June 5, 2026
Most of the time I prefer listening rather than talking. That is due to me being not exposed to a freely expressive environments. As I grew up home with no one to talk to. Usually, my parents are out working in the day, therefore I spend my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time. But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people but it is that I over stress about what people will say about me. At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoy them although out side of home I become reserved and doesn't interact much. I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, insulted, or people being mean to me, I hesitate.
That is due to me being not exposed to a freely expressive environments.
That is due to me being not exposed to freely expressive environments.
As I grew up home with no one to talk to at home.
As I grew up with no one to talk to at home.
This would also make more sense merged with the last sentence, it can't really stand on its own.
Usually, my parents awere out working in the day, therefore I spendt my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time.
Usually, my parents were out working in the day, therefore I spent my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time.
But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people butrather it is that I over stress about what people will say about me.
But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people rather it is that I over stress about what people will say about me.
At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoys them although out side of home I become reserved and doesn't interact with people much.
At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoys them although outside of home I become reserved and don't interact with people much.
Might be better to replace 'them' with 'people'?
I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate. I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate.
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Most of the errors I noticed were a bit distant from what they didn't agree with so this is pretty darn good! I even had to read it over twice to realize some of them were there. It might read as more natural with some more contractions.
Most of the time I prefer listening rather than talking.
Thatis is due to me not being not exposed to a freely expressive environments.
This is due to me not being exposed to a freely expressive environment.
- environment is singular (use of singular pronoun 'a'), contrastly, you could say "...exposed to freely expressive environments"
- the word 'not' goes before any verb ending with -ing (ex: not going, not being, not believing)
Ast home I grew up home with no one to talk to.
At home I grew up with no one to talk to.
- It is typical in English to start sentences with the prepositional phrase (ex: at home, last night, yesterday, etc.) ... this helps your meaning be clear
- 'At' is the correct preposition (not 'as')
Usually, my parents are out working during the day, therefore I spend my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time. Usually, my parents are out working during the day, therefore I spend my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time.
- 'In' usually points to a specific time (In the morning, In 2020, etc.) while 'During' refers to a larger block of time. You would also use 'during' when describing an action that was done continually (parents working throughout the day, going to school throughout the year, etc.)
But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people but it is that I over, I just stress aboutover what people will say about me.
But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people, I just stress over what people will say about me.
- Starting with "I just" is a defensive sentence structure. You use it when trying to justify something (I just ate one cookie, I'm just nervous, etc.) It provides an emotional context to your writing
- A more natural way to phrase this sentence would be: "It's not that I don't like interacting with people; it's just that I worry too much about what they think of me." <- This is more common in English, however your's is also okay.
At home, I am the one who will not stop talking and annoy theming others, although out side of home I become reserved and doesn't interact as much.
At home, I am the one who will not stop talking and annoying others, although outside of home I become reserved and don't interact as much.
- outside is one word, not two
- 'doesn't' is a contraction of "does not", "don't" is "do not"
- since 'talking' is conjugated in the present test, then "annoying" must also be
- I'm not sure who you are referring to when you say "them." When you use impersonal general pronouns, try to identify the subject (friends? family?) either earlier in the sentence or earlier in the paragraph
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Overall, your writing is very good. I tried to be specific with my reasons for the corrections.
Do Your Prefer Talking or Listening ?
Do You Prefer Talking or Listening ?
Most of the time I prefer listening rather than talking.
That is due to me being not exposed to a freely expressive environments.
That is due to me being not exposed to a freely expressive environment.
AsIt is because I grew up at home with no one to talk to.
It is because I grew up at home with no one to talk to.
"As" is not often used to start a sentence unless the explanation is giving in that sentence. You could say: "As I grew up at home with no one to talk to, I was not exposed to a freely expressive environment."
Usually, my parents awere out working in the day, therefore I spendt my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time.
Usually, my parents were out working in the day, therefore I spent my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time.
But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people, but it is that I over stress about what people will say about me. But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people, but it is that I over stress about what people will say about me.
At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoy them, although out side of our home I become reserved and doesn't interact much.
At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoy them, although outside of our home I become reserved and don't interact much.
I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, or insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate. I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, or insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate.
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Good writing! I think it's good to remember that most people will not mock you. :)
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Do Your Prefer Talking or Listening ?
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Most of the time I prefer listening rather than talking. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That is due to me being not exposed to a freely expressive environments.
That is due to me being not exposed to a freely expressive environment
Th - environment is singular (use of singular pronoun 'a'), contrastly, you could say "...exposed to freely expressive environments" - the word 'not' goes before any verb ending with -ing (ex: not going, not being, not believing)
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As I grew up home with no one to talk to.
"As" is not often used to start a sentence unless the explanation is giving in that sentence. You could say: "As I grew up at home with no one to talk to, I was not exposed to a freely expressive environment."
A - It is typical in English to start sentences with the prepositional phrase (ex: at home, last night, yesterday, etc.) ... this helps your meaning be clear - 'At' is the correct preposition (not 'as')
As I grew up This would also make more sense merged with the last sentence, it can't really stand on its own. |
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Usually, my parents are out working in the day, therefore I spend my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time.
Usually, my parents Usually, my parents are out working during the day, therefore I spend my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time. Usually, my parents are out working during the day, therefore I spend my time alone at home because I did not have friends at that time. - 'In' usually points to a specific time (In the morning, In 2020, etc.) while 'During' refers to a larger block of time. You would also use 'during' when describing an action that was done continually (parents working throughout the day, going to school throughout the year, etc.)
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But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people but it is that I over stress about what people will say about me. But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people, but it is that I over stress about what people will say about me. But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people, but it is that I over stress about what people will say about me.
But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people - Starting with "I just" is a defensive sentence structure. You use it when trying to justify something (I just ate one cookie, I'm just nervous, etc.) It provides an emotional context to your writing - A more natural way to phrase this sentence would be: "It's not that I don't like interacting with people; it's just that I worry too much about what they think of me." <- This is more common in English, however your's is also okay.
But, it is not that I don't like to interact and communicate with people |
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At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoy them although out side of home I become reserved and doesn't interact much.
At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoy them, although out
At home, I am the one who will not stop talking and annoy - outside is one word, not two - 'doesn't' is a contraction of "does not", "don't" is "do not" - since 'talking' is conjugated in the present test, then "annoying" must also be - I'm not sure who you are referring to when you say "them." When you use impersonal general pronouns, try to identify the subject (friends? family?) either earlier in the sentence or earlier in the paragraph
At home I am the one who will not stop talking and annoys them although out Might be better to replace 'them' with 'people'? |
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I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, insulted, or people being mean to me, I hesitate. I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, or insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate. I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, or insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate. I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate. I always feel the urge to talk and laugh with others but because I am afraid of being mocked, insulted, or of people being mean to me, I hesitate. |
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