July 2, 2026
I have a manga that I avoided reading it for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago. It is about soccer, and I guess why I started to read is because the World Cup influenced on me.
Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading it. I've been up late night because my hand to go to the next page didn't stop.
The manga that I started to read will be going to be transformed into anime this Autumn.
I'm happy because the other my favourite soccer manga wasn't be a anime and made into a Japanese movie, and I don't live in Japan right now, so I couldn't watch it.
Howeber, when I'm near to the last manga which I can read for free, I'm really sad.
I actually haven't read "Captain Tsubasa". I really want to read it when it turned to be free.
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I haved a manga that I avoided reading itI'd been avoiding for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago.
I had a manga I'd been avoiding for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago.
ItThis story is about soccer, and I guess why I started to read is because the World Cup influenced on me.the world cup had influenced me to read it.
This story is about soccer and the world cup had influenced me to read it.
Every single manga aboutrelated to soccer is really interesting and. I can't stop reading it.them.
Every single manga related to soccer is really interesting. I can't stop reading them.
Change "it" to "them".
I've been up late night because stayed up all night letting my hand to gourn to the next page di. I couldn't stop.
I stayed up all night letting my hand turn to the next page. I couldn't stop
Theis manga that I started to read will be going to be transformed into anime this Autumnwill adapt to an anime in November.
This manga will adapt to an anime in November.
The sentence "The manga that I started to read" is too repetitive because we (the reader) already know that you were reading it.
I'm happy because the other mymy second favourite soccer manga wasn't be a anime and made into a Japanese movie, and I don't live in Japan right now, so I couldn'tmanga turned into a Japanese live-action movie instead of an anime. I don't live in Japan so, I am unable to watch it.
I'm happy because my second favorite manga turned into a Japanese live-action movie instead of an anime. I don't live in Japan so, I am unable to watch it.
Howebver, when I'm near to the last manga which I can read for free,I'm almost finished with the last chapters of the manga and I'm really sad. about it.
However, I'm almost finished with the last chapters of the manga and I'm really sad about it.
You don't need to add in "which I can read for free."
I actually haven't read "Captain Tsubasa"However, there is this manga called "Captain Tsubasa" that I haven't read yet.
However, there is this manga called "Captain Tsubasa" that I haven't read yet.
Since you're mentioning another Manga that you plan on reading, make sure you transition to the next point that you're making using "However," as a conjunction.
I really want tohope I'll end up reading it when it turned to bebecomes free.
I hope I'll end up reading it when it becomes free.
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Keep reading and writing in English everyday to get better. Good job!
I have a manga that I have avoided reading it for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago.
I have a manga that I have avoided reading for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago.
1) We use ‘have’ here because the action of avoiding reading the manga started in the past but is connected to the present.
This is called the Present Perfect Simple 😩 and we use it to connect actions started in the past to the present. And we form it by…
[subject] + have/has [(not-for negatives)] + [past participle].
(If we use the past participle of ‘To Be’ we need to use to gerund form of the following verb (-ing)).
- I have been writing books for years
- He has been not been to England yet
2) I would also remove ‘it’ because you have used the word ‘that’ at the start of the sentence.
It is about soccer, and I guess why I started to read is becauseDue to the World Cup’s influenced on me, I have started to read it.
Due to the World Cup’s influence, I have started to read it.
1) We use phrases like ‘due to’ or ‘because’ to show cause and effect.
- Due to how hot the weather is, we cannot go outside.
- Because people are sleeping, we have to be quiet.
Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading ithem.
Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading them.
1) Because you started the sentence with ‘Every single manga’ it shows that you are talking about a group of manga that you have read, so you need to use ‘them’ because you are talking about a group of things.
I've been up late at night because my hand to go toI could not stop my hand from turning the next page didn't stop.
I've been up late at night because I could not stop my hand from turning the next page.
The manga that I have (I’ve) started to read will beis going to be transformed into an anime this Autumn.
The manga that I have (I’ve) started to read is going to be transformed into an anime this Autumn.
1) So, we are talking about something that is going to happen in the future. Because of this, we need to use the future tense. The formula for the standard future tense is…
[subject] + am/is/are + going to + [base verb = infinitive To form without the To]
-He is going to speak to his friend on the phone tonight.
- We are going to go to the shops on Saturday.
(This formula does change in certain situations- let me know if you want any further help)
BUT!!!!, here we are not talking about a person who will be doing something, but instead we are talking about the action ‘being transformed into’ so we need to use the passive future…
[subject] + am/is/are + going to be + [past participle]
- My favourite book is going to be made into a film next year.
I'm happy because themy other my favourite soccer manga wasn't beoriginally an anime and made into a Japanese movie, andeither but was made into a movie in Japan. But, I don't live in Japan right now, so I couldn'an’t watch it.
