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ALTERNATIVE OPTION: However, you had a problem using the online submission form, and you are not certain thatwhether your submissions were received. ALTERNATIVE OPTION: However, you had a problem using the online submission form, and you are not certain whether your submissions were received.

In your email, do the following: In your email, do the following:

PUNCTUATION: add the *colon* after the last word . . .

Dear Team Sunshine Poetry Magazine Team, Dear Sunshine Poetry Magazine Team,

I am writing because of thea problem I experienced when I submitted my poems forto your magazine. I am writing because of a problem I experienced when I submitted my poems to your magazine.

'the' is not exactly wrong, but sounds like you are referencing a problem they are already aware of.

I am writing because of thean problem I experienced when I submitteding my poems for your magazine. I am writing because of an problem I experienced when submitting my poems for your magazine.

As IWhen submitteding my poems online, I had a problem using the online submission form. When submitting my poems online, I had a problem using the online submission form.

Because of thatis problem, I am not sure if I was able to successfully send my poems. Because of this problem, I am not sure if I was able to successfully send my poems.

Same idea as the correction above

Because of that problem, I am not sure if I was able to, I'm unsure my submission was successfully send my poems. Because of that, I'm unsure my submission was successful.

It would be very sad if they were not sent, as I really love your magazine I really love your magazine and it would regrettable if my poems were received. I really love your magazine and it would regrettable if my poems were received.

For me, your magazine yYour explanations of the poems, including their backgrounds of them hepls a lot, really helps me enjoying them. Your explanations of the poems, including their backgrounds, really helps me enjoy them.

For me, your magazI fined your explanations of the poems including backgrounds of them hepls a lot enjoying them.featured poems (with background information about the authors) very enjoyable. I find your explanations of the featured poems (with background information about the authors) very enjoyable.

I would be very greateful if you could check the status of my poems, and please let me know if you received my pothems correctly. I would be very grateful if you could check the status of my poems, and please let me know if you received them correctly.

Using 'my poems' twice in one sentence sounds wordy. In this case, it is better to use a pronoun to reference the noun from earlier in the sentence.

I would be very greateful if you could checkonfirm the status of my poems, and please let me know if you received my poems correctly. I would be very grateful if you could confirm the status of my poems.

Thank you very much,for your kind attention. Thank you for your kind attention.