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Even though "ticket" and "pricing" aren't proper nouns, they should be capitalized because they are in a title. The only things in a title that shouldn't be capitalized are articles (a, an, the), short prepositions (of, to, in, on, for), and coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or). So, if your title is 'The Price of Tickets,' the word 'of' stays lowercase, but everything else gets capitalized.

As the World Cup event approaches, the ticket prices rise (as well). As the World Cup approaches, the ticket prices rise (as well).

As the World Cup event approach, thees, ticket prices riseare rising. As the World Cup event approaches, ticket prices are rising.

As the World Cup event approaches, the ticket pricescontinue to rise. As the World Cup event approaches, the ticket continue to rise.

As the World Cup event approaches, the ticket prices rise. As the World Cup approaches, the ticket prices rise.

"World Cup" is a globally recognized proper noun for the tournament and adding event after it is a bit redundant (like saying 'the Super Bowl game')

It has been a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket platforms selling theses tickets, which takes fully advantage of people willing to attend to the official match games. It has been a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket platforms selling these tickets, which takes full advantage of people willing to attend the official matches.

It has been aA new pricing strategy has been adopted by the ticket platforms that are selling theses tickets, whichand it really takes fully advantage of people willingho want to attend to the official match games. A new pricing strategy has been adopted by the ticket platforms that are selling these tickets, and it really takes advantage of people who want to attend the official match games.

"fully" isn't wrong in context, but "really" is more commonly used. "willing to" is a little bit more passive, "want to" expresses that they are more actively interested in attending the match.

It has been a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket platforms selling theses tickets, which takes fully advantage of people willing to attend to the official match games. It has been a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket platforms selling theses tickets, which takes full advantage of people willing to attend to the official match games.

It has beenis a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket selling platforms selling theses tickets, which takes fully advantage of people willanting to attend to the official match games. It is a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket selling platforms, which takes full advantage of people wanting to attend official matches.

Someone reading your passage would already know that you are talking about a ticket selling platform so you wouldn't need to say "ticket platform selling these tickets." Although "which" works fine here, "to" connects "pricing strategy" and the reason why they adopted it better. " You need the word full to describe the noun advantage. You can say "fully takes advantage of" but "takes full advantage of" sounds more natural. These is already a plural marker, "theses"is the plural form of thesis (a long college essay). "Willing" means that somebody will do something, not that they necessarily want to. Want is the correct word meaning "to have a desire or wish for something." You "attend" games, but if you "attend to" something, that means that you are taking care of it. "Match games" they both mean the same thing, just pick one.

It has been a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket platforms selling theses tickets, which takes fully advantage of people willing to attend to the official match games. It has been a new pricing strategy adopted by ticket platforms selling theses tickets, which takes ful advantage of people willing to attend to the official match games.

Not so long ago, the prices followehad a fixed price from the momenstart of the purchase up to theing period until near end of it, perhaps, when it is not sold out,where it could go on a sale with a considerable discount. Not so long ago, the prices had a fixed price from the start of the purchasing period until near end of it, where it could go on a sale with a considerable discount.

Not so long ago, the pricescost followed a fixed price from the moment of the purormat, where the price of a ticket would not chasnge up to the near end of it, perhaps, when it intil nearly game time. Maybe, if the game was not sold out, it ctickets would go on a sale withat a considerable discount. Not so long ago, the cost followed a fixed price format, where the price of a ticket would not change until nearly game time. Maybe, if the game was not sold out, tickets would go on sale at a considerable discount.

Your original sentence became a run-on sentence at "perhaps". A run-on sentence is 2 or more sentences that are improperly connected together. I broke it into 2 sentences to make it easier to read. Also swapped perhaps to maybe, since perhaps is a little more philosophical and maybe implies more that the situation is evaluated on a case-by-case basis

Not so long ago, the prices followed a fixed price from the moment of the purchase up to the near end of it, perhaps, when it is not sold out, it could go on a sale with a considerable discount. Not so long ago, the prices followed a fixed price from the moment of the purchase up to the near end of it, perhaps, when it is not sold out, it could go on a sale with a considerable discount.

Not stoo long ago, the prices followed awere fixed price from the moment of the purchase up to the near end of it, perhaps, when it is not sold out, itthey went on sale to the last moment you could buy it. During that period, tickets could go on a sale with a considerable discount. Not too long ago, the prices were fixed from the moment they went on sale to the last moment you could buy it. During that period, tickets could go on sale with a considerable discount.

