May 16, 2026
For many years, I've never been interested in reading. In fact, here where I live, we have a literature class that requires reading four books a year. What happened was that my father bought every book the school required, but I didn't read any of them. It was just this year that I had the conscience to think about myself and realize that I was not supposed to read those books just to comply with the subject. Reading is what makes you a better person, the first three books I started reading were Quarto de Despejo, Dom Casmurro and Memórias Póstumas de Brás Cubas and I finished them in one week each. Today, I finished Cosmos, by Carl Sagan and I started reading To Kill a Mockingbird, by Harper Lee. I'm genuinely enjoying becoming a better person every book I finish.
For many years, I've never been interested in reading.
In fact, here where I live, we have a literature class that requires reading four books a year.
What happened was that my father bought every book the school required, but I didn't read any of them.
It was just this year that I had the conscience to think about myself and realize that I was not supposed to read those books just to comply with the subject.
Reading is what makes you a better person, so the first three books I started reading were Quarto de Despejo, Dom Casmurro and Memórias Póstumas de Brás Cubas and I finished them in one week each. Reading is what makes you a better person, so the first three books I started reading were Quarto de Despejo, Dom Casmurro and Memórias Póstumas de Brás Cubas and I finished them in one week each.
A simple connecting word like "so" will help the sentence flow smoothly.
Today, I finished Cosmos, by Carl Sagan and I(I) started reading To Kill a Mockingbird, by Harper Lee.
Today, I finished Cosmos by Carl Sagan and (I) started reading To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee.
(1) I think removing the commas will allow the sentence flow more smoothly.
(2) You may consider omitting the second "I".
I'm genuinely enjoying becoming a better person every book I finish.
Feedback
I used to read quite voraciously as a kid, but not so much nowadays. Honestly, I think time is the biggest constraint. At least learning a new language has given me an excuse to read more. Keep it up!
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For many years, I've never been interested in reading. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In fact, here where I live, we have a literature class that requires reading four books a year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What happened was that my father bought every book the school required, but I didn't read any of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was just this year that I had the conscience to think about myself and realize that I was not supposed to read those books just to comply with the subject. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Reading is what makes you a better person, the first three books I started reading were Quarto de Despejo, Dom Casmurro and Memórias Póstumas de Brás Cubas and I finished them in one week each. Reading is what makes you a better person, so the first three books I started reading were Quarto de Despejo, Dom Casmurro and Memórias Póstumas de Brás Cubas and I finished them in one week each. Reading is what makes you a better person, so the first three books I started reading were Quarto de Despejo, Dom Casmurro and Memórias Póstumas de Brás Cubas and I finished them in one week each. A simple connecting word like "so" will help the sentence flow smoothly. |
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Today, I finished Cosmos, by Carl Sagan and I started reading To Kill a Mockingbird, by Harper Lee.
Today, I finished Cosmos (1) I think removing the commas will allow the sentence flow more smoothly. (2) You may consider omitting the second "I". |
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I'm genuinely enjoying becoming a better person every book I finish. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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