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mayyy

April 7, 2025

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4月7号

大家好! 今天说我讨厌的事情。 我现在二十二岁,仍然不知道我想做什么工作。 什么职业都不看来有意思。这种条件使我真的腻味。 第二个事情是吃饭。我真的讨厌每天都想我要吃什么,因此我就去睡觉。我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都。我最讨厌的事情是在YouTube 的广告。我觉得即使我寻求 ”怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归得看广告。在德国的广告很笨。

再见大家


Hello everyone, today i talk about things i hate. I am 22 now and still don't know who i wanna work as. All occupation don't seem to be interesting. This condition makes me really annoyed. Second thins is food. I really hate thinking about what to eat every day, so i just go sleep. I really like eating chicken, but i can't eat chicken every day. The thing i hate the most is YouTube advertisement. I think that even when i will look for "how to save a person" video, i will still have to watch advertisement. Advertisement in Germany is stupid
Bye bye

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4月7号

大家好!

今天说我讨厌的事情。

我现在二十二岁,仍然不知道我想做什么工作。

什么职业都不看来看起来都没有意思。

种条件使我真的腻味。

第二个事情是吃饭。

我真的讨厌每天都想我要吃什么,因此我就去睡觉。

我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都吃鸡

我最讨厌的事情是YouTube 的广告。

我觉得即使我寻求 ”怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归得看广告。

德国的广告很笨。

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mayyy

April 8, 2025

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谢谢!

4月7号

大家好!

今天说我讨厌的事情。

我现在二十二岁,仍然不知道我想做什么工作。

Hello everyone, today i talk about things i hate. I am 22 now and still don't know who i wanna work as. All occupation don't seem to be interesting. This condition makes me really annoyed. Second thins is food. I really hate thinking about what to eat every day, so i just go sleep. I really like eating chicken, but i can't eat chicken every day. The thing i hate the most is YouTube advertisement. I think that even when i will look for "how to save a person" video, i will still have to watch advertisement. Advertisement in Germany is stupid
Bye bye

什么职业都不看来有意思怎么提得起兴趣

这种条件使我真的腻味状况真的让人讨厌

“腻味”这个词大概是个方言,比较小众。

第二个事情是吃饭。

我真的讨厌每天都想我吃什么,因此我就去睡觉。

我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都吃鸡

我最讨厌的事情是在YouTube 上看到的广告。

我觉得即使我寻求 ”找“怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归还是得看广告。

Youtube在德国的广告很笨。

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mayyy

April 8, 2025

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谢谢!

大家好!

今天说我讨厌的事情。

我现在二十二岁,仍然不知道我想做什么工作。

什么职业都不看来有看起来没意思。

这种条件使我真的腻味。

有点没懂你想说什么,猜你想说:我现在的情况真的让我不知所措/这样的处境让我不知道该做什么

第二个事情是吃饭。

我真的讨厌每天都想我要吃什么,因此我就去睡觉。

我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都吃鸡

我最讨厌的事情是在东西是YouTube 的广告。

我觉得即使我寻求 ”怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归得看广告。

猜你想说:即使我在看“如何救人/怎么就一个人”这个视频的时候,都要看广告。

德国的广告很低质量

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mayyy

April 8, 2025

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I also write my texts in English, does it not help to understand what i mean? Should i write them mixed? One sentence in chinese and then the translation? Thanks for correcting!

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Qian_9

April 8, 2025

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Sorry, I didn't realise that there was English text beneath it.😂

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我现在二十二岁,仍然不知道我想做什么工作。

Hello everyone, today i talk about things i hate. I am 22 now and still don't know who i wanna work as. All occupation don't seem to be interesting. This condition makes me really annoyed. Second thins is food. I really hate thinking about what to eat every day, so i just go sleep. I really like eating chicken, but i can't eat chicken every day. The thing i hate the most is YouTube advertisement. I think that even when i will look for "how to save a person" video, i will still have to watch advertisement. Advertisement in Germany is stupid Bye bye

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在德国的广告很笨。


德国的广告很低质量

Youtube在德国的广告很笨。

德国的广告很笨。

4月7号


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什么职业都不看来有意思。


什么职业都不看来有看起来没意思。

什么职业都不看来有意思怎么提得起兴趣

什么职业都不看来看起来都没有意思。

这种条件使我真的腻味。


这种条件使我真的腻味。

有点没懂你想说什么,猜你想说:我现在的情况真的让我不知所措/这样的处境让我不知道该做什么

这种条件使我真的腻味状况真的让人讨厌

“腻味”这个词大概是个方言,比较小众。

种条件使我真的腻味。

第二个事情是吃饭。


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我真的讨厌每天都想我要吃什么,因此我就去睡觉。


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我真的讨厌每天都想我吃什么,因此我就去睡觉。

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我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都。


我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都吃鸡

我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都吃鸡

我很喜欢吃鸡,但是我也不可以吃鸡每天都吃鸡

我最讨厌的事情是在YouTube 的广告。


我最讨厌的事情是在东西是YouTube 的广告。

我最讨厌的事情是在YouTube 上看到的广告。

我最讨厌的事情是YouTube 的广告。

我觉得即使我寻求 ”怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归得看广告。


我觉得即使我寻求 ”怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归得看广告。

猜你想说:即使我在看“如何救人/怎么就一个人”这个视频的时候,都要看广告。

我觉得即使我寻求 ”找“怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归还是得看广告。

我觉得即使我寻求 ”怎么救一个人”视频的时候,总归得看广告。

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