April 20, 2026
11 hours shift
I passed out. Hell no way I want to do this shit.
My legs are shaky. The whole body feels like collapsing.
But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life.
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Hell no! No way I want to do this shit. Hell no! No way I want to do this shit.
You mixed up "Hell no!" and "No way" into one.
TheMy whole body feels like it will collapsinge.
My whole body feels like it will collapse.
Using "my body" is better here.
But I gotta move on, s. Sometimes it's just, that's life.
But I gotta move on. Sometimes, that's life.
"that's life" is better than "its just life"
11 hours shift
11 hour shift
I passed out.
Hell no wayThere is no way in hell I want to do this shit.
There is no way in hell I want to do this shit.
A natural way to say this is: "There is no way in hell I want to do this shit," or "Hell no I don't want to do this shit"
My legs are shaky.
TheMy whole body feels like collapsing.
My whole body feels like collapsing.
It sounds more natural to refer to your body as "my"
But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life.
Hell no way II don't want to do this shit.
I don't want to do this shit.
"Hell no way" is not the not best way to express emphasis with slang.
You can use:
- Ain't no way in hell I'm doing this again.
- I don't want to do this shit anymore.
- I can't keep doing this shit [anymore].
The whole body feels like collapsing. The whole body feels like collapsing.
you can use "and" to connect the scentences.
My legs are shaky and my whole body feels like collapsing. (or "my whole body feels like it's about to collapse.")
But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life. But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life.
You don't need to add the word "sometimes" because it the situation may only happen sometimes, but the part about it being "just life" is constant and therefore the correct phrase would be "But I gotta move on. It's just life" or "That's life."
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You're doing really good! English slang is hard so well done for using it!
11 h-Hours s Shift
11-Hour Shift
HellThere's no way I want to doin hell that I'll want to keep doing this shit.
There's no way in hell that I'll want to keep doing this shit.
My legs are shaky.
TheMy whole body feels like collapsing.
My whole body feels like collapsing.
"My whole body feels like it's gonna to collapse," sounds more natural.
But I gotta move on, s. Sometimes it's just life.
But I gotta move on. Sometimes it's just life.
"But I gotta (keep moving) on. Sometimes that's just life," sounds more natural.
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I'm sorry work has been brutal for you lately. An 11-hour shift is no joke. I hope you can find a different job soon.
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Hell no way I want to do this shit.
"Hell no way" is not the not best way to express emphasis with slang. You can use: - Ain't no way in hell I'm doing this again. - I don't want to do this shit anymore. - I can't keep doing this shit [anymore].
A natural way to say this is: "There is no way in hell I want to do this shit," or "Hell no I don't want to do this shit" Hell no! No way I want to do this shit. Hell no! No way I want to do this shit. You mixed up "Hell no!" and "No way" into one. |
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My legs are shaky. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The whole body feels like collapsing.
"My whole body feels like it's gonna to collapse," sounds more natural. The whole body feels like collapsing. The whole body feels like collapsing. you can use "and" to connect the scentences. My legs are shaky and my whole body feels like collapsing. (or "my whole body feels like it's about to collapse.")
It sounds more natural to refer to your body as "my"
Using "my body" is better here. |
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But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life.
But I gotta move on "But I gotta (keep moving) on. Sometimes that's just life," sounds more natural. But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life. But I gotta move on, sometimes it's just life. You don't need to add the word "sometimes" because it the situation may only happen sometimes, but the part about it being "just life" is constant and therefore the correct phrase would be "But I gotta move on. It's just life" or "That's life." This sentence has been marked as perfect!
But I gotta move on "that's life" is better than "its just life" |
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