinking of fighting with others.
Jan. 18, 2023
Les anniversaires
J'adore les anniversaires. J'adore le mien et les de mes amies.
Dans le mien il y'a toujours une fête. On mange un gâteau, nous sortons au restaurant et je reçois beaucoup de cadeaux. Aussi, j'ai beaucoup des amis mais non tous se connaît. C'est une chose positif parce que je sors avec un group des amis un jour et autre groupe autre jour. Par exemple mes amis du lycée le samedi et le dimanche avec mes amis de l'université et après le lundi avec ma famille et à la fin je passe mon anniversaire en fête pendant 3 ou 4 jours.
Et dans les anniversaires de ma famille et amis la joyeuse ne s'arrête pas on sort au restaurant, plage ou piscine. Et aussi c'est une grande opportunité que nous profitons de celles pour nous rancontre. Spécialement mes amies du lycée.
Jan. 18, 2023
Jan. 18, 2023
Jan. 18, 2023
The Last of Us, nuova serie tv su HBO Max
Ieri sera mio marito ed io abbiamo cominciato una nuova serie tv su HBOMax che è uscita l'altro ieri. Si intitola The Last of Us. Nella storia c'è un fungo che si è evoluto e quando prende le persone, loro diventano mostri che mangiano umani. Mi ha fatto sentire l'ansia. Io, normalmente, non ho molta paura delle serie tv con lo zombie e in passato mi piaceva tantissimo Resident Evil. La cosa però che mi fa paura è quando i mostri corrono velocemente mentre fanno dei suoni strani. Non posso continuare a guardarli. Devo coprire la mia faccia. Il primo episodio è stato lungho con una durata di un'ora e mezza. La serie è ottima ma gli episodi sono lunghi e sembrano quasi un film. Questa serie non è come altre nel senso che si possono guardare tutti gli episodi allo stesso tempo. Ogni settimana uscirà un nuovo episodio.
Jan. 18, 2023
Jan. 17, 2023
Las redes sociales
Aunque no uso las redes sociales, se parece los videos cortos se están volviendo más populares. Sean más convenientes que videos largos, y creo que la popularidad del TikTok se establecido la preferencia de la gente por videos más cortos. Además, la gente no quiere ver los videos más largos porque muchos no tienen tiempo suficiente. Es más fácil hacerse famoso con videos cortos que generalmente tienen más vistas. Espero que la atención de los niños estè protegido jajaja
Jan. 17, 2023
Jan. 17, 2023
Jan. 17, 2023
Job Hunting
I decided to start a job hunting. I can not relate this matter in detail here, but with many conditions considered, my husband and I reached a conclusion that it is the best thing to do. Upon doing this, I first filled up my linkedin profile, which I left it blank for almost two months after I'd created the account. There, I have only several connections that I made when taking an online university course, and for the first time I read the timeline carefully, being curious on what's going on in the job hunting world.
Soon I noticed that linkedin wasn't for me as it figures a lot of foreign companies' recruitement posts. I'm not interested in working for foregin companies, even though they are based in Japan, as their recruitement system is a lot different from that of Japan. A set of implicit rules for business practices also differs extensively, which would make it difficult for me to adjust to the culture of a foreign company. In my opinion, Japanese people tend to have a very peculier attitude with regard to anything related to work compared to the rest of the world, and unfortunately I'm more used to the Japanese culture.
Theere I realized another thing: my friends on linkedin shared the information of job hunting with each other. I've seen this kind of custom in IT industry in Japan, but not in other domains. We just post our resumes to companies and recruitment information is not something to be shared with your colleagues or friends. But here, Keeping in touch with others, exchanging information, getting a help of others and helping others in return etc...these are the common practices and also the very reasons why they are on linkedin. Now I felt like understanding why this business social network website is so popular and experience a user increase.
Jan. 17, 2023
Redes Sociais
Hoje estou realizando que gastei tempo de mais nos redes sociais. No app de iPhone se chama Screen Time diz quanto tempo gastou com qualquer app por a semana pasado. Realmente não preciso Instagram. Uso a Reddit muito mas não considerada Reddit rede sociais. Mas ainda gastei muito tempo com isso quando devo estudar português ou fazer outras coisas. Eu fiz um limite do tempo por cada app. Quase quinze or vinte minutos todos os dias. Acho que posso deixa completamente desses apps mas uso Instagram para ver coisas famílias ou conversar com família nas outras países e sempre gosto de aprender coisas novas no Reddit. Quero praticar escrevendo em português então vou escrever minha texto no esse journal eletrônico
Jan. 17, 2023
diferenciación
La tarea de hoy es tratar de explicar la diferencia entre estas dos palabras:
- diferenciación
- diferencia
En el diccionario RAE, dice que diferenciación es una acción y efecto de diferenciar o diferenciarse.