"Not so long ago" is a narrative phrase commonly used in stories, fairytales, and history books. It implies that the trend is over and if platforms are still using this strategy then it creates a confusing timeline. "followed a fixed price" sounds awkward, as following gives a sense of movement that fixed contradicts. "near the end of it" sounds like the tickets are dying or being made obsolete, which is not the case. The sentence should end after "it" and "perhaps" should start a new sentence because otherwise it is a run-on sentence that seems to try and connect two separate ideas "perhaps, when it is not sold out" is fine when you have some sort of suggestion after it:"perhaps, when it is not sold out, we can go buy a ticket." But what you are trying to describe is the period where tickets are being sold, so "During that period" or "While the tickets are being sold" works better. "it could go on a sale with a considerable discount." is an awkward sentence also because we are so far removed from from the topic, "tickets," that "it" shouldn't be used. Every so often, you should remind the reader of the topic because if you go so long without saying it, the reader might forget what the topic was. "a sale" in this context is wrong because "on sale" is a fixed expression, there is no need for the article "a."

Not so long ago, the prices followed a fixed price from the moment of the purchase up to the near the end of itsale, perhaps, when it is not sold out, it could go on a sale with a considerable discount. Not so long ago, the prices followed a fixed price from the moment of the purchase up to near the end of sale, perhaps, when it is not sold out, it could go on a sale with a considerable discount.

However, now it has changed a, where the price of a ticket is evaluated by the demand, thus the more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing a price fluctuation to an extreme never seen before. However, now it has changed, where the price of a ticket is evaluated by demand, thus the more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing a price fluctuation to an extreme never seen before.

However, now it has changed and the price of a ticket is evaluatdecided by the demand, thus th. Because more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing athese tickets, they end up being more expensive. This causes price fluctuations to an extreme never seen before seen. However, now it has changed and the price of a ticket is decided by demand. Because more people want these tickets, they end up being more expensive. This causes price fluctuations to an extreme never before seen.

Another run-on sentence. The remedy is the same: take a sentence that is too long and break it up into pieces. This type of pricing format has recently gotten a new English name: surge pricing. This phrase is probably less than a year old so it isn't widely adopted yet.

However, now it has changed aso that the price of ticket is evaluated by the demand, thus the more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing a price fluctuation to a extremes never seen before. However, now it has changed so that the price of ticket is evaluated by the demand, thus the more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing a price fluctuation extremes never seen before.

However, now it has changed aBut now, the price of a ticket is evaluated byproportional to the demand, thus t. The more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing a price fluctuation to a extreme never seen beforeleading to unprecedented price increases. But now, the price of a ticket is proportional to the demand. The more people want it, the more expensive it will be, leading to unprecedented price increases.

If you are going to use however, it should not be followed with now. You can say, "However, this is no longer the case. Now the price..." or "But now," to illustrate contrast. "evaluated by the demand" sounds awkward, "proportional to the demand" or "determined by the demand" is better because it uses active instead of passive voice. You don't need the word "Thus" here and you should start a new sentence because its a run-on sentence. "causing a price inflation" is again, grammatically correct, but sounds weird using "leading to" sounds more natural. "fluctuating" means rising and falling, something is changing drastically, but i think what you mean to say is that the price increased, not that the prices are unstable. "to a extreme never seen before" is fine, just change "a" to "an" because extreme starts with a vowel. However, it is better corrected to unprecedented which means the same thing in less words.

However, now it has changed as the price of ticket is evaluated by the demand, thuso the more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing a price fluctuation to an extreme never seen before. However, now it has changed as the price of ticket is evaluated by the demand, so the more people want it, the more expensive it will be, causing a price fluctuation to an extreme never seen before.

"an extreme" rather than "a extreme" because "extreme" starts with a vowel sound

Several people on the internet have been complaining about this. Several people on the internet have been complaining about this.

Several people on the internet have been complaining about this. Several people on the internet have been complaining about this.

Several people on the internet have been complaining this.about this problem. Several people on the internet have been complaining about this problem.

SeveralMany people on the internet have been complaining about this. Many people on the internet have been complaining about this.

"Several" is used when describing a small amount of something, but I'm sure more than a small amount of people are complaining. "Many" is a better word choice.

Several people on the internet have been complaining about this. Several people on the internet have been complaining about this.

They say, that the tickets are overpriced and the event itself doesn`'t take into consideration all of the others costs to participate oin it, such as transportation, accommodation, food and others expenses aside the event tickets, etc. They say that the tickets are overpriced and the event itself doesn't take into consideration all of the other costs to participate in it, such as transportation, accommodation, food, etc.

