Describeing my town Describing my town

Hi, my name is Jeff,. I live in the suburb of Japan, which is located aroundJapan, in a suburb near the mountains. Hi, my name is Jeff. I live in Japan, in a suburb near the mountains.

There are multiple possible ways to word the second sentence. I chose a simple one.

Hi my name is Jeff, I live in the suburb of Japan, which is located around the mountains. Hi my name is Jeff, I live in the suburb of Japan located around the mountains.

Hi my name is Jeff, I live in thea suburb of Japan, which that is located around the mountains. Hi my name is Jeff, I live in a suburb of Japan that is located around the mountains.

"the suburb" sounds like it's the only suburb in Japan

Hi my name is Jeff, I live in the suburbs of Japan, which is located around the mountains. Hi my name is Jeff, I live in the suburbs of Japan, which is located around the mountains.

Although oOur town isn't sovery convenient that: if you walk intoaround here, you probably cawon't be able to find everyday necessities that you always needeasily. Our town isn't very convenient: if you walk around here, you probably won't be able to find everyday necessities easily.

I'm not sure if the meaning of my version is correct. You can let me know what the sentence would be in Japanese. I removed "although" because you didn't contrast anything in this sentence. I wasn't sure whether "walk into" meant "come (visit)" or "walk around." I removed "that you always need", because you used the word "necessities".

Although oOur town isn't sothat convenient that; if you walk intocome here, you probably can't find the everyday necessities that you always need. Our town isn't that convenient; if you come here, you probably can't find the everyday necessities that you always need.

I don't know if you're trying to get across the idea, "Although our town is easy to walk around in, but you probably can't find everyday necessities." I hope my correction was what you were looking for.

Although our townOur town probably isn't so convenient that if you walk into here, you probably can't findcan find your everyday necessities thatif you always needcome here. Our town probably isn't so convenient that you can find your everyday necessities if you come here.

The double negative here is confusing, and the meaning is actually nonsensical once you parse it (aka "the town is inconvenient to the degree that you can probably find everyday necessities"). "everyday necessities that you always need" is redundant

Although oOur town isn't sothat convenient thatand if you walk intoaround here, you probably can't find everyday necessities that you always need.wouldn't be able to find your everyday necessities. Our town isn't that convenient and if you walk around here, you probably wouldn't be able to find your everyday necessities.

When you start with "although," you need to have something to contrast it at the end. Like, Although our town isn't convenient and you can't find what you need, I love it.

ReverseBut ofn the downbright side, the scenery around here is beautiful., But on the bright side, the scenery around here is beautiful,

Reverse ofBesides theat downside, the scenery around here is beautiful. Besides that downside, the scenery around here is beautiful.

Another example: "While lacking convenience, the local scenery is always beautiful."

Reverse of the downOn the flip side, the scenery around here is beautiful. On the flip side, the scenery around here is beautiful.

Or "on the other hand"

Reverse ofOn the downupside, the scenery around here is beautiful. On the upside, the scenery around here is beautiful.

Eespecially the view of white flowers near both sides of local bridge, when it comes into fallthat grow beside the local bridge. At the start of Fall (Autumn), the trees near botheither sides of the bridge will blossom that is full of the entire both sides under the bridg, and their canopies fill the whole space. especially the white flowers that grow beside the local bridge. At the start of Fall (Autumn), the trees either side of the bridge blossom, and their canopies fill the whole space.

This sentence was hard to word. I'm not certain I understood the meaning.

Especially tThe view of white flowers near both sides of local bridge, when it comes in is especially beautiful: when the season turns to fall, the trees near both sides of the bridge will blossom that; ist fuill ofs the entirety of both sides under the bridge. The view of white flowers near both sides of local bridge is especially beautiful: when the season turns to fall, the trees near both sides of the bridge will blossom; it fills the entirety of both sides under the bridge.

Especially the view of the white flowers near both sides of the local bridge, w. When itfall comes into fall, the trees near both sides of the bridge will blossom that is full of the entire both sides under the bridge, all of the trees there under the bridge will be full of blossoms. Especially the view of the white flowers near both sides of the local bridge. When fall comes, all of the trees there under the bridge will be full of blossoms.

Some of the restating of "both sides" and "the bridge" are unnecessary and make the sentence kind of clunky

Especially the view of white flowers near both sides of the local bridge, w. When itfall comes into fall, the trees near both sides of the bridge will blossom that is full of the entirefilling both sides under the bridge. Especially the view of white flowers near both sides of the local bridge. When fall comes, the trees near both sides of the bridge blossom filling both sides under the bridge.

Every October, many tourists usually come here in order to visit andto enjoy the wonderful scenery, b. Because it i's once a year, suchit's like an annual festival in this town. Every October, many tourists come here to enjoy the wonderful scenery. Because it's once a year, it's like an annual festival in this town.

I removed "visit" because it meant the same as "come here". I removed "usually" because it conflicts with "every October".

Every October, many tourists usually come here in order to visit and enjoy the wonderful scenery, b. Because it is once a year, suchit feels like an annual festival in this town.! Every October, many tourists usually come here in order to visit and enjoy the wonderful scenery. Because it is once a year, it feels like an annual festival!

Every October many tourists usuallyoften come here in order to visit and enjoy the wonderful scenery, and because it is once a year, suchit's like an annual festival in this town. Every October many tourists often come here in order to visit and enjoy the wonderful scenery, and because it is once a year, it's like an annual festival in this town.

"usually" sounds like it is habitual for the tourists (the same tourists come every year), or like you're setting up to contradict the statement (ie. "Many tourists usually come here for the scenery, but this year there weren't a lot of visitors.") If you don't put "and" it sounds like the reason for enjoying the scenery is because it happens once a year.

Every October, many tourists usually come here in order to visit and enjoy the wonderful scenery, because it is once a year, such. It is like an annual festival infor this town. Every October, many tourists usually come here to visit and enjoy the wonderful scenery. It is like an annual festival for this town.

If you we're a person who likes walking in the nature, I am sure that you would absolutely enjoylove visiting this beautiful town! If you're a person who likes walking in nature, I am sure that you would absolutely love visiting this beautiful town!

I changed "enjoy" into "love" because you used the word "absolutely", so I felt it needed a stronger word. "Absolutely enjoy" felt a bit odd together.

If you weare a person who likes walking in the nature, I am sure that you would absolutely enjoy visiting this beautiful town! If you are a person who likes walking in nature, I am sure that you would absolutely enjoy visiting this beautiful town!

This should be in present tense; "if you were a person who likes walking in nature" conveys that you no longer like walking outside or in the woods.

If you weare a person who likes walking in the nature, I am sure that you would absolutely enjoy visiting this beautiful town! If you are a person who likes walking in nature, I am sure that you would absolutely enjoy visiting this beautiful town!

If you weare a person who likes walking in the nature, I am sure that you would absolutely enjoy visiting this beautiful town! If you are a person who likes walking in nature, I am sure that you would absolutely enjoy visiting this beautiful town!