No nos ayuda mucho jaja
Por el otro lado, diferencia dice variedad entre cosas de una misma especie.
La frase dónde vi esta palabra: La aeroprés es ideal para quienes prefieran su café con cuerpo pronunciado, con claridad y diferenciación en su sabor.
No sé si lo puedo explicar bien...Son casi las mismas palabras sólo depende del contexto. Diferenciación parace más formal o académica.
Jan. 17, 2023
An Actual and a Past Situation
1. Describe a situation happening at the moment
- You need to use present continuous tense.
At this moment, I'm sitting in a chair doing my English homework.
2. Describe a situation or event in the past
- You need to use past continuous tense.
I was listening to jazz music while I was taking a break from studying.
Jan. 17, 2023
Jan. 17, 2023
Jan. 17, 2023
Die Woche meiner Freundin
Hallo Maite,
ich mache dir eine Zusammenfassung davon, was ich auf Deutsch in dieser Woche getan habe.
Ich habe die Vergleiche gelernt, sie sind ziemlich schwierig.
Abends sehe ich mir ein Video über den Dativ an, das gleiche die ganze Woche über.
Ich habe den Wortschatz gelernt, ich bin tollpatschig, sobald ich mein Notizbuch schließe, vergesse ich alles.
Außerdem bin ich die Regel der N-Deklination noch einmal durchgegangen. Ich war verwirrt, weil ich nur das "n" im Dativ hinzufügte.
Ich wollte nicht vergessen, dass ich am Freitag mit Mihaela sprach; ich halte sie für eine nette Person. An Anfang wollte sie am Montag vorbeikommen, um meine Küche zu putzen, aber sie hatte ein Problem und wird am Mittwoch kommen. Ich habe mit ihr viel gelacht. Sie ist überzeugt, dass sie in zwei Stunden mit meiner Küche fertig sein wird.
Ich möchte dir für die ganze Motivation, die du mir gibst, danken. Du bist mir eine große Hilfe.
Jan. 17, 2023
B1 teil 1neue Wohnung
Liebe Sofia,
wie geht es bei dir ? Leider könnte ich dich telefonisch nicht erreichen, deshalb schreibe ich dir dieser Email. Nachdem ich mein Geschäft übertragen habe, musste ich eine neue Wohnung suchen. Jetzt habe ich meine eigene Wohnung, die nicht nur im Stadtzentrum ist, sondern auch in der Nähe meines Arbeitsplatz. Auf diesen Moment habe ich lange gewartet. Die Wohnung besteht aus einem großen Wohnzimmer mit einem schönen Schlafzimmer und einer Küche. und hat einen Balkon, der einen schönen Ausblick über die Stadt hat. Das gefällt mir am besten.
Hast du nächste Woche Zeit? Mit mir in meine neue Wohnung Kaffee zu trinken?
Ich freue mich, bald von dir zu hören
Viele Grüße
Dein Ahmad
Jan. 17, 2023
B1 schreiben Tanzkurs
Lieber Mohammad,
läuft alles gut bei dir? Mir geht es super. Ich habe lange nichts von dir gehört. Ich bin schon immer ein Fan des Tanzens, also habe ich mich in einem Tanzkurs der jeden Freitag um 16 Uhr stattfindet gemeldet. Du kannst dir nicht vorstellen, wie toll und interessant dieser Kurs ist. Der Lehrer ist nett und ich habe viele Tänze von ihm gelernt, wie z.b Dabka und Salsa.
Du sollst unbedingt das nächste mal mitmachen. Ich warte auf deine baldige Antwort.
