Feb. 6, 2026
Yesterday was my day off.
I was thinking of going shopping, when I go shopping, I end up buying something.
So, I ended up watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.
The TV shows was about Storage Auctions held in California, USA, it features a Japanese comedian
and Jesse from the Japanese idol group SixTONES.
The luggage is put up for auction without checking its contents, so in the past, they’ve
sometimes found incredible treasures.
This time, the contents were comedian and Jesse competed over to see who could make more money.
The other contents were about McDonald's fries.
The content was about poutine, which originated in Canada, and French fries originated in Belgium.
It looked like the poutine was very good. It was so interesting that time flew by.
昨日は仕事がお休みでした。
買い物でも行こうかと思いましたが、買い物に行くと何かしら買ってしまいます。
なので、お金の節約のため家で録画をしていたテレビ番組を見ることにしました。
アメリカのカリフォルニアで行われるストレージオークションについての番組で、日本人の
コメディアンと日本のSixTONESというアイドルグループの一人、ジェシーが参加をしていました。
荷物の中を確認しないままオークションにかけられるので、過去にはすごいお宝があったみたい
ですね。
今回はコメディアンとジェシーのどちらが儲かるかで勝負した内容でした。
その他の内容はマクドナルドのフライドポテトについてでした。
カナダ発祥のフライドポテト「プーティン」やフライドポテトはベルギー発祥などの内容
でした。
とても面白かったので時間が経つのが早かったです。
About Storage Auction
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I was thinking of going shopping, but when I go shopping, I end up buying something.
So, I ended up watching the TV shows I had recorded to save money at home.
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It looked like the poutine was very good.
It was so interesting that time flew by.
About Storage Auction
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Nice work! I made a few adjustments! Lmk (let me know) if anything requires and explanation!
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Good job writing such a long post!
One thing I miss about Canada is the poutine! They actually have it at many different restaurants including KFC. Some restaurants even started adding other flavors to the fries such as "Butter Chicken Fries". 😆
About Storage Auctions
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Well done! It sounds like you had fun watching your recorded shows!
About Storage Auctions
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