They say, that the tickets are overpriced and that the event itself doesn`'t take into consideration all the others costs to participate on itpeople have to pay to attend, such as transportation, accommodation, food, and others expenses aside the event tickets. They say that the tickets are overpriced and that the event itself doesn't take into consideration all the other costs people have to pay to attend, such as transportation, accommodation, food, and other expenses.

Participate in the context of a sporting event can be confusing, since participants are usually the players only. People that go to watch the event are attendees, so using the word "attend" is more clear.

They say, that the tickets are overpriced and the event itself doesn`'t take into consideration all others costs to participate oin it, such as transportation, accommodation, food, and others expenses aside the event tickets. They say that the tickets are overpriced and the event itself doesn't take into consideration all other costs to participate in it, such as transportation, food, and other expenses.

No comma needed after "they say" its not a transition word or separate clause. "others"- other doesn't need to be plural when used like this, "where are the others" is one of the only instances where other should capital. When used like that the true meaning is "other ones," therefore, "other ones costs" doesn't make sense. "on" is not the correct word, we participate in something not on something. On implies you are physically atop something, like sitting on a chair "accommodation" doesn't mean what you think it does. In travel, business, or daily life, it typically means a place to live, stay, or sleep, like an apartment, hotel, or lodge. In workplaces, schools, or legal settings it is a special change or tweak made to help someone to succeed because of a disability, medical need, or religious belief, like a wheelchair ramp or vegan options. "aside from the event tickets" is a redundant statement because we already know that you are talking about those "other costs"

They say, that the tickets are overpriced and the event itself doesn`t take into consideration all others costs to participate onattending it, such as transportation, accommodation, food and others expenses aside from the event tickets. They say, that the tickets are overpriced and the event itself doesn`t take into consideration all others costs to attending it, such as transportation, accommodation, food and others expenses aside from the event tickets.

"participate in the event" would be if you were a player or staff member in the world cup. Just watching it is more naturally described as "attending" it.

The FIFA organization hasn`'t been able to properly give a satisfying solution to this matter yet. The FIFA organization hasn't been able to give a satisfying solution to this matter yet.

The FIFA organization hasn`t been able to't properly given a satisfying solution to this matter yet. The FIFA organization hasn't properly given a satisfying solution to this matter yet.

fFor myself, I think it`'s a predatory strategy, because companies nowadays exploit people's behavior on social media, namely FOMO, "Fear Of Missing Out", which makes them more inclined to accept without questioning all these different obnoxious plans from enterprises to drain every penny out of consumers. For myself, I think it's a predatory strategy, because companies nowadays exploit people's behavior on social media, namely FOMO, "Fear Of Missing Out", which makes them more inclined to accept without questioning all these different obnoxious plans from enterprises to drain every penny out of consumers.

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Run-on sentence.

for myselfPersonally, I think it`s a predatory strategy, because companies nowadays exploit peoples behaviour on social media, namely FOMO, Fear Of Missing Out, which make them more inclined to accept without questioning all these different obnoxious plans from enterprises to drain every penny out of consumers. Personally, I think it`s a predatory strategy, because companies nowadays exploit peoples behaviour on social media, namely FOMO, Fear Of Missing Out, which make them more inclined to accept without questioning all these different obnoxious plans from enterprises to drain every penny out of consumers.

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Capitalize the first word of the sentence. No comma needed between "strategy" and "between." "nowadays" should go before "companies" because it sounds awkward the other way around. "Peoples" needs an apostrophe because the behavior belongs to the people, its possessive. When you list an acronym, you normally use the full name and then the acronym associated with it. This is a run-on sentence that should be separated after "Fear of Missing out," which should not be capitalized because it isn't a title. Also, when you introduce "FOMO" you are introducing a new idea so you should start a new sentence. "make" should be plural because "FOMO" is singular "different obnoxious plans" sounds awkward, native english speakers wouldn't say it like that. You typically don't describe companies plans as obnoxious because they although they are bad, they are typically described as "unfair" or "greedy" rather than "loud and rude"

fFor myself, I think it`s a predatory strategy, because companies nowadays exploit peoples behavior on social media, namely FOMO, Fear Of Missing Out, which makes them more inclined to accept without questioning all these different obnoxious plans from enterprises to drain every penny out of consumers. For myself, I think it`s a predatory strategy, because companies nowadays exploit peoples behavior on social media, namely FOMO, Fear Of Missing Out, which makes them more inclined to accept without questioning all these different obnoxious plans from enterprises to drain every penny out of consumers.