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Harry Poter and the Potion Madness
Today had Potions class with Professor Snape. In class Snape said: "Today you will make a Sleeping Draught." It´s a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions. Sleeping Draught Recipe: Over the basic potion base we had practiced,
- Add four valerian roots
-Stir five time clockwise
-Add two drops of lavender oil
- Heat for five minutes
- Stir counter-clockwise three times
Harry and Hermione made aceptable your potion, but Ron added a little more lavender and Neville add peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong. The most affect was Neville, because he had read book and removed 10 points. They thought Snape is not fair but he thing "Life is not fair".
Harry Potter and the Potion Madness
Today they had Potions class with Professor Snape.
In class Snape said: "Today you will make a Sleeping Draught."
It´'s a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions.
Sleeping Draught Recipe:
OverStarting with the basic potion base we had practiced,...
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Add four valerian roots
-Stir five time clockwise
-Add two drops of lavender oil
- Heat for five minutes
- Stir counter-clockwise three times
Harry and Hermione made acceptable your potions, but Ron added a little more lavender, and Neville added peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong.
The one most affected was Neville, because he had read the book and removehad 10 points removed.
They thought Snape is not was being unfair but he thingold then "Life is not fair"."
I think we use "not fair" for objects more than for people, because "not fair" can sound like "not fair" as in the definition of fair that means "a pleasing appearance"
I think "Snape was not being fair" sounds okay though, idk why
Harry Potter and the Potion Madness
Today Harry had Potions class with Professor Snape.
In class, Snape said: "Today, you will make a Sleeping Draught."
It´s a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions.
Sleeping Draught Recipe:
OverInto the basic potion base we had practiced,
Add four valerian roots
-Stir five time clockwiseclockwise five times
-Add two drops of lavender oil
- Heat for five minutes
- Stir counter-clockwise three times
Harry and Hermione made acceptable your potions, but Ron added a little moretoo much lavender, and Neville added peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong.
The most affected was Neville, because he had read the (wrong) book and removedlost 10 points.
They thought Snape iwas not fair but he thingought, "Life is not fair"."
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Over the basic potion base we had practiced,
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Add four valerian roots This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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-Stir five time clockwise -Stir This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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-Add two drops of lavender oil This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- Heat for five minutes This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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- Stir counter-clockwise three times This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Harry and Hermione made aceptable your potion, but Ron added a little more lavender and Neville add peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong. Harry and Hermione made acceptable Harry and Hermione made acceptable |
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The most affect was Neville, because he had read book and removed 10 points. The most affected was Neville, because he had read the (wrong) book and The one most affected was Neville, because he had read the book and |
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They thought Snape is not fair but he thing "Life is not fair". They thought Snape They thought Snape I think we use "not fair" for objects more than for people, because "not fair" can sound like "not fair" as in the definition of fair that means "a pleasing appearance" I think "Snape was not being fair" sounds okay though, idk why |
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