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A Small Discovery
I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan( Yu Garden) recently. By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion created by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago).
It is a tragic coincidence that right after this artwork was finished, a fire broke out, devastating the wooden bridge and damaging the tea house. This painting may have captured the final view of the original structures before they were lost to the flames.
What a tangible piece of history!
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I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan( (Yu Garden) recently.
I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan (Yu Garden) recently.
By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion created by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago).
By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago).
It is a tragic coincidence that right after this artwork was finished, a fire broke out, devastating the wooden bridge and damaging the tea house.
This painting may have captured the final view of the original structures before they were lost to the flames.
What a tangible piece of history!
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Thank you for this little discovery!
yesterday
Thank you so much!
It's really exciting to share this kind of thing with you guys.
Have a nice day!
Recently, I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan( (Yu Garden) recently.
Recently, I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan (Yu Garden).
This perhaps sounds more natural.
By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion created by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago). By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion created by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago).
I think simply "painted" sounds more natural than "created". You could then change "painter" to "artist" to give more variety in this sentence.
It is a tragic coincidence that right after this artwork was finished, a fire broke out, devastating the wooden bridge and damaging the tea house.
This painting may have captured the final view of the original structures before they were lost to the flames.
What a tangible piece of history!
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Well written! Note that first you say the tea house was merely "damaged", but then you say it was "lost". Perhaps it was demolished after the fire damaged it?
yesterday
Thank you so much!
Well, about that, I think I need to make a video to show you. Just wait one day, or a half.
Have a nice day!
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I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan( Yu Garden) recently.
Recently, I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan This perhaps sounds more natural.
I have been collecting some information about Yu Yuan |
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By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion created by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago). By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion created by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago). By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion created by a British female painter in 1924 (102 years ago). I think simply "painted" sounds more natural than "created". You could then change "painter" to "artist" to give more variety in this sentence.
By chance, I discovered a painting of the Nine-Zigzag Bridge and the Mid-Lake Pavilion |
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It is a tragic coincidence that right after this artwork was finished, a fire broke out, devastating the wooden bridge and damaging the tea house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This painting may have captured the final view of the original structures before they were lost to the flames. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What a tangible piece of history! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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