Dear Diary Dear Diary

This is the name/signature of a talkative diary writing style, referencing it outright is more clear.

IHave looked up two questions I was unsure about after the test, and sadly found that, I got both wrong. Have looked up two questions I was unsure about after the test, and sadly, I got both wrong.

Three-quarters of the topics have been reviewed, but there are still some gaps in my grammar learningknowledge. Three-quarters of the topics have been reviewed, but there are still some gaps in my grammar knowledge.

"Learning" is OK, but "knowledge" is much better here.

TYet while three-quarters of the topics have been reviewed, but there are still sit doesn't spare me frome gaps in my grammar learningknowledge. Yet while three-quarters of the topics have been reviewed, it doesn't spare me from gaps in my grammar knowledge.

This sentence and those around it are very at odds with each other despite providing factual information. I've changed this one with the premise of making a bridge.

TIt covered three-quarters of the topics have been reviewed, but there are still some gaps in my grammar learningunderstanding of grammar. It covered three-quarters of the topics, but there are still some gaps in my understanding of grammar.

Passive voice (“have been reviewed”) is unnatural here.

So when I was taking the test, I had a split feelingtwo distinct experiences. So when I was taking the test, I had two distinct experiences.

"A split feeling" doesn't sound very natural to me. I have provided a suggestion based on what I think you mean.

So, when I was taking the test, I had a split second feeling. So, when I was taking the test, I had a split second feeling.

I'm not 100% sure what you mean by "split feeling". If you meant a short-lived feeling, then "split second" would work well here. If you meant you weren't sure, you could say you had "mixed feelings" or "felt uncertain". If you meant you had 2 different things, you could say you "felt 2 different feelings".

So when I was taking the test, I had a splitwo distinct feelings. So when I was taking the test, I had two distinct feelings.

So when I was taking the test, I had a splitmixed feeling. So when I was taking the test, I had a mixed feeling.

For thosee topics I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer, but for those I hadn't, I pondered repeatedly. For the topics I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer, but for those I hadn't, I pondered repeatedly.

"The topics" rather than "those" makes you meaning clear. I think "pondered repeatedly" sounds quite awkward --> some better alternatives could be "...for those I hadn't, I had to think about for a long time." or "...for those I hadn't, I felt very unsure."

For those I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer, but f. For those I hadn't, Iwithout that, I only pondered repeatedly. For those I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer. For those without that, I only pondered repeatedly.

For those questions I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer, but for those I hadn't, I pondered repeatedly.for a long time. For those questions I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer, but for those I hadn't, I pondered for a long time.

For those I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer, but for those I hadn't, I pondered repeatedlyhad to ponder for a while. For those I had reviewed, it took me only seconds to choose the right answer, but for those I hadn't, I had to ponder for a while.

"repeatedly" makes it sound like you did it a bunch of seperate times, like you thought about the question for a few minutes, did some other questions, came back to that one and thought about it some more, did even more other questions, then came back to that one again (and repeat)

"The birth of baby is truly a blessing event." "The birth of baby is truly a blessing event."

Did the sentence contain an "a" before the word "baby"? "The birth of baby" also sounds unnatural... "the birth of a baby" would be correct.

"The birth of a baby is truly a blessinged event." "The birth of a baby is truly a blessed event."

"The birth of baby is truly a blessing event." "The birth of baby is truly a blessing event."

I'd correct this to "The birth of a baby is truly a blessing", so there's two mistakes even ;)

I don't know why, but when I wasile doing this, I just thoughtfigured "blessing event" was a correctsurely exists as an expression... I don't know why, but while doing this I just figured "blessing event" surely exists as an expression...

I don't know why, but when I was doing this, I just thought "blessing event" was a correct expression... I don't know why, but when I was doing this, I just thought "blessing event" was a correct expression...

I hope I can getreach a good score. I hope I can reach a good score.