Liebe Grüße
Dein Ahmad
Jan. 17, 2023
Jan. 17, 2023
Burgundiai ételek
Már, nem tudtam, miről írják, azért, edöntöttem, hogy írok a Burgundiai ételekről. Mivel Burgundia az borvidék, az emberek főznek sok ételet borval. A leghíresebb Burgundiai étel Burgundiai marhahús (boeuf bourguignon). A marhahús darabai lassun főznek a borban fűszernövényekkel, fokhagymaval, hagymaval és más dolgokkal. Az ez recept eltérő változata kakashússal van (coq au vin), és a borszósz könnyen eltérő. A városban Dijon, a mustárnak a termelés hagyománya, de most, megtalálni jó mustárat nehezebb és nehezebb. Sok tejtermékünk is van: sűrű tejszín és főleg sok fajta sajt. Az egyik kedvenc receptei Bresse cirskehús tejszínnal és gombakkal. Nevelik a Bresse csirkéket különleges körülményekben, és ezek adnak egy magas minőségű húst. Csinálunk is egy fekete ribiszke likört (liqueur de cassis). Ha hozzáteszik feher bort a likörhez, átalikját ezt egy itallá, amit hívják “kir”-nek (un kir). Ez finom! A “kir” egy népszerű ital.
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Today, I didn't know what to write about so I decided to write about Burgundian food. As it is a wine-producing region, people cook a lot with wine. The most famous Burgundian recipe is Burgundy-style beef. Beef chunks are slowly cooked in wine with herbs, onions, garlic and other things. There's a variation of this recipe featuring rooster meat, the wine sauce is slightly different. The city of Dijon has a tradition of producing mustard, although it's getting harder and harder to find good mustard these days. We also have a lot of dairy products: thick cream and most importantly, many sorts of cheese. One of my favorite recipe is Bresse chicken with cream and mushrooms. Bresse chickens are raised in special conditions, thus producing a high quality meat. We also make blackcurrant liquor. If you add white wine to the liquor, you turn it into a drink called "a kir". It's delicious! Kir is a popular drink.
Jan. 17, 2023
Diary 1/15 & 1/16
1/15
Today I go to the library as usual. I'm so excited that I will hang out with my friend tomorrow. As a consequence, I had spent more time than usual studying for four days in order to catch up tomorrow's process. I'm so happy that I finished it! And I could let my hair down tomorrow!
1/16
In the morning,we saw a movie that called "Someday Or One Day''. It is a touching movie. I tried hard to hold back my tears at some moments because I think it's embarrassing when my friend finds that I'm crying. Nonetheless,I paid most of attention on the appearances of main-actor and main-actress. They are too charming to move my eyes from them. We visit Top 100 greatest paintings exhibition after lunch. Since I saw it on Facebook, I had looked forward to attending this exhibition. Although I'm not familiar with arts, I still knew at least half of these paintings. It also has a amazing part : 540 degrees surrounding rejection. It's really surprised me. Consequently, I bought some merchandises, their qualities are so good. One day, I must see authentic work of these paintings!
Jan. 17, 2023
Good Luck
Chinese New Year is approaching. There are some old traditions are continued, like "Wash away the dirt on ninyabaat". Cleaning the house to sweep away any ill-fortune in hope for good coming luck. Today, granny told us about another tradition that we've never heard about before. First, We need to collect five different colours of clothes which are in red, yellow, blue, green and white. Sewing them into pockets, and putting 5 different kind of beans in. Red pocket for red bean, yellow for soya bean, blue for black soya bean, green for mung and white for white-eyed pea. At last, five pockets put together in one bag. Hiding this bag under the pillow till the Beginning of Spring. On the of Beginning of Spring, open up the pockets and scatter the beans in flowerpots at home. This ritual is done.
We aksed granny what is this five beans represented. Granny had no idea. We laughed, we made wishes together, no mater what we had a great time. I think that's the core for this activity, gathering everyone in the family together.
Jan. 17, 2023
01 (FR)
Aujourd’hui, j’ai lis un épisode d’une bande dessinée en ligne, ou du webcomic. Le webcomic s’appelle « lecteur omniscient » en français, et raconte l’histoire de Kim Dokja, un homme d’affaires dont la vie était très ordinaire avant de commencer à la fin du monde. Je ne veut pas raconter toute l’histoire, mais je l’ai lu en rentrant chez moi. Pendant que je lisais cet épisode ,il m’a vraiment touché. J’ai voulu aussi participer à rédiger des petites histoires, donc j’ai écrit ce court paragraphe.
Je pense au jour typiquement beaucoup pendant mon travail, ou au lit après je finirais tous mes affaires. Je songe aux vêtements des autres, à ce qu’ils font avec leur argent, à comment ils mangent quand personne ne regarde. C’est à cause de ça, la raison pourquoi j’aime beaucoup le personnage principal du webcomic. Kim Dokja est aussi introverti est attentif comme moi. Mais la société dans laquelle je vis n’a pas besoin de héros, c’est la plus grande différence entre nous.