I hadve been feeling depressed for the past few days, and I didn’haven't really feelt like doing anything. I have been feeling depressed for the past few days, and I haven't really felt like doing anything.

It feels like this is supposed to be present and recent past. Otherwise, I would specify at the beginning to say that this happened a long time ago. Like, "This all happened a few years ago."

I hadve been feeling depressed for the past few days, and I didn’haven't really feelt like doing anything. I have been feeling depressed for the past few days, and I haven't really felt like doing anything.

I sometimes worriedy that if I said thistalk about it, people might think I was'm just weak or lazy. I sometimes worry that if I talk about it, people might think I'm just weak or lazy.

This sounds a bit more natural to me.

I sometimes worriedy that if I saidexpress this, people might think I was'm just weak or lazy. I sometimes worry that if I express this, people might think I'm just weak or lazy.

During thatis time, I came across the music of Dead or Alive on YouTube. During this time, I came across the music of Dead or Alive on YouTube.

During thatis time, I came across the music of the band 'Dead or Alive' on YouTube. During this time, I came across the music of the band 'Dead or Alive' on YouTube.

I had known about the band before, but what I happened to find waswas that I stumbled upon/discovered/watched an interview with Pete Burns when he visited Japan. I had known about the band before, but what happened was that I stumbled upon/discovered/watched an interview with Pete Burns when he visited Japan.

I gave you suggestions to sound more natural.

He gave off a slightly cold impression, but I thought it was amazing/fascinating that they had built a relationship where they couldwere able to work together for so long. He gave off a slightly cold impression, but I thought it was amazing/fascinating that they had built a relationship where they were able to work together for so long.

I've spent my days doing nothing, just watching their videos over and over again, and it has helped calm me down. I've spent my days doing nothing, just watching their videos over and over again, and it has helped calm me down.

I hoped I would've begun to hope that I'll start to feel motivated again soon. I've begun to hope that I'll start to feel motivated again soon.