March 22, 2021
6 days without home internet
Yes, whole 6 days my home has no internet!
As a 100% OTAKU or just a normal person.
Can you imagine 6 days when you go home you can’t use internet at all!
I know some people is watching / reading or doing everything by the mobile.
So, they may think that is a small problem to them.
I can’t argue with that if you are one of them.
But, I am not!
I use computer heavily and I definitely need a large screen to work.
Anyway, when the time renewing contract, I will use this incident to make a biggest bargaining to the ISP.
6 days without home internet
Home is not necessary. When referring to the internet, your home network is assumed unless you specify.
Yes, for 6 whole 6 days my home hasd no internet!
"My internet was down/out" might sound more natural
As a 100% OTAKU or just a normal person.
This isn't a sentence. Not clear what you are trying to say.
Can you imagine 6 days that, when you go home, you can’t use the internet at all!?
Mostly fine. Would pass in very casual writing
I know some people isare watching / reading or doing everything byon the mobilir phone.
Or something like "by mobile phone" or "by mobile internet" but those sound stiff and unnatural.
So, they may think that is a small problem to them.
Not needed
I can’t argue with that if you are one of them.
But, I am not!
I use a/the/my pcomputer heavily and I definitely need a large screen to work.
Heavily doesn't really work here. Something like "a lot" or "frequently" is better
Anyway, when theit is time to renewing my contract, I will use this incident to make a biggest bargaining to thebargain more with my ISP.
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Good job. Most was just things that sounded a bit stiff or just incomplete. Sucks your internet was down.
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6 days without home internet 6 days without Home is not necessary. When referring to the internet, your home network is assumed unless you specify. |
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Yes, whole 6 days my home has no internet! Yes, for 6 whole "My internet was down/out" might sound more natural |
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As a 100% OTAKU or just a normal person. As a 100% OTAKU or just a normal person. This isn't a sentence. Not clear what you are trying to say. |
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Can you imagine 6 days when you go home you can’t use internet at all! Can you imagine 6 days that, when you go home, you can’t use the internet at all Mostly fine. Would pass in very casual writing |
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I know some people is watching / reading or doing everything by the mobile. I know some people Or something like "by mobile phone" or "by mobile internet" but those sound stiff and unnatural. |
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So, they may think that is a small problem to them. So, they may think that is a small problem Not needed |
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I can’t argue with that if you are one of them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But, I am not! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I use computer heavily and I definitely need a large screen to work. I use a/the/my pcomputer heavily and I definitely need a large screen to work. Heavily doesn't really work here. Something like "a lot" or "frequently" is better |
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Anyway, when the time renewing contract, I will use this incident to make a biggest bargaining to the ISP. Anyway, when |
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