I amMy name is Doctor Asminok.

Both are correct, the correction gives your statement a more natural feel.

l am going to medicineal school. or I am enrolled in medical school.

You would say either: I am in medical school OR I am studying medicine.

I want improve myself and my English.

I want to improve myself brings to mind the self-help industry such as exercise or relationship experts, etc. I want to improve my English lets the listener know exactly what you are focused on.

I hope you arecan help me. OR I hope you will help me .

If I learn English l want to go for an internship in London . please send me your feedback.

OR If I learn English well enough, I want to apply for an internship in London.

Hi everybody !

Hi / Hello / Hey everyone!

l am going to medicine school.

I go to a medical school.

I want improve myself.

I’d like to improve myself.

I hope you are help me .

I hope you will help me.

If I learn English l want to go internship in London . please send me your feedback.

If I learn English, I can get an internship in London. Please share your feedback.

l’m starting

It would be good to specify what you are starting to do.

Hi everybody !

Unnecessary space

l am going to medicine school.

You could use I’m to sound more natural in the sentence if you like. The same applies with the previous sentence.

I hope you arecan help me .

If I learn English, l wcant go to goan internship in London . pPlease send me your feedback.

l s’m Starting / My Start

Hi everybody !

l am going to medicineal school.

I want to improve myself.

I hope you arewill help me .

If I learn English, l want to go to an internship in London . pPlease send me your feedback.