Hi :) Hi :)

Hello :)

iI want to (or wanna) tell you about my evening. I want to (or wanna) tell you about my evening.

For dinner iI tried a new recipe, i. It was a simple one but i have to tell you,: it was so good!! For dinner I tried a new recipe. It was a simple one but i have to tell you: it was so good!!

For dinner i tried a new recipe, it was a simple one, but i have to tell you, it was so good!! For dinner i tried a new recipe, it was a simple one, but i have to tell you it was so good!!

I like the commas better in this position.

And then iI ate a small piece of chocolate with coffee flavor. And then I ate a small piece of chocolate with coffee flavor.

And then i ate a small piece of chocolate with coffee -flavorured chocolate. And then i ate a small piece of coffee-flavoured chocolate.

Più naturale mettere la descrizione del cioccolato prima della parola, piuttosto usare la parola "with" dopo. 'u' in 'flavoUr' è un'opzione meno Americano.

After dinner iI brushed my teeth, did my skincare and bodycare, and iI put on my pajamas. After dinner I brushed my teeth, did my skincare and bodycare, and I put on my pajamas.

After dinner i brushed my teeth, did my skincare and bodycare, and i put on my payjamas. After dinner i brushed my teeth, did my skincare and bodycare, and i put on my pyjamas.

Pajamas?? Forse Americano... Pyjamas Britannico. Anche meglio: "jammie" o "jim-jams"

Now I'm in my bed and I'm writing this post. Now I'm in my bed writing this post.

and I'm <---- repetition, not needed.

Then iI think i will read a book until i'llI close my eyes to sleep. Then I think i will read a book until I close my eyes to sleep.

Then i think i will read a book until i'llI close my eyes to sleep. Then i think i will read a book until I close my eyes to sleep.

Non riesco spiegare perché ma sembra più naturale senza la parola "will".