May 3, 2021
5/5 立夏
First of all, the first quarter (4 months) of 2021 was gone!
2 days later in Chinese calendar is the “began summer” day.
Means spring was over and simmer start arrive.
In Hong Kong the four season is not as clear as place like Japan.
But we still can tell when is spring, summer, autumn and winter.
As a man I love summer, please don’t ask me why.
Going back to the question of achievement for last 4 months.
Great! I did actually make few things happened, like real money investment, making friends from the internet…
I would call it a good start but yet far from what I expect.
So, more hard work is necessary.
5/5 立夏
First of all, tThe first quarter (4 months) of 2021 wais gone!
I can't quite explain why "first of all" doesn't work here. I think maybe because "first of all" is usually said when listing multiple points, instead of in a descriptive situation like this journal entry is.
2 days later in Chinese calendar is the “"beganinning of summer”" day.
MThat means spring wais over and simmer startand summer is arriveing.
In Hong Kong the four season iss are not as clear as in places like Japan.
But we can still can tell when is spring, summer, autumn and winter are.
Going back to the question of achievement forwhat I said about the last 4 months.
Great!
I did actually make few things happened, like real money investment, and making friends from the internet…
I would call it a good start but yet far from what I expect.
or:
I would call it a good start yet far from what I expect.
So, more hard work is necessary.
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5/5 立夏 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First of all, the first quarter (4 months) of 2021 was gone!
I can't quite explain why "first of all" doesn't work here. I think maybe because "first of all" is usually said when listing multiple points, instead of in a descriptive situation like this journal entry is. |
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2 days later in Chinese calendar is the “began summer” day. 2 days later in Chinese calendar is the |
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Means spring was over and simmer start arrive.
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In Hong Kong the four season is not as clear as place like Japan. In Hong Kong the four season |
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But we still can tell when is spring, summer, autumn and winter. But we can still |
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As a man I love summer, please don’t ask me why. |
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Going back to the question of achievement for last 4 months. Going back to |
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Great! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I did actually make few things happened, like real money investment, making friends from the internet… I did actually make few things happen |
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I would call it a good start but yet far from what I expect. I would call it a good start but or: I would call it a good start yet far from what I expect. |
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So, more hard work is necessary. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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