I'm happy because my other favourite soccer manga wasn't originally an anime either but was made into a movie in Japan. But, I don't live in Japan right now, so I can’t watch it.
Howeber,And when I'm near to the last manga which I can read for free, I'mend of my last free manga, I get really sad.
And when I'm near to the end of my last free manga, I get really sad.
I really want to read it when it turned to bebecomes free.
I really want to read it when it becomes free.
1) We use ‘To become’ to show a change in state.
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Another great entry, honestly if I may, I would suggest that your level is closer to B1 because you use complex vocabulary and are able to express your thoughts in an understandable way. While I think you struggle a little with your word order and tenses sometimes, generally your entries are always great!
Keep up the good work and let me know if there’s anything else I can help you with!
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I have a manga that I avoided reading it for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago.
I have a manga that I avoided reading for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago.
It is about soccer, and I guess why I started to reading it is because of the World Cup's influenced on me.
It is about soccer, and I guess why I started reading it is because of the World Cup's influence on me.
Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading ithis one.
Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading this one.
"this one" makes it more clear you're talking about this specific manga about soccer.
I've been up late at night because my hand to goI can't stop my hand from going to the next page didn't stop.
I've been up late at night because I can't stop my hand from going to the next page.
The manga that I started to reading will be going to be transformadapted into an anime this Autumn.
The manga that I started reading will be adapted into an anime this Autumn.
I'm happy because themy other my favourite soccer manga wasdidn't be a anime anget made into an anime and was instead made into a Japanese movie, and since I don't live in Japan right now, so I couldn't watch it.
I'm happy because my other favourite soccer manga didn't get made into an anime and was instead made into a Japanese movie, and since I don't live in Japan right now, I couldn't watch it.
Howebver, when I'm near to the last manga whichsince I'm close to the last (volume/chapter) that I can read for free, I'm really sad.
However, since I'm close to the last (volume/chapter) that I can read for free, I'm really sad.
Wether it is "volume" or "chapter" depends on how where you're reading this manga splits it up.
I actually haven't read "Captain Tsubasa".
I really want to read it when it turned to bebecomes free.
I really want to read it when it becomes free.
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I have a manga that I avoided reading it for some reason, but I finally decided to read it two days ago.
I have a manga that I avoided reading
I have a manga that I have avoided reading 1) We use ‘have’ here because the action of avoiding reading the manga started in the past but is connected to the present. This is called the Present Perfect Simple 😩 and we use it to connect actions started in the past to the present. And we form it by… [subject] + have/has [(not-for negatives)] + [past participle]. (If we use the past participle of ‘To Be’ we need to use to gerund form of the following verb (-ing)). - I have been writing books for years - He has been not been to England yet 2) I would also remove ‘it’ because you have used the word ‘that’ at the start of the sentence.
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It is about soccer, and I guess why I started to read is because the World Cup influenced on me.
It is about soccer, and I guess why I started
1) We use phrases like ‘due to’ or ‘because’ to show cause and effect. - Due to how hot the weather is, we cannot go outside. - Because people are sleeping, we have to be quiet.
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Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading it.
Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading "this one" makes it more clear you're talking about this specific manga about soccer.
Every single manga about soccer is really interesting and I can't stop reading 1) Because you started the sentence with ‘Every single manga’ it shows that you are talking about a group of manga that you have read, so you need to use ‘them’ because you are talking about a group of things.
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I've been up late night because my hand to go to the next page didn't stop.
I've been up late at night because
I've been up late at night because
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The manga that I started to read will be going to be transformed into anime this Autumn.
The manga that I started
The manga that I have (I’ve) started to read 1) So, we are talking about something that is going to happen in the future. Because of this, we need to use the future tense. The formula for the standard future tense is… [subject] + am/is/are + going to + [base verb = infinitive To form without the To] -He is going to speak to his friend on the phone tonight. - We are going to go to the shops on Saturday. (This formula does change in certain situations- let me know if you want any further help) BUT!!!!, here we are not talking about a person who will be doing something, but instead we are talking about the action ‘being transformed into’ so we need to use the passive future… [subject] + am/is/are + going to be + [past participle] - My favourite book is going to be made into a film next year.
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I'm happy because the other my favourite soccer manga wasn't be a anime and made into a Japanese movie, and I don't live in Japan right now, so I couldn't watch it.
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Howeber, when I'm near to the last manga which I can read for free, I'm really sad.
Howe Wether it is "volume" or "chapter" depends on how where you're reading this manga splits it up.
Howe You don't need to add in "which I can read for free." |
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I actually haven't read "Captain Tsubasa". This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I really want to read it when it turned to be free.
I really want to read it when it
I really want to read it when it 1) We use ‘To become’ to show a change in